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Game Of Thrones I Control Metal
1.82 (12 ratings)
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Kole tranmigrated into the world of thegale of thrones with three wishes witchare
Super-Soldier Physique
Rapid Regeneration
Metal Manipulation (Magneto-style)
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Genuinely the worst MC, I’ve read. The author is a dumba** who tries to constantly convince you that bc the mc is mute, he cant do anything. Literally the only restriction MC has is that when he starts talking about the future his words come out as random poems. And these poems some how cage the MC. MC literally has the strength of cpt america and developing powers of magneto. Even if he cant express sh*t through words, he can just do whatever he wants. Yet instead we got a cry baby, subby bottom boy for an MC. The other review is also right. MC couldnt score higher than a rock on a test. I recommend for your sakes, DONT WASTE YOUR TIME READING THIS DOG SH*T!
The story has a lot of potential, the concept is good but the excecution is very bad the mc is supposed to be really strong but acts as a pathetic loser had a brain of a 2 year old. Some character are also very badly written and there a a lot of holes in the story. Don't be discouraged but you should really reconsider how you want to make this story
Im giving some some mainly just because the author was able to put In the work to write but other than that its a big no for me but hopefully this encourages him to make something better which I believe he or she can do
An effort is an effort and kudos to the author for creating a story This could have been a good story but there are too many inconsistencies and gaps in the story 1. The author is trying to approach with a mysterious and cryptic style of story telling. Which of course I will not argue or comment over. Specifically the author restrains the MC from being an active participant in the plot regardless if he is knowledgeable aboutbhis powers Unfortunately the story telling approach has a lot of gaps. MC cannot inform the other characters about the future but he can certainly act on preventing it which he did for one plot but for the others it seems the Author is trying hard to make the MC looked restrained but is inconsistent with EVENTUALLY showing his powerful abilities 2. The author's direction of the MC is so focused about the his personal hurdles and challenges that he forgots/avoids an arc about the MC developing his powers which is not actually a restraint but only about informing the other characters. This is a missed opportunity by the author. To a stretch the author could have made the MC explore Valyran Steel whatsoever Its still 12 chapters in, and I am hopeful the story development becomes better as the concept of the story is interesting especially with the combination of powers of the MC
Weak-ass goody two shoes mc. Not for me. Certainly disappointed. Came here for the story of what would you do if you have certain powers.. and you gave us nothing.
Whoever wrote this must have done so under the influence. The MC is OP but acts like a member of the alphabet gang. He tries to keep his powers a secret while showing off his powers? MC's can be dumb but this one takes it to blithering idiot dumb. Let's make everything overly dramatic because why not. If you're a Game of Thrones fan, then you might want to avoid this hot garbage.
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I don't understand how those who gave this 2 stars are so generous. Mc brags, acts cocky, whines and does nothing. Even the Weirwood trees are better than Mc.
MC keeps whining about things happening while doing nothing to stop them. MC tries to keep his power secret but constantly uses them in front of other people. Everyone is distrustful of him but they keep him around in Winterfell as if he was a born Stark. Other characters behave in wildly out of character ways. And there's now some random sword-wielding chick called Mira in Winterfell for some reason. So stupid.
I don’t understand how the Mc can be this much of a wet shoebox. He does nothing and I mean the seriously. This isn’t a fan fiction this is sad.
Why? Author, why? Why is 10-year-old Bran Stark smarter than MC in your story? Not to mention the others and the very, very strangely acting Tyrion Lannister!?!?!?