Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

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DrunkenScholarHill

Very humorous take on the entire reborn into Naruto theme. Have to say it’s a really refreshing sense of humour. Not the typical gags that have been done to death but really surprising original jokes or inspiration taken from somewhere I don’t know haha. The dialogue is great and characters really pop and aren’t cookie cutter shaped exposition or cliches. There’s a satisfying lifestyle they’re living And it’s great. No knowledge of Naruto the series but a whole bunch of outside context powers gathered through years of Xianxia living. Lots of fun situations happened and will probably happen in the future. Great stories like this send me to the authors profile in hopes they’ve written a few more stories haha. Unfortunately this is the first for this profile but hopefully it won’t be the last :)

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Einstein3

Usually, I do not give out pure 5 stars as there is always a little something, that sours the experience for me. This time, however, it's impossible to give anything else! Every aspect of this story is superb. The quality of writing is very nearly flawless with only a minuscule chance of even typos appearing. The development of the story leans on the canon timeline of events. The tiny changes pile up though, and somewhere in the not-so-far future, canon will be wrecked. The characters... Oh god, the characters. Usually, this is where I lower the rating, since you'll either have copied characters from canon or heavily ooc ones. Instead, you'll get a single original character, who believably influences others. That's extremely hard to pull off correctly, but it's done fantastically well here. Updating Stability. We get lot's of chapters to fuel our addiction, nuff said. World Background: Here, I do not only rate the Naruto universe, but also her home dimension. It's been deliciously vague till now. We get snippets of information, that keep us interested but not so much that it feels like an info dump, which is a hard line to toe. Well done! Overall, we get a reinvented universe, a lovable main cast and all around a good feeling while reading this book. 5 stars are very much deserved and well earned! Keep up the good work!

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Bored_MC

honestly the name and synopsis of this fic is god-awful, and despite having it in my library for a while i could never bring myself to read it cuz i figured itd be terribly disappointing, like strongest talent in naruto, but then i actually read it and even just for the comedy factor alone its great, and despite the MC being a cultivator and so obviously from a CN world, she's not 'Chinese' if you know what i mean, all in all, i read 300 chapters (400k+ words) in 3 days, once i started this i literally, and i cant express this enough, LITERALLY, did not stop reading unless to eat, sleep, or toilet breaks. i just couldnt put it down, the writing is as good as it can be, but the Dialog, OoOOooohh~~ its sooo goooood, honestly the characters feel SO real, its impossible to not be immersed, and despite how this may be difficult to believe by my review so far, but i have quite high standards, yet i love this fic, in spite of the fact that i dont really even like the plot, fics where the MC is a part of narutos generation arent really my cup off tea and yet i love this one because it is just so well written. and finally, Author-san, if youre reading this i want you to know that i spend all my time reading because i hate my life and like this i can escape into the lives of others, and i just want you to know that even if it was only for 3 days, thank you so, so much for letting me feel happy again for a bit :> TL:DR: dont let the title and synopsis deceive you, this story is amazing, at least read the first 2 chapters and you wont be able to put it down

LV 14

Maerry

Here I go shameless 5 Star review. Had this story in my head for quite some time now. I started making notes where I want this to go about two month ago and now im finally bringing it on the screen. This will have a good mix of action, comedy and a little bit of romance, while occasionaly pointing out the weirdness that is the Naruto world. Hope you enjoy it.

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LV 5

Orthanos

I never thought that I would see a cultivator naruto fanfic that is worth reading. All things considered I would love to dump some PWR Stones to this fanfic. But 15k words which should of be met or maybe it needs ten reviews. Can you post multiple reviews for one book / fanfic?

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Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk

Let All Mongrels Who Read This Know, That This Fanfiction Has This King's Stamp Of Approval. .................................................................................................................................................

