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A 20 year old man who is always reading novels everytime he is alone discovered that a new game is being launched. UNKNOWN is a virtual reality game where people who logged in will discover that all the stats that they gain in the game will be the same as in reality. But before they could rejoice the 20 year old man who accidentally gained a stat which is unimaginable which he also gained because of an accident in writing the program became the strongest in game and in reality. Let us see what this 20 year old brat will do with his new gain power. Will he destroy earth? Will he rule Earth? Or will he stay the same as a loner man and with no care at all?
By the way ill be releasing 2 chapters per day. And sorry for some wrong grammars. I hope you enjoy and vote!
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From what I've read so far.... Story is missing so much detail that it doesn't make sense. The main character is very stupid. Overpowered but super stupid. He doesn't seem to have gained any intelligence despite having 100 trillion points in intrlligence. The stats are just for show. The average level 1 player has 10 in each stat and 0 in luck. 1 black gold coin is $1. 1 goblin drops 1 black gold coin. It takes several minutes (at least 120 seconds) to kill several thousand goblins. Not only that, rank 2 or 3 weapons are dropped by boss mobs. Rank 2 weapon can sell for 100k coins. 100k goblins equals rank 2 weapon. Rather than not making any sense, the story is full of inconsistencies that make it difficult for civilized or educated readers to continue on. For example: MC has ability to create any skill he wants. Infinitely. He could create a skill to give him infinite stats. He could create a skill to defy all laws of physics. He could create a skill to infinitely make money. He could create a skill to disable the immortality of other people. There are infinitely many ways to make the MC more OP, but the MC has no brain to make these happen. Which is good. For the plot, if the MC was smart, the story would end on chapter one. Writing Quality: 3/5 Updates: 4/5 Story Development: 1/5 Character Design: 5/5 World Background: 1/5
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STORY READ BECAUSE OF A MISTAKE even getting highest status in everything mc think like brain damaged people..no creative thinking.. world background creating is totally bull****..there is actually nothing.. feel like a chuniby dream..authersan I know you hard worked for this novel .. but I cannot read this anymore
Great novel but currently it is more a slice of life with OP MC type and no real fight beside fighting the dragons and goblins heck its not even a fight it's a one sided massacre lol. but anyways it is a great novel. just please dont be like other original novel author who would drop their story .. and please update more and make it longer chapter.
Greetings Author! I had initially not thought about writing a review, but then I saw that no one has done a review yet, which made me wan't to do the first one. Writing Quality - Although there may be some grammatical mistakes from time to time, as well as spelling mistakes. I still like the way that the novel is written. I believe that you could produce a chapter a day instead of 2 and then focus on making the chapter a bit longer, otherwise, I truly am loving it so far. Stability of Updates - When I check the release date of the different chapters than you have produced so far, I can give it a solid 5 stars. Although, I am bound to change this if you suddenly slow down the pace. But at the moment, great job! Keep it up. Story Development - I cannot say much about this yet, but I have liked the story so far and how it has been progressing. For now, I will leave this at 4 stars and once you reach 50 chapters, I will update this once again. Character Design - We have not really seen a lot of characters thus far, but I am sure that this is bound to change as well. And like with the Story Development, I will change this too after 50 chapters. If you have failed to come up with some characters, like allies or something of the sort, then I will have to downgrade the rating here. World Background - I cannot say that I am 100% sure what this means. But assuming that it is how the world is built. I love it, absolutely love it. I cannot remember the last time I've seen a novel with an overpowered character that can switch between the real world and fictional world. I guess that novels with a cheat MC in the real world is just one of my weird "novel fetishes". All in all, fantastic. I really do love it so far and I intend to give all of my power stones solely to this novel till you have gotten enough reviews to get a rating next to the novel "cover". I do have a tip if you wish for your novel to get bigger. Firstly, add tags! Secondly, add an original cover! and third, but not least: Keep the update rate at at least 1 chapter a day. -Tristan (If you find any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes, then I apologize)
Needs more details in it to define the lack of water flowing through the river makes the eyes portray a stream. Going with the basic sappy type for frame work needs more of a controversial higharchy to nail it to the wall so people passing will stop dead in there tracks and be messmurised "look at that!.... WOW"
Awesome OP mc Good stuff right here. The fact that it litterally makes him akin to a god is awesome. And the revival ability of his is cool
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I don't have much to say after what TristanGJ said i can only say that it's a very good novel to people that loves an OP MC that develops quickly . I would like to see more chapters because i'm a really fast reader and i can't get enough i wish you could produce more chapters that are longer . And to finish this review I would like to thank u dear Author .
