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Write a reviewI really love reading GOT fic's. The story might have a few issues here and there, but I never read a story thatβs truly perfect and honestly so far I am satisfied with the story and it has steady updates, also I am very thankful of you Author-san for working hard and providing us with such an amazing story. Thank You
Thought I would change the writing after seeing as the quality has improved over time and has only become more interesting and engaging as time goes on. Surprising how negative and toxic some people are on this site in the comments, probably too used to the alternativehistory community
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It's a fairly good GoT fic. Not the best I've read since there are ones that are just s-tier and can easily rival grandpa George. It's a good casual read but somewhat slow and a few of the facts you've chosen just does not sit with me. Who is he love interest btw?
At first the MC was only talking and dreaming without actually doing anything, and when the chapters where he actually did something, they were all things that he did without explaining how he knew to do them. I mean, he didn't have any background on Earth where he was a genius or learned somewhere (for example how to make a good sewer system, or create bricks and building houses). So when he reincarnated, without access to Google, I can't understand how we knew to do them and create those things... And for me this logical flaw ruined the story.
really liked this novel till writer went crazy with ironborn, and for some reason need to add more r*pe to it, made me feel sick thinking that someone wrote this to get a point or feeling across to reader
It was awesome. It not like your typical MC that after reborn/reincarnation/transmigration whatever it is at the start has a way to be OP or with cheat. Character and world building was awesome, I just have one problem......not enough chapters π
The lack of planning really shows. Like the expansion is too fast and unrealistic, even with magic. He (a Northern) decided to f-off to essos and become a horse lord. It's just crazy.
Just goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Trashiest Fanfic. The MC is a stupid idiot. He has the plot advantage, knows all the characters and still make mistake. Even though it may be a fantasy world 7 year old child kills adults in a battle. Too much trash like that. The MC is a pushover any one can walk over him.
This story is epic I love it so much. Please post again donβt leave us hang I want another chapter just one more.
Complete powerwank, unrealistic af. The writing is not that good and simple Words are often misspelled which ruin the immersion for me. Mc is also a gary sue who vastly improves his lands way to fast, GOT is set in a medieval world and building the necessary industries takes a long time. However, i only read the first 10 chapters before I gave up on it. It might have improved but i doubt it. I saw in some other reviews that the author also doesnt like the quality of the first chapters so maybe he could rewrite them if he wants to. π€·ββοΈ
Good but it's been dropped. Read it only if you just love the ASOIAF world and don't mind being blue balled by an unfinished story.
Excelente, buena historia buen desarrollo, buen protagonista, espero siga siendo asΓ de buena, ni me imagino lo que se biene en los prΓ³ximos capΓtulos
Me gusta la Historia gran desarrollo seguΓ cΓ³mo vas Bro cuando actualizas la historia Bro no la dejes es muy buena historia hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Reveal SpoilerEvaluation: Sparkling Gem! WQ: WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5. SD: With an average to fast pace of development without affecting the story & MC progression. Less plot holes as author-san make sure to cope up with it in a timely manner which broaden the plot. 5/5 CD: MC is cool with a chaotic-neutral persona which abides the ASOIF era. Family-first thinking is kinda unique which helps MC in his character improvement. 5/5 US: The only downside is that author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. 3/5 WB: ASOIF, closely following timeline/canon but strictly deviates to create a rather unique plot. Could've explored more of Planetos as it isnt widely covered. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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Wow wish the author would write more. This one is amazing. You will not be disappointed in the 109 chapters.
It has a rough start, the first few chapters are not good and the age of the MC is quite unrealistic, BUT it quickly becomes an incredible ride, the author improved a LOT through the chapters. This fic is really good of course there are few 'unrealistic' things that happen to give the MC a baseline but, the rest is pure gold.
please start back riding I love this fan fiction. you have one of a story development and I even like you original characters and I know if you sit down and think about it you will have an awesome spin on the story
Una delle migliori FF del trono di spade. Storia ed MC ben costruiti. Una FF stupenda e che consiglio assolutamente di leggere fino alla fine. L'inizio per alcuni puΓ² essere lento e noioso, ma piΓΉ continuerai a leggere piΓΉ ti penti che la storia non sia piΓΉ lunga da quanto ti piacerΓ
I really love this fanfic! It has a really well tought through story and a lot of immersion in the GOT fantasy world. Known characters are integrated into this fanfic in a plausible and believable way. It is well written, even though a editor would be very appreciated to correct the grammatical errors and the sometimes missing meaning of some paragraphs... but all in all it is a fanfic I can recommand to everyone that loves the GOT world and doesn't need a transmigrator MC with cheatsystem. I just hope this fanfic doesn't get dropped as after chapter 100 the releases of New chapters are taking more and more time... either way, thanks for this pleasant story so far dear author!
maybe the greatest Got fic we have ever had the opportunity to read, you recommend to anyone which like a more realistic one with slow pace but very well written.
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Honestly the best got fic ive ever read. The main charecter is clever but is not perfect which is show cased every once and a while but never shoved down our throats I highly recommend this to any got fan.
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] "Bro it's been 4 Month's did you die or what?"
is this on hiatus?.............................................................................................................................................
Love this fanfic. Good world building and story development. A fun read that really entertains. The frequent updates keep the story rolling well. I hope the author keeps it up. The MC seems a over powered but the challenges in the story are scaled up to meet his skill level. The author seems to be taking the story in a new direction a bit different then the many SI mary sue stories we have all read before. Go house Dustin.