LV 15

Macabreseraph

I personally have never been a fan of fanfiction though I I find one that sounds interesting I'll always give it a shot. Sadly this falls pray to what most fanfics fall prey to in my opinion, and that's a lack of faith to the original personalities of the characters in favor of the authors portrayal in service to the story they are writing. I can accept that a new character will disrupt how events unfold, thus change the timeline a bit but I cannot accept when an author takes characters and subverts what/who they are and remakes them into someone completely different.

LV 4

reboot23

Honestly speaking, at first glance I thought this novel was a waste. I was searching for new novels, somehow saw this again and said "you know what **** it" and start to read it and let me tell you.....one of the best decisions i ever made. This novel is very funny(especially the comment sections), the story development is moving at a good pace and the writing quality is..well my brain autocorrects the mistakes so I don't think it necessary to say anything about it(only nerd *cough* I mean big brainers will say something about it)

LV 4

Nan2009

Let me start by saying, I am not a big fan of Naruto but I absolutely love this novel. Normally fanfics tend to have a tendency of having characters with bland 1D personality. But, this novel really captures their original personality with Author own unique twist on it. The character interactions are really smooth & entertaining, never once I felt bored reading it. I really like the interaction between MC and Kurama, its really fun reading their banter. Also, the romance in the novel doesn't feel rushed, it feet more natural & smooth, especially Hinata & MC interactions are really damn cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) . Author-san keep up the good work ヾ (≧▽≦*) o. I really hope Author-san complete this novel properly and wouldn't drop it halfway.

LV 5

Acortal

To be fair to the author for writing this fantastic novel I should have written this review sooner. Writing Quality 5/5 It's extremely hard to see grammatical errors and even when there are some, the author is fast to fix them when the readers point them out Stability of Updates 5/5 Daily uploads and every time the author is unable to post a day they always warn us, but to be fair it's rare that it happens Story Development 5/5 It's a little slow since the focus of the novel is more on the comedy but it's enjoyable nonetheless Character Design 5/5 (Can I place a 6/5 here?) The best part of the story in my opinion, all characters feel alive and the protagonist is one of my favorites and I love her personality World Background 5/5 the mix of Naruto and Xianxia is quite interesting and I want to see more of it

11/10 would come back and read it all over again. -11/10 would drop the novel. 10/10 would type the whole story in my notes so I can treasure it forever with the others I typed dilligently with a hint of ignoring my laziness. 10/10 would ask the author for permission to type this in my notes. 101/10 would put some random scale of something to surpass the 140 characters. 10/10 would sing a random song with no apparent reason.

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marianela_arebalo_7450

author hopefully change the pairing (since would be for nothing to save her and end with Naruto in the end, everyone thought that it would end with the protagonist, because if in the end you make it end with Naruto, the whole drama is silly, you'd better have it left as the canon where they meet and would have continued with the story, you blew a good potential). - Surely the majority is bothered by the result of the pairing, everyone expected a development, but you leave us with this chapter. - I hope you cheer up and edit it and make naruto mate with another girl (people want the development of hinata's romance with the protagonist, if not, it won't do for you to save her).

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Legacy_24

Honestly picked this book on a whim. Yet it is easily one of my favorite books on webnovel. The character development the story all of it is great. My only problem is I cant fast forward time to when theres 600 chapters ready

LV 12

LordHollow

It’s been 1678 Days since I’ve started reading this, I’ve lost feeling in my left nut, I’m illegally blind in both eyes, My dog is watching Rent a Girlfriend and likes the Mc, My goldfish is holding my Astolfo body pillow at gun point, I’ve just seen John Cena, I now know Obama’s last name, Women have rights, Ha!l H!tler, I’ve just murdered my whole family because I heard voices that they said Esdeath is a Mid Waifu, WNBA is good, I’ve started watching the NBA cuz I like young boys, Sung Drip Woo doesn’t Drip anymore, 69 isn’t funny anymore, One Piece is Mid & Over, Bakugo & Deku ship is canon, DBZ is Peak, Boruto is considered Big Three material, Jobless isn’t Peak, Rimuru isn’t Waifu material, I just nuked an Orphanage, Gey people have gained personalities, Feminist’s are actually for gender equality, Andrew Tate is President, Sneako is Mid, Vampire Canines aren’t hot, Minecraft has died, The sun is about to explode, global warming has taken

