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DaoistWenMing
male LV 2A passionate rookie author and a devotee of reading.
2022-11-24 Joined GlobalBadges 7
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They are targets of sacrifice.
Sheng Tian's pupils turned into slits "All women step back! Men! Form a phalanx around the women and the teleportation circle!"
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Currently in the process of slowly revising the earlier chapters so these spelling mistakes and lack of personality in characters would eventually change. There shouldn't be much of these problems in newer chapters though.
"So" Sheng Tian began "what tier divergent and I?"
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Yes
Maintaining this flame took a toll on Sheng Tian, and sweat beaded his face. It had taken him nearly an hour to manifest this Tri Colored Flame.
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Borrow is a term I like better, not that anyone else would be using it anyways.
Sheng Tian then took out a cauldron half as tall as he was. It was made of iron, and slightly rusty, making Sheng Tian sigh.
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
It’s just a book on how to swing a sword properly, I guess I didn’t really make that clear enough.
The boy didn't really need the book, as the knowledge he had gained from the old man included such simple things along with a lot more. Even so, he took it as not accepting it would most definitely be suspicious.
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
In the knowledge he obtained. He was pretty much given most of the secrets of the Mortal realm, though it is up to him to actually comprehend and use it.
Sheng Tian touched his chin with a finger, "I can make some low ranked inscriptions!"
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Kids do be gullible like that, thank god there was no white van.
Sheng Tian grunted as he slammed into a tree. Extracting himself, he found an imprint of him in the wood.
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Secret, no one’s finding out anytime soon.
Suddenly, his eyes widened as he recalled an incident just one million years ago. An incident that shook the 13 Heavens to its core, "It can't be. . ."
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Thanks for the feedback. I believe that I do improve in the points you've brought up in much later chapters, though if there are any mistakes or areas that need work, do tell me. As for these earlier chapters, I might revise them a bit to improve the interactions between characters.
ch 0 5 Alchemy Techniques
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
I agree
Infinite Realm (No Limit)
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Well if I were to compare the cultivation realms to real life, I'd say a single person at the Radiant Realm [Earth Realm] can easily take over the entirety of earth. Someone at the Ascension Realm [Profound Realm] can easily traverse between solar systems and destroy ours. An Ascendant Immortal [Immortal Realm] can destroy the entire Milky Way Galaxy, and so on. If one were to reach the Infinite Realm, I'd say they can destroy our universe thousands of times and recreate it thousands of times without breaking a sweat. Do note that as one ascends, the realms (physical realm, not a person's cultivation level) also get stronger, so no one can just waltz around destroying worlds like nothing.
ch 0 -1 Info of things
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
I don't think I quite understand what you mean. Perhaps you can reword your question a bit?
ch 0 -1 Info of things
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Tropes exist to be used ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I'll try not to abuse them.
Wu Di then understood, Sheng Tian may act ruthless to his enemies and a bit cold to allies but in reality he just wanted to see his parents. He didn't want hindrances to delay him and wanted to prove himself once he met them.
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Because I was copy and pasting lol. Thanks for pointing that out!
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Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
Dunno, never crossed my mind. Either way, the sect would definitely question where he got these pills or who gave him the recipes. Selling it outside the sect is more time consuming, but gets rid of a lot of headache inducing things.
ch 17 Miracle Pills
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing
I have discord, but I don’t have a server for my novel. Might work on that later on though.
ch 0 -1 Info of things
Heaven's Tribulation
Eastern · DaoistWenMing