In my own personal opinion- and this is not to discredit the writer for all of their hard work- but this piece was rather unprofessional written. The characters and plot line was poorly written and truthfully, I was expecting more from this writing other than a wattpad quality fan-fic.
Its like a 7 year old jacked on hormones wrote this. No details. Very bland writing not creativity AT ALL. Not even original or exciting. Nothing describing the actual characters. No setting or build up. very VERY poor writing style. poor spelling and punctuation.
In my own personal opinion- and this is not to discredit the writer for all of their hard work- but this piece was rather unprofessional written. The characters and plot line was poorly written and truthfully, I was expecting more from this writing other than a wattpad quality fan-fic.