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God's gift

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Author: d'elfe

4.8 (13 ratings)

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Frances, a 24 year old student, follows a hunch and steps into a church by her own volition. She is the pebble that stirs life changing events.
Be warned: love, angst and babies ahead !

"Her beautiful voice rose again and when his soft baritone mingled with her crystal soprano, the world seemed, at last, at peace. Two voices, united in beauty, each of them with their own faith, each respecting the other, each of them singing praises to the creator in such a perfect harmony. The light engulfed him, caressing, vibrating in every single cell of his body. His chest, pierced by the grace of the Lord, more powerful than any tide. And the storm within rose, waves high and strangely harmless. His passion unleashed.

They both stood before the altar, side by side, never touching, never crossing that line, but united through their souls. He couldn't falter; by his side stood an angel."

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    d_elfe

    Ok, I'm cheating here because I am the author. I just wanted to type in this fateful review, the tenth ! As for the rest, I wish to thank you all for your kind words and your support. The show must go on :)

    3yr
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    MUHACHE_JUMA

    Being a muslim, though I have a lot of Christians around, it has always been hard to learn about the concept of christianity in depth. Am glad your work introduces religion and the Christian's way of worship. I specifically like the fact that our protagonist was not a believer from the start. Looking forward to reading more of your content

    3yr
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    DonDenis

    The essence of the story is already looking clear enough from the few chapters available, and the synopsis also gave a feel of the plot being interesting. Hoping updates are regular.

    3yr
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    Henrietta_Otu

    This novel brings to bare all the realities of life. I love how the author did a vivid description of scenes and events. It was so engaging and trilling. Just read few chapters though but it was really interesting. Great job author.

    3yr
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    Lexi_Roberson

    I am giving my full review!!! I have currently read all 15 chapters the author has put on there. I can't even begin to describe the level of emotions I was facing reading Frances and Father Trsitians backgrounds. It was interesting is an understatement here. I was so ficus and some engaged with the story. I definitely recommend it, it's about a question of faith. The reality we all face. I highly recommend this book to others , it is well worth it. I did find some grammar errors as well. As far as characters go, I thought that Frances and Father Tristian were very well written. I wished you would have mentioned Thomas, Matthews and her brother Quentin early on. I know you mentioned she had a boyfriend but I didn't know who that was until Matthew .I also wished to have seen his side or get to meet him at all .There wasn't much action there. I wished I could have met some of Frances family members besides the brother and more details on that. Thomas, I didn't even know who he was at first either. I would have loved for a more introduction to these characters. I absolutely adored Frances and Tristians relationship, and I hope they end up together!!!! I was rooting for them from page 1, even though France's is technically in a relationship. Good luck author!!! I thought it was amazing to read and learn these characters!!!

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    albakata

    Really love everything about this! First chapter in and I’m already blown away—the descriptions, character thoughts, and world building. It’s as if I was also present in that world. Truly a magnificent way of writing. Keep it up and continue to do your best!

    3yr
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    DyaAran
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    This is a rare talent! Every word in the book is well written. The author is undoubtedly a great writer! I feel like I should learn a lot from this writer. I'll make sure to follow this novel to the end. If you want a detailed, well written English book, it is a good choice.

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    Lexi_Roberson

    As a Christian myself, there have been many times that Ive seen how christianity truly works . Thank you for establishing this concept and I am glad so many people are reading this. I love how the character doesn't really believe at first but slowly goes into the concept of hey he is real. Best of wishes to you, and I highly recommend this book to everyone!!! This is the user from the forum BellaandLexShow!!!

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    Mel_Aniv

    This story is a gem in the unique sense. It was informative and a story told by the Author. Depicted from true events and happenings. Good luck author for your success and may you be blessed!......from review swap.

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    drimar44

    The story is a true work by the authors description send vividness of scenes to the point of near accuracy, you can tell that this is indeed a true masterpiece

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    Muskan_umata

    I have to say that my favorite part about this book is the way the author describes everything. I also learned a lot about Christianity, a little something I was not expecting. I felt like I was in the character's shoes, but I wasn't happy about only meeting two to three characters in the beginning. The writing quality is amazing, I found zero spelling or grammatical errors, the story development is at a good pace, the character design is amazing and updating stability is to die for. the world background is exceptionally beautiful...i felt like I was in the church with the characters and all the other places. the show not tell, is very clear...the descriptions were amazing!❤ I love this book and can't wait to read more. it's amazing. don't hesitate to add this to your reading lsit, you'll have a taste of adventure, betrayal, self-love, and much more😎💪

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    3yr
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    BL_lover202

    So far its interesting hoping to see what happens next 🤔 [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

    3yr
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    Lal_CrocusMist

    I must say that this is a catch! I love the detailing, so precise and warm. the way the author describes everything..! This is worth the read. I would want to know more about her and how she will face her world. Found the book that will keep me awake in the middle of the night😊 more please!!

    3yr
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