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GREAT STORY KEEP IT UP!!! PLEASE DON'T DROP IT!!! AND THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER!!! I LOVE IT!!! NEED MORE CHAPTER! NEED MORE CHAPTER! NEED MORE CHAPTER! NEED MORE CHAPTER! NEED MORE CHAPTER! NEED MORE CHAPTER!
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Good start, good character, have a nice potential. Cant wait to read more chapter! So what are you waiting for mister author? Go write more chapter and post them! Please dont be like other certain author that dropped their story without clear reason like natural disaster or bed ridden sick or cripled... Or gotten sick because of excesive ejaculation *tuggingsomeone*
Well, it's like this since dropped novel! I will change it the moment it's updated! Unfortunately.... Good story which is short-lived! Fanfic after all, it's rare to see finished fanfic!
Is this story dropped?? I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Author-nim I want to ask.. Are you release this story ini "wattpad" too?? I find your story release in "***.wattpad.com" by _EtramaRaizel_69
Good fan fiction. I love the interactions between the characters. Don't drop this, it is an enjoying read. Try to not let the Mc very Op, at least, admiral level or a little above, we need to see some intense battles too. Other than that, everything is perfect.
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation One piece !!!!!!!!!!!!! op mc 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
It's a story of a mc who will deal with yonko and the world governement to woo girls like it is normal to do that xd , if there was a thing i will add it's to take all the beauty of shokugeki no soma in his crew like that can ameliore themselves as he taste tasty food
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Good story.... ........................................... Just don't make mc ...................... Tooo OP........................... Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Bagus. Epic. Mcnya tidak menonjolkan kemampuan nya. Kalau bisa alur ceritanya tidak melenceng terlalu jauh. Karena pembaca/penyuka one piece lebih senang kalau ceritanya tetap dialur. Semangat
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昨天莉卡納看著暈過去的斬夜，頓時覺得氣消了一大半，這時才突然發現自己沒有穿衣服，莉卡納臉上通紅，慌忙捂住自己的身體，隨後又想到斬夜已經昏了過去，這才鬆了一口氣，低頭看著斬夜光溜溜的身體，馬上臉上一紅飛快的跑回了房間，穿好衣服之後，過了好一會兒莉卡納才從羞澀中回過神來，可是腦海中卻不自覺得回想斬夜那光溜溜的樣子，莉卡納俏臉通紅一片，可是越是這樣，腦海就越不自覺的回想。
Reveal Spoiler 昨天莉卡納看著暈過去的斬夜，頓時覺得氣消了一大半，這時才突然發現自己沒有穿衣服，莉卡納臉上通紅，慌忙捂住自己的身體，隨後又想到斬夜已經昏了過去，這才鬆了一口氣，低頭看著斬夜光溜溜的身體，馬上臉上一紅飛快的跑回了房間，穿好衣服之後，過了好一會兒莉卡納才從羞澀中回過神來，可是腦海中卻不自覺得回想斬夜那光溜溜的樣子，莉卡納俏臉通紅一片，可是越是這樣，腦海就越不自覺的回想。
Reveal Spoiler 昨天莉卡納看著暈過去的斬夜，頓時覺得氣消了一大半，這時才突然發現自己沒有穿衣服，莉卡納臉上通紅，慌忙捂住自己的身體，隨後又想到斬夜已經昏了過去，這才鬆了一口氣，低頭看著斬夜光溜溜的身體，馬上臉上一紅飛快的跑回了房間，穿好衣服之後，過了好一會兒莉卡納才從羞澀中回過神來，可是腦海中卻不自覺得回想斬夜那光溜溜的樣子，莉卡納俏臉通紅一片，可是越是這樣，腦海就越不自覺的回想。
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Pls, more release...... Pls, more release...... Pls, more release...... Pls, more release...... more update............ dont drop it.............. it has good development, so pls dont drop it..........
Good story and background. The mc is op but it's really fun to read. Good luck and I hope you can continue it.