/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter: Returning from Hogwarts Legacy
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After spending his sixth year at Hogwarts a century ago, Harry finds himself back in the cupboard under the stairs in 1991, once again receiving his Hogwarts acceptance letter.
"You’re telling me my parents were killed by a dark wizard?" Harry asked. "Who is this dark wizard? Why are you all so afraid of him that you won’t even say his name?"
"It’s Vol—," Hagrid began cautiously. "Well, we call him Voldemort, because he personally killed hundreds of people."
Harry nodded nonchalantly.
"And what happened the next day?"
Hagrid: "Uh?"
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It's a mess. It's like trying to read the HP series and a HP fanfic at the same time. We've got a reincarnated mc, but the author keeps shoving canon scenes at our face just to keep up with the original plotlines. Honestly it just bores me everytime that happens, very dissapointing. Love the HP series but if it was focused more on the original parts, it would have been great (imo). *Don't know why mc hasn't asked gellert about his sister yet, and why mc thinks he has to fight him. *Peeves could also know some info but he's completely disregarded.
I just want to make sure I understand this—you go back in time, grow up all over again, and somehow forget every life lesson you ever learned? And then you magically fix all of Ron’s problems in 30 seconds using spells you've never even seen before, and no one questions it? Let’s just throw out everything we know about this world and story while we read this dumpster fire.
personally one of the best hp fanfiction i have read recently. it has fresh plot and i hope it diverges from canon quite a bit and please no harem.
As a player of Hogwarts Legacy here my rating for you. I also had write my own hogwarts legacy fiction and I also love to read other fiction that had same power from Hogwarts Legacy.
Well written but too many plot holes they are minor but the number adds up. Still an enjoyable read but need to turn off common sense and logic to fully enjoy.................................................................................................
I was skeptical at first, but the idea is well executed. Unlike I expected, even the characters from the past (canon and original characters) play a major role in the character development of this version of Harry. So the time in Hogwarts legacy isn't just an excuse to make the mc more powerful. What bothers me is that the author sometimes (every few chapters) uses the wrong terms while meaning the right thing. Small spoiler Harry, for example, is the Seeker, not the Chaser. I mean, it would be fine if he made Harry into the Chaser, but he actually meant Seeker.
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The story itself is extremely well written, with the characters and world well put together for the most part. The negative for the story lays with how the protagonist runs in circles while not progressing the plot at all when it comes to any type of relationship. It's turned into a generic npc novel at this point. 150 chapters of building sad back stories and interactions without fleshing out any positive gain at all for Harry. Literally the most progress after 150 chapters between characters has been Harry's minor familiarity increase with the dursey family. The author introduced characters like the professors and other students more as non related npcs for the most part—which is acceptable because he designed really nice character additions such as Vera, sweety and Cassandra. The issue is that those few characters are basically null at this point. You have a talking painting that is blocked by needing what are basically quest items. Oh wait, in the bank? nope robbed. Dumbledore has em? nope can't spend 5 minutes to get. snake in the basement? nope, we're still pretending it doesn't exist for the last two years or 150 chapters. other time frozen character? besides flashbacks and minor notes that make literally no sense or progress anything? nope. Unicorn ghost that the protagonist is either too dense about or just doesn't care because he's focusing on the non moving plot line of the other two characters? Oh and let's not even talk about the misleading chapter titles where they sound like something is finally going to happen to only find out the chapter had nothing to do with what it sounded like. It's a good story but there's no progress, no climax or closure for anything introduced. It's like he's afraid if he gives the protagonist anything, he won't have anything else to write about, which makes for an extremely frustrating read.
The effort is here. But it's like he has so much procrastination that even after a while year and he doesn't go to this love shack. It's like the author is trying to write Harry as a person affected by his child's body and hormones. which makes him act childish.
I don't know why, but after I donated a power stone, now I only get the last chapter, none of the previous ones
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Hey , I started reading your story and just couldn't stop reading. It's seriously incredible. Your writing is so engaging that I started imagining how amazing it would be as a webtoon or a comic. So, I'm actually a commissioned artist and I create stuff like webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art and Book Covers. No pressure at all, but I'd love to covert it. If you are interested, hit me up on Discord (Username : bennett_lol) and we can chat about the details. Can't wait to hear from you. Best, bennett.
I didn't even need to finish the first chapter to realize how poorly developed this fic is. I feel like the author is trying to give us a stroke...
Su miopía es irritante por lo de más me gusta .... Lo que más me disgusta de Harry Potter es su indiferencia ante un nuevo mundo y este fanfic lo corrige
plsss update faster. love this story. the addition of extra plot details and the deatail of the descriptive writing ( when harry told the truth about what happened to the 2 million galleons in vertatia's vault) are excemplary. keep up the good work!!!
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Yikes 30 Chapters in and this Harry is somehow more useless than his original self, wow.