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When the Heaven Spirits descended, all that bore witness thought of it as a blessing. Only those that survived knew that it was a curse, shackles in place to monitor all beings within Heaven's Code, limits imposed to suppress all beings.
Sheng Tian, who's talent transcends even that of the Absolute One, desires to break out of the confines of the Heavenly World and establish his own sanctuary. Will he fall facing the Guardians of the world? Will he stay true to his original intentions? Only time will tell.
Operation Revision is underway! I will slowly but surely go back to my earlier chapters and revise them, using the experience I gained to patch up the holes.
Any chapter that I have revised will be stated at the bottom in author's thoughts.
Current progress: Chapters 1-10
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i would say the novel has good potential but author stretching the novel and has so many realms and those realms are also complicated and messed and i mainly don't like the old man who is supporting the mc like he is worst draw back of these novel other than slow pacing and complex realms.Also its best if the author have just choosen mortal , immortal and god realm like simply but now there 7 realms where mc becomes strong in the current realm and become a weakest person in the next above realm and the same repitition for seven whole times.
So far I would say this novel has a lot of potential and is very good. I like a lot of things that the author is doing. For example the direction of the story. I also like the setting. Two bad thing I will say is that I hope for more character development for the mc. It seems he randomly just got a new trait that just didn't make sense but that could be explained in flashback if you want to do that. I am referencing about when he was saying he had no qualms about killing someone but added a justification about how he had a lot of negative karma which kind of contradicts itself. One last thing I don't like is the main characters reasoning on why he wants to ascended to higher realms. We are informed that his parents are dead and that later they may actually be alive. I have a problem with how the mc reasoning for what happened here. For example he is five years old at this time so I would expect him to be more immature in his thought process like it had been shown so far. When it was revealed his parents might be alive he kind of just shrugged it off and thought that he will go to meet them in the future. I would expect maybe some doubts instead of this. Like maybe he would think, did they abandon me or didn't want me. Maybe I am stretching a bit. Otherwise I think the novel is very good and I am enjoying it a lot. Hope for me chapters in the future. Also don't take the negatives I have said to heart I have been thinking authors would appreciate it more if I write more negatives about their novel so they could improve.
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I really like the novel and I hope you will not drop it like your other novel There is so much nonsense on Webnovel these days so please don't drop your book and go on
As a rookie author myself i hope your novel does well and you enjoy writing. All the best on the trails ahead. As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity. As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed. In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!
Great book with great potential Good English grammars, didn't waste my time reading all chaps, waiting for more chapters.
A premissa e incrivel, o desenvolvimento e viciante, so falta a estabilidade das postagem de capitulos. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Very nice grammar. Seems to be a good read as far as I can tell. Would recommend though I would wait until there are more chapters.
Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk) Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel; Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though) I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me) Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)