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A Naruto who goes to DC world when he was killed along with his naive thoughts . and this fix shows us how he devolped and other things about him. It's different from other fics as Author tries keep the original character persona and then develop him not random thind adding here there, So a good read , might get you angry sometimes but hey reality Is such a bummer sometimes we just don't like it . also you get to know some plot holes that original Naruto had. so what got the wait let's dig in by yourself
Hi i see the drama tag, what kind of Drama are we getting into if you dont mind answering …,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Hey Author! Is it Connected to the Past Volume like the DC Comic? Cause if it is it'll be awesome and chaotic with confusing setting!! Lol Good Luck! If not Mehh.. It's still Awesome. 👍👍👍😁😁🤣😂
im being very harsh but man if this is a good idea ruined by lack of experience, it feels too rushed and everyone is just kinda going with the flow, and the explanations the autor gives for these are pretty basic or more like imagines them but he lack in the way of putting that in words,
the writing quality is good, the net stability update 4 stars because by now the story is over (I don't count the reboot), the story is developed quite well although I don't like a lot of things the author added like the disease through juubi, the problem of the immortal chakra and the problem he received when he made the clones, the character is much more different from naruto however the change is not bad even if in the end he becomes like a dictator where he sees only good and evil should be converted or die, as the background of the world there is the dc world but it is very different from the original, however the story is not bad and I think it is good to read it as a pastime even if I would have preferred more fights and it is too focused on the emotions of the various characters (the most annoying thing are the poems / songs that appear in the story and as soon as I leave them I skip that piece because frankly you can't write a song it's one thing to hear it, it's another to read it)
Reveal Spoiler
Excelente historia, pero después del capítulo 40 ya se siente que pierde el ritmo la historia. La introducción de nuevos personajes sin transfondos crea un personaje olvidable.
Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Now at chapter 100 I would suggest anyone reading this it’s a good read. As a very cultured person I’ll give this fan-fic: 10 Chicken nuggets out of 10 chicken nuggets.
Ok now that I’ve read quite a bit of this I’ve changed the way I see this fan-fic. I like it, it was difficult to get past some parts as naruto was naive or it felt like the mc was belittled compared to other dc characters. If you get past the first couple chapters its pretty good.
Not my cup of tea. However many will really like this novel and will be drawn to this style. The writing quality is very good for a fanfic. After 10 chapters i saw very few grammatical errors. The story concept is interesting but I found its delivery to be a mix of good and bad. My first issue is the lack of worldbuilding. The author tries to tell the story from primarily Narutos perspective but also writes in a way that asumes the reader already knows everything about the DC universe and characters while providing them sometimes with exposition for introductions. Many of the characters he meets arent introduced at all or are introduced through exposition rather than narutos interactions with them. I.e. we are told about Shay Veritas by the author rather than dialouge with Kara who is taking naruto to her at the time. Also, i would have almost no idea what anyone looks like without googling their appearance. My next point is contrary to what many are saying about the main character and progression of the story. I find this to be inconsistent. Sometimes naruto acts like the original character, then he acts mature sometimes, clever sometimes, and dense other times. It may be just the beginning of the story as i have only read 10 chapters, but i really dont see how others find this naruto to be consistently genuine. It is not bad and i have seen way worse. But it just does not feel like naruto which is also tied to the progression of the story. It is to fast. The story completely glosses over the emotional aspects of what the mc and others are going through. I.e. surprise, narutos mom kushina comes back to life from narutos soul. Their reunion is only a couple of paragraphs without any serious dialogue. No Kushina asking where they are, how she came back to life, etc. This is supposed to be something incredibly emotional for the mc and kushina but instead of a scene that shows this, we get kushina trying to set up naruto with the first two girls she sees. Then naruto turns around and promises to bring karas parents back to life for no reason. There is a disconnect between what we are told about the characters and how they actually act. Overall, thus story has promise but I wont be continuing. For some, the issues i listed wont bother them much and others will say that i am nitpicking. But for me, the lack of worldbuilding, inconsistent mc, and the pace of the story with more exposition than necessary while glossing over important events are simply not a cup of tea i want to continue with.
