I'm a Ghoul in Akame ga KILL!

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FanFictionForge

Your questions, if any.

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Yashasvi_Singh_8993

The author said that he has 50 chapters and Esdeath is the love interest so 5 stars immediately

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Maluop

This story is so confusing. Almost feels like it’s chat gpt

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Sir_Stronghold

while I like the premise. The writing quality is not so good. the story kind of jumps around sometimes without explanation and the grammar could be better. the characters are shallow and just accept MC too easily. the story has potential if these little issues are improved on.

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Febfew

Author, your story had a lot of potential but it has a lot of mistakes: extremely powerful MC from the beginning, to have Esdeath and Akame in the harem it is mandatory to be brainwashed or to implode the story, Leone using her body to get information, addition of a powerful sword for MC. The story development is very forced and the characters are not being portrayed correctly. Other than that, the rest is ok. I very much doubt that this story will be successful, because its current decisions will make the public uncomfortable with changes that don't make sense and will continually create errors in the script. This isn't the first time this has happened, it's common and it always ends with the author or the audience abandoning the story.

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Elemise

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