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I'm Naruto but why can I use magic
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Standard civilian A, age ??? gender male!, is in front of a R.O.B., Random Omnipotent Being, with no recollection about himself other than the fact that he could be considered an otaku and a loner, oh and let's not forget that he still remembers being a male, for some strange reason beyond his comprehension he still remembers everything else in even more detail, than before from that point forward he gets to name 6 possible worlds that the R.O.B. can choose from and 3 wishes before he knows it's choice.
Authour: Although it says R-18 there will be no explicit sexual content and R-18 rating is for when, if at all I decide to put violent scenes, for I do not wish to shy away from violent content if I believe it's required for the story to progress, to clarify by violent scenes I'm referring to torture or extreme maiming
Disclaimer: I do not claim ownership of the naruto franchise or any of its intellectual properties the same applies for any other properties I will make reference to in the story or mention of there intellectual properties
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I have read a few chapters that already released and I gotta say, you have some interesting idea. I never got the idea to ask for Greed Island skill in fanfiction, So Good Job to you. My problem with this fanfiction is Your paragraph pacing that so terrible I get a headache trying to read that. Please fix that.
Love it ..........................................................................................................................................................
No idea why you don't use more paragraphs but ok... ........................................................................................... ...............................................
It is building up to be one of the best Naruto fanfic because it introduces a separation of energies and utilizes different abilities from other unique universes. MC is not over-powered but is building up his strength to becoming over-powered and already have plans starting to gain revenge on those who wronged him. So far the plot is amazing, the Writing Quality is well done compared to most works on this website and everything else was explained before in the section above. My only grip with the fan fic is the updates and wanting more to read. Totally recommended!! 9/10 only because there's so few chapters to read.
Your idea is very good, but your paragraphs are long, for those who use automatic translator, several lines are missing, and it is very tiring, reading 1 paragraph of 20 lines ... I only managed to get to chapter 4, and I already consider a lot.