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great book has it been dropped though the author makes a lot of great books but they end and i don't know if there dropped or not i hope there not droped there awesome
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Very little nuraihyon fanfics on this site so any that appear are automatically 5 stars this one is especially fantastic to read ..........
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It's just a power trip and not even the good kind it's just boring and then the main character is overpowered as hell in And you already now what's going to happen
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Grammar is really good characters are great with an op mc who is insanely badass and the 2 anime worlds fit perfectly together so nothing confusing or anything so I recommend reading this amazing fantastic fanfic whenever you get the chance
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Que deseos tan OP . Pero me gusta como Avanza esta historia😁.................................................,..............................................................................
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Overall I think that your story is pretty good, but the minor details make It unbearable, for example the way that speach is placed randomly in the text, missing capital letters etc. Also, the way that the relationships between the character and potential love interests are developed seem rushed and kind of out of place, they just fall in love with him straight away for no clear reason, but, with all of this said and done I do think that this is pretty good, keep up the good work :).
giving 4 stars even though there has no been any chapter but i am interested in your character design hope u won't stop posting halfway through the novel as nowdays i saw a lot author stop posting halfway
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great book has it been dropped though the author makes a lot of great books but they end and i don't know if there dropped or not i hope there not droped there awesome
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Very little nuraihyon fanfics on this site so any that appear are automatically 5 stars this one is especially fantastic to read ..........
so goood so goood more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more update plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssswssssssssssssssssssseseeessseeeeeesssssssssssss
Reveal Spoiler It's just a power trip and not even the good kind it's just boring and then the main character is overpowered as hell in And you already now what's going to happen
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Grammar is really good characters are great with an op mc who is insanely badass and the 2 anime worlds fit perfectly together so nothing confusing or anything so I recommend reading this amazing fantastic fanfic whenever you get the chance
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aprobed. ..........................................................................................................................................................
Que deseos tan OP . Pero me gusta como Avanza esta historia😁.................................................,..............................................................................
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Overall I think that your story is pretty good, but the minor details make It unbearable, for example the way that speach is placed randomly in the text, missing capital letters etc. Also, the way that the relationships between the character and potential love interests are developed seem rushed and kind of out of place, they just fall in love with him straight away for no clear reason, but, with all of this said and done I do think that this is pretty good, keep up the good work :).
giving 4 stars even though there has no been any chapter but i am interested in your character design hope u won't stop posting halfway through the novel as nowdays i saw a lot author stop posting halfway
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