LV 4

UCHIHA

When I read some of the comments and they mentioned cultivation i decided not to read it however a few days later i had nothing else to read and decided to give it a read and i gotta say that i shouldn't judge the book by its cover. The fanfiction is by far one of the best well written Naruto fanfiction on this app, it has a bit of everything you want, the fanfic is funny, the fights are well written and the MC is OP and doesn't give a **** about what others think about her. And! There is a new chapter almost everyday, what else you could you ask for.

LV 4

AEEK

I'm currently on 441 chapter of this fantastic Naruto fan-fiction, I will say only one thing "Read It. It is Worth it." . . Seriously I can't stop laughing on every chapter. I had so fun on reading this work. love you Author. quote-> "𝙃𝙤𝙩 𝙞𝙨 𝙃𝙤𝙩." Thank you...

LV 3

D_Rain_Smells

I would say author Just started and your writing is throwing me off . I understand this is function but sometimes You beed to apply logic you literally made her some kind of OP character from the start with the cultivation WhatNot. Being good at cultivation doesnt necessarily mean one would be good with chakra whatever i would have prefeered a bettr character development and whatnot than some OP lil kid

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Ink88seeker9

Disliking the Genre of Yuri: A Personal Perspective Literature and entertainment encompass a wide array of genres, each with its own unique appeal. However, personal preferences may lead individuals to gravitate toward certain genres while feeling less enthusiastic about others. In this essay, I will explore my personal perspective on the genre of Yuri, shedding light on the reasons behind my lack of affinity for this particular category. Body: Lack of Personal Connection: One of the primary reasons for my disinterest in the genre of Yuri stems from the lack of personal connection I feel toward its themes and narratives. Yuri, also known as "Girls' Love," predominantly explores romantic relationships between female characters. As someone who does not identify with this particular aspect, it becomes difficult to relate to the experiences and emotions portrayed within the genre. Overemphasis on Romantic Relationships: In many Yuri stories, the central focus tends to be on the development and progression of romantic relationships between female characters. While romance can be an integral and compelling element in storytelling, an excessive emphasis on it within Yuri works can overshadow other important aspects such as character development, plot progression, and thematic exploration. This imbalance often leads to predictable and repetitive storylines, limiting the genre's potential for broader engagement. Unrealistic Portrayals: Another factor that contributes to my lack of appreciation for the genre is the tendency of Yuri to portray idealized and often unrealistic relationships between female characters. While fiction inherently involves some level of fantasy, excessive idealization can make the characters and their interactions seem detached from reality. This can hinder the exploration of more nuanced themes and can result in a lack of depth within the storytelling. Limited Representation and Diversity: Although Yuri focuses on relationships between female characters, it is important to note that the genre often falls short in terms of representation and diversity. Many Yuri works tend to feature characters who conform to stereotypical roles, thereby failing to accurately represent the vast array of experiences and identities within the LGBTQ+ community. This lack of representation can be disappointing and alienating for readers seeking more authentic and inclusive narratives. Conclusion: While personal preferences play a significant role in shaping our interests, it is important to acknowledge that different individuals have varying tastes in literature and entertainment. In the case of Yuri, my lack of enthusiasm for the genre is rooted in a combination of factors such as a lack of personal connection, an overemphasis on romantic relationships, unrealistic portrayals, and limited representation and diversity. However, it is crucial to recognize that the genre holds value for others who may find solace, inspiration, or enjoyment within its narratives. Ultimately, diverse genres and perspectives contribute to a rich and multifaceted cultural landscape, accommodating a wide range of tastes and preferences.