I really love reading GOT fic's. The story might have a few issues here and there, but I never read a story thatβs truly perfect and honestly so far I am satisfied with the story and it has steady updates, also I am very thankful of you Author-san for working hard and providing us with such an amazing story. Thank You
Thought I would change the writing after seeing as the quality has improved over time and has only become more interesting and engaging as time goes on. Surprising how negative and toxic some people are on this site in the comments, probably too used to the alternativehistory community
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It's a fairly good GoT fic. Not the best I've read since there are ones that are just s-tier and can easily rival grandpa George. It's a good casual read but somewhat slow and a few of the facts you've chosen just does not sit with me. Who is he love interest btw?
At first the MC was only talking and dreaming without actually doing anything, and when the chapters where he actually did something, they were all things that he did without explaining how he knew to do them. I mean, he didn't have any background on Earth where he was a genius or learned somewhere (for example how to make a good sewer system, or create bricks and building houses). So when he reincarnated, without access to Google, I can't understand how we knew to do them and create those things... And for me this logical flaw ruined the story.
really liked this novel till writer went crazy with ironborn, and for some reason need to add more r*pe to it, made me feel sick thinking that someone wrote this to get a point or feeling across to reader
It was awesome. It not like your typical MC that after reborn/reincarnation/transmigration whatever it is at the start has a way to be OP or with cheat. Character and world building was awesome, I just have one problem......not enough chapters π
The lack of planning really shows. Like the expansion is too fast and unrealistic, even with magic. He (a Northern) decided to f-off to essos and become a horse lord. It's just crazy.
Just goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Trashiest Fanfic. The MC is a stupid idiot. He has the plot advantage, knows all the characters and still make mistake. Even though it may be a fantasy world 7 year old child kills adults in a battle. Too much trash like that. The MC is a pushover any one can walk over him.
This story is epic I love it so much. Please post again donβt leave us hang I want another chapter just one more.
Complete powerwank, unrealistic af. The writing is not that good and simple Words are often misspelled which ruin the immersion for me. Mc is also a gary sue who vastly improves his lands way to fast, GOT is set in a medieval world and building the necessary industries takes a long time. However, i only read the first 10 chapters before I gave up on it. It might have improved but i doubt it. I saw in some other reviews that the author also doesnt like the quality of the first chapters so maybe he could rewrite them if he wants to. π€·ββοΈ
Good but it's been dropped. Read it only if you just love the ASOIAF world and don't mind being blue balled by an unfinished story.
Excelente, buena historia buen desarrollo, buen protagonista, espero siga siendo asΓ de buena, ni me imagino lo que se biene en los prΓ³ximos capΓtulos
Me gusta la Historia gran desarrollo seguΓ cΓ³mo vas Bro cuando actualizas la historia Bro no la dejes es muy buena historia hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Reveal SpoilerEvaluation: Sparkling Gem! WQ: WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5. SD: With an average to fast pace of development without affecting the story & MC progression. Less plot holes as author-san make sure to cope up with it in a timely manner which broaden the plot. 5/5 CD: MC is cool with a chaotic-neutral persona which abides the ASOIF era. Family-first thinking is kinda unique which helps MC in his character improvement. 5/5 US: The only downside is that author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. 3/5 WB: ASOIF, closely following timeline/canon but strictly deviates to create a rather unique plot. Could've explored more of Planetos as it isnt widely covered. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
Well it wasn't worth my time~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wow wish the author would write more. This one is amazing. You will not be disappointed in the 109 chapters.
It has a rough start, the first few chapters are not good and the age of the MC is quite unrealistic, BUT it quickly becomes an incredible ride, the author improved a LOT through the chapters. This fic is really good of course there are few 'unrealistic' things that happen to give the MC a baseline but, the rest is pure gold.
please start back riding I love this fan fiction. you have one of a story development and I even like you original characters and I know if you sit down and think about it you will have an awesome spin on the story
Una delle migliori FF del trono di spade. Storia ed MC ben costruiti. Una FF stupenda e che consiglio assolutamente di leggere fino alla fine. L'inizio per alcuni puΓ² essere lento e noioso, ma piΓΉ continuerai a leggere piΓΉ ti penti che la storia non sia piΓΉ lunga da quanto ti piacerΓ
I really love this fanfic! It has a really well tought through story and a lot of immersion in the GOT fantasy world. Known characters are integrated into this fanfic in a plausible and believable way. It is well written, even though a editor would be very appreciated to correct the grammatical errors and the sometimes missing meaning of some paragraphs... but all in all it is a fanfic I can recommand to everyone that loves the GOT world and doesn't need a transmigrator MC with cheatsystem. I just hope this fanfic doesn't get dropped as after chapter 100 the releases of New chapters are taking more and more time... either way, thanks for this pleasant story so far dear author!
maybe the greatest Got fic we have ever had the opportunity to read, you recommend to anyone which like a more realistic one with slow pace but very well written.
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Honestly the best got fic ive ever read. The main charecter is clever but is not perfect which is show cased every once and a while but never shoved down our throats I highly recommend this to any got fan.
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] "Bro it's been 4 Month's did you die or what?"
is this on hiatus?.............................................................................................................................................
Love this fanfic. Good world building and story development. A fun read that really entertains. The frequent updates keep the story rolling well. I hope the author keeps it up. The MC seems a over powered but the challenges in the story are scaled up to meet his skill level. The author seems to be taking the story in a new direction a bit different then the many SI mary sue stories we have all read before. Go house Dustin.