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Kudos to the author for writing his original work. It had an OP idea and most of these are usually criticized. I am not here to say something good either. The OP plot is usually annoying and lacks more logic than any marvel or dc comic. This book is that and perhaps some side elements to spice it up. It also continued at a point where it could have stopped and had a saving grace. I really couldn't say anything positive, but the author still put himself out there
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Story is not marked as completed, but the lasr chapter/update says it ended due to personal problems. Would have been a pretty wise decision either way to quit now before it gets weirder.
Since I don't know the age of the author nor how much experience he or she has, I won't be able to criticize the author for writing this kind of story. Giving the benefit of a doubt, the author obviously isn't a professional like many others. But haters will always be around for everyone. That is a given. Despite agreeing with histogrimoitaku about the inconsistency of the world or character design, there is a great amount of potential for this story. The main character has the mind of a young teenager of around 15 years old. Wanting to become rich and showing off his power, these are characteristics that are often seen in immature people. Despite his age being 20, since immortals are not affected by age, we can say that the age of the protagonist doesn't matter anymore. I'm a chef irl. I know the reason behing expensive meals. A $250 steak means one or more of the following points: - expensive location - a very large staff - expensive ingredients. If the restaurant priced their steak to break even, the ingredients alone would cost $83. Or for profit, at lesst $50 would be the ingredient cost. Then you have the wine. Wine is usually 5x the original price. Arc drinks a $100 wine for $500, and then proceeds to buy the same wine from the restaurant to take home. If I was the restaurant owner, Arc is now the VVIP. Just from this example, Arc can be seen as lacking knowledge and is also not good with using money. This proves that he's acting like a typical teenager who suddenly became rich. Often the author's personality or character is portrayed in the main character and/or supporting characters. So assuming that this is true, if the author is also younger than we think, I believe that we have no right as older adults of society to harshly criticize the author for this story. Instead we should give tips, suggestions, and encouragements to the author. It's a great story with unlimited potential, the story is lacking in detail but that cab always change and be improved as the story continues. I gave a 5/5 for Stability of Updates and for Story Development. The story will get better. The author hasn't dropped this project yet which means the story has room for growth. My only advice is for the author to take advice but don't let your readers' suggestions influence your story. Like when readers comment, "give MC this skill or that ability," take into heavy consideration and let readers know if it will be implemented or not in the future. Well, readers, I hope my review helps you decide whether to read or not, but I assure you, this story is like a diamond in a trash can. The idea is pretty common but executed well. Once the author is able to take the diamond out if the trash, we can easily see this story becoming a masterpiece in the future.
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๐๐ too op!!!!!!! But I like it. MC become god from the beginning, but I like it๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ, revival? Create thing?stuff? There are nothing The MC canโt do, yk why? Because Iโm a OP
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Good story. Update more pls. And pls dont abandon the novel thank you ....................................................................................
This story is ****, I can not emphasize this enough ****. In the first few chapters the story is somewhat good and with potential, it could have been a comedy of an overpowered mc or a slice of life type of story or a story with some depth to the characters. Instead this story reads as if a middle schooler has written it and thinks himself the protagonist and gives the protagonist all the power making the story One Dimensional dull and boring. He gets the power> becomes strongest (without doing anything) > makes whatever he wants >becomes a billionaire> revives his family (just because he wants to) > does any thing he wants. To me this is nothing but lazy writing. I write this review not to trash the story or the author but to make him better at this. Only positive point of this story is the update regularity