This review is purely based for those who wish to read but have come to the review section to know whats it about. 1. The story is amazing, at first i was really sceptical for naruto especially since we all know how the dc universe is soo fuked up but, it really gets more and more interesting. 2. This is not for the young mentality as well as internet karens i mean, just the name alone will spark some stupid reviews and comments i have no doubt. 3. The plot is amazing with great charcter growth and good mentality. My rating would be a 8.5/10 overall.
MC irritates me for more chapters than I usually will read. there is some character growth at a plausible rate of development I suppose. imagination is used at different points in the fanfic...
This is it, my fellow readers. This work of art has transcended the realm of fanfiction. Seriously, Naruto could have been a new Hero added to the DC-verse and I would have paid to watch the movie/series if it followed the plot of this webnovel. I actually think the title of webnovel is undermining it's value. This could have been written and sold as an actual novel. The setting is great. The romance is great, a bit sad with the harem feature, but I love all of the girls, so it doesn't matter. It is at least believable for once. He doesn't just **** them and then BOOM, undying love. They actually develop relationships before they go down the path of ***. Friendships exist as well, even with male characters (usually impossible in harem) so that is great. Also the character development is slow and natural. (He doesn't turn into a crazed killer in a second as some transmigrators in do in other stories) Really great work author! I am seriously looking forward to the rest!
don't stop please continue this 🙏 story.................,..........m...... .. ...............mmmmm ................
This is a story about Naruto after his battle with Pain. He died while sleeping after the battle and got another chance in the DC world. He was brought for a purpose by Gaea because of his positive attitude and mercy. Kurama also accompanies him and they become friends. Here Kurama is more than just a battery for Naruto as he uses his so called genius intellect. Naruto also develops through out the story and grows stronger. He doesn't ki in the start since he made the declaration in the Pain arc bit with time he sees that it was the wrong decision. There are consequences here and challenges. Naruto doesn't one shot people on his level but one shots fodder. He works in a team and continues to grow while having fun. He will go back to the ninja world to finish what he started and to save it from the threats in the second part of the story. Naruto develops his powers and techniques. Learning more with the help of Kurama, Raven, his mother and Shay Veritas. Slowly he walks the path of becoming OP. It is a harem story but it takes time for them to get into a relationship. In the first part he gets together with three of them by the end of it. Second part he gets more. The other characters also get developed and change according to the circumstances. The DC side is comic level in power. Harem girls: Kara Raven Shay Veritas Donna Diana Poison Ivy Hinata Shiva I hope you enjoy. If you have any question, ask and I shall try my best to answer.
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great fanfic romance is done well character growth is on point a bit slow paced but okay all in all a very good fic highly recommended from me ...👍
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I don't know i just passing by But dude u should put some extra work on dialogue like for real but yeah i will just give u 5 star because some people that gave u a low rate but no reason
Umm i want to write my review but it seems many has the same point with me so ijust rate without reason pls forgive me up up up up up up up up up
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Yeah yeah i know the character emotion and tge dialog seems blank but the author still improving (right author) and this is hella good ff and some people just low rated this stoey without have a solid reason lol ay just remove the low rate if theres no reason
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it's really good, just isn't my preferable kind of MC but it's a good read so I highly recommend it if you are looking for an interesting DC and Naruto fanfic
The storyline is too slow. boring Naruto too restrained might be suitable if it was Sasuke or Itachi maybe you are short on ideas you have to make Naruto give all his strength
The writing is great. that I can say. Characters and depictions of them not so much. The Naruto comes off less as a version of himself from the series and more of a pull from other fanfictions. The potrayl of DC characters are just hit and miss at most times. The skill of AU Naruto and strength just does not fit against other DC characters.
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A Naruto who goes to DC world when he was killed along with his naive thoughts . and this fix shows us how he devolped and other things about him. It's different from other fics as Author tries keep the original character persona and then develop him not random thind adding here there, So a good read , might get you angry sometimes but hey reality Is such a bummer sometimes we just don't like it . also you get to know some plot holes that original Naruto had. so what got the wait let's dig in by yourself
Hi i see the drama tag, what kind of Drama are we getting into if you dont mind answering …,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Hey Author! Is it Connected to the Past Volume like the DC Comic? Cause if it is it'll be awesome and chaotic with confusing setting!! Lol Good Luck! If not Mehh.. It's still Awesome. 👍👍👍😁😁🤣😂
im being very harsh but man if this is a good idea ruined by lack of experience, it feels too rushed and everyone is just kinda going with the flow, and the explanations the autor gives for these are pretty basic or more like imagines them but he lack in the way of putting that in words,
the writing quality is good, the net stability update 4 stars because by now the story is over (I don't count the reboot), the story is developed quite well although I don't like a lot of things the author added like the disease through juubi, the problem of the immortal chakra and the problem he received when he made the clones, the character is much more different from naruto however the change is not bad even if in the end he becomes like a dictator where he sees only good and evil should be converted or die, as the background of the world there is the dc world but it is very different from the original, however the story is not bad and I think it is good to read it as a pastime even if I would have preferred more fights and it is too focused on the emotions of the various characters (the most annoying thing are the poems / songs that appear in the story and as soon as I leave them I skip that piece because frankly you can't write a song it's one thing to hear it, it's another to read it)
Reveal Spoiler Excelente historia, pero después del capítulo 40 ya se siente que pierde el ritmo la historia. La introducción de nuevos personajes sin transfondos crea un personaje olvidable.
Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Now at chapter 100 I would suggest anyone reading this it’s a good read. As a very cultured person I’ll give this fan-fic: 10 Chicken nuggets out of 10 chicken nuggets.
Ok now that I’ve read quite a bit of this I’ve changed the way I see this fan-fic. I like it, it was difficult to get past some parts as naruto was naive or it felt like the mc was belittled compared to other dc characters. If you get past the first couple chapters its pretty good.
Not my cup of tea. However many will really like this novel and will be drawn to this style. The writing quality is very good for a fanfic. After 10 chapters i saw very few grammatical errors. The story concept is interesting but I found its delivery to be a mix of good and bad. My first issue is the lack of worldbuilding. The author tries to tell the story from primarily Narutos perspective but also writes in a way that asumes the reader already knows everything about the DC universe and characters while providing them sometimes with exposition for introductions. Many of the characters he meets arent introduced at all or are introduced through exposition rather than narutos interactions with them. I.e. we are told about Shay Veritas by the author rather than dialouge with Kara who is taking naruto to her at the time. Also, i would have almost no idea what anyone looks like without googling their appearance. My next point is contrary to what many are saying about the main character and progression of the story. I find this to be inconsistent. Sometimes naruto acts like the original character, then he acts mature sometimes, clever sometimes, and dense other times. It may be just the beginning of the story as i have only read 10 chapters, but i really dont see how others find this naruto to be consistently genuine. It is not bad and i have seen way worse. But it just does not feel like naruto which is also tied to the progression of the story. It is to fast. The story completely glosses over the emotional aspects of what the mc and others are going through. I.e. surprise, narutos mom kushina comes back to life from narutos soul. Their reunion is only a couple of paragraphs without any serious dialogue. No Kushina asking where they are, how she came back to life, etc. This is supposed to be something incredibly emotional for the mc and kushina but instead of a scene that shows this, we get kushina trying to set up naruto with the first two girls she sees. Then naruto turns around and promises to bring karas parents back to life for no reason. There is a disconnect between what we are told about the characters and how they actually act. Overall, thus story has promise but I wont be continuing. For some, the issues i listed wont bother them much and others will say that i am nitpicking. But for me, the lack of worldbuilding, inconsistent mc, and the pace of the story with more exposition than necessary while glossing over important events are simply not a cup of tea i want to continue with.
This review is purely based for those who wish to read but have come to the review section to know whats it about. 1. The story is amazing, at first i was really sceptical for naruto especially since we all know how the dc universe is soo fuked up but, it really gets more and more interesting. 2. This is not for the young mentality as well as internet karens i mean, just the name alone will spark some stupid reviews and comments i have no doubt. 3. The plot is amazing with great charcter growth and good mentality. My rating would be a 8.5/10 overall.
MC irritates me for more chapters than I usually will read. there is some character growth at a plausible rate of development I suppose. imagination is used at different points in the fanfic...
This is it, my fellow readers. This work of art has transcended the realm of fanfiction. Seriously, Naruto could have been a new Hero added to the DC-verse and I would have paid to watch the movie/series if it followed the plot of this webnovel. I actually think the title of webnovel is undermining it's value. This could have been written and sold as an actual novel. The setting is great. The romance is great, a bit sad with the harem feature, but I love all of the girls, so it doesn't matter. It is at least believable for once. He doesn't just **** them and then BOOM, undying love. They actually develop relationships before they go down the path of ***. Friendships exist as well, even with male characters (usually impossible in harem) so that is great. Also the character development is slow and natural. (He doesn't turn into a crazed killer in a second as some transmigrators in do in other stories) Really great work author! I am seriously looking forward to the rest!
don't stop please continue this 🙏 story.................,..........m...... .. ...............mmmmm ................
This is a story about Naruto after his battle with Pain. He died while sleeping after the battle and got another chance in the DC world. He was brought for a purpose by Gaea because of his positive attitude and mercy. Kurama also accompanies him and they become friends. Here Kurama is more than just a battery for Naruto as he uses his so called genius intellect. Naruto also develops through out the story and grows stronger. He doesn't ki in the start since he made the declaration in the Pain arc bit with time he sees that it was the wrong decision. There are consequences here and challenges. Naruto doesn't one shot people on his level but one shots fodder. He works in a team and continues to grow while having fun. He will go back to the ninja world to finish what he started and to save it from the threats in the second part of the story. Naruto develops his powers and techniques. Learning more with the help of Kurama, Raven, his mother and Shay Veritas. Slowly he walks the path of becoming OP. It is a harem story but it takes time for them to get into a relationship. In the first part he gets together with three of them by the end of it. Second part he gets more. The other characters also get developed and change according to the circumstances. The DC side is comic level in power. Harem girls: Kara Raven Shay Veritas Donna Diana Poison Ivy Hinata Shiva I hope you enjoy. If you have any question, ask and I shall try my best to answer.
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great fanfic romance is done well character growth is on point a bit slow paced but okay all in all a very good fic highly recommended from me ...👍
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I don't know i just passing by But dude u should put some extra work on dialogue like for real but yeah i will just give u 5 star because some people that gave u a low rate but no reason
Umm i want to write my review but it seems many has the same point with me so ijust rate without reason pls forgive me up up up up up up up up up
qtgw gg evs kn snwiwbwjwbkehs ih d ih ssk sis nh e ih whie bu e iblis 2 kh ee gk eke ih w hp ee koh wwhegehwv ejeveb ebwievwhev yoo sjwvwuw bwjjw
Yeah yeah i know the character emotion and tge dialog seems blank but the author still improving (right author) and this is hella good ff and some people just low rated this stoey without have a solid reason lol ay just remove the low rate if theres no reason
Up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
it's really good, just isn't my preferable kind of MC but it's a good read so I highly recommend it if you are looking for an interesting DC and Naruto fanfic
The storyline is too slow. boring Naruto too restrained might be suitable if it was Sasuke or Itachi maybe you are short on ideas you have to make Naruto give all his strength
The writing is great. that I can say. Characters and depictions of them not so much. The Naruto comes off less as a version of himself from the series and more of a pull from other fanfictions. The potrayl of DC characters are just hit and miss at most times. The skill of AU Naruto and strength just does not fit against other DC characters.