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great work author ........ amazing novel so far ....... hope u keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend]...........................
This is so good. Please more. Cant wait to read more. This is so good. Please more. Cant wait to read more.This is so good. Please more. Cant wait to read more.
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Reveal Spoiler Great chapter and story. I really like the length of the chapter. It could have easily been split into two. Still great. Cant wait to read more.
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Nice story. HP fanfic isn't often told in ex-soldier point of view. This is quite refreshing in many thousand hp fanfic. Good job author. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
this fic is good my only problem here is the military jargon that had no explanation of its meaning in chapter 2 this fic is good my only problem here is the military jargon that had no explanation of its meaning in chapter 2
great work author its fun specially when harry is trolling his way out with his speech, he's bull****ting skill is godlike great work author its fun specially when harry is trolling his way out with his speech, he's bull****ting skill is godlike
The previous 1start revies did a sh.itty job reading this novel... The thruth is that this HP fanfic is quite good... it you blank out some of the mature profanities(which are also good placement), this novel is good... I look forward how much the MC develop... ... this is really a refreshing one... Author state that there will be no romance.. which is good. (30yo soul in 11yo body) Dumbledor, I would place him in senile, manipulative, for the greater good character... and MC is not taking his s.hit.
Did the author think making his story with vulgarity every two words make it funny or more realistic ? If so,then you got it wrong,this story seems to be written be a teenager. The MC seems a little dumb,that was probably done on purpose (I hope),the vulgarities and way of thinking make it horrible to read,well,at least the fact that the mc is a soldier and dumb make it a little realistic maybe. I don't want to read more because you can't make a mc like this grow or evolve. Even if you success,it will be so forceful it will ruin the already trash story.
Great story ☺️. I hope it hasn't been dropped like so many others 😭. Please write more. 🌹💎
great work author ........ amazing novel so far ....... hope u keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend]...........................
This is so good. Please more. Cant wait to read more. This is so good. Please more. Cant wait to read more.This is so good. Please more. Cant wait to read more.
Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏
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Reveal Spoiler Great chapter and story. I really like the length of the chapter. It could have easily been split into two. Still great. Cant wait to read more.
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wow. So good. I am so excited to read more