I'm Really in NBA...or not.

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Lucifer515

I read it to ch 29 It’s Good novel but the problem is the grammar and the word u don’t use it please use you 😅 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

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Choco_Monster

Review written after chapter 29 update. The concept is fun but the character design is a bit confusing. Another problem I saw is the writing, not the technique per se, but the spelling of some words. Now I'm not sure if you are deliberately doing it or its autocorrect being a jerk, one piece of advice I could give you is that you download Grammarly to fix your little problem. I am only pointing this out because there is repetitive use of the letter "u" in replacement of the word "you" and other similar cases. Overall, it was a confusing work but it was enjoyable. I recommend that you look for a proofreader or an editor. It was fun and I hope to read more, looking forward to future updates.

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Uriel_Livan

Dios mío bien comienzo sigue así tienes un gran lector aquí que te apolla sigue con las actualizaciones eres el mejor [img=update][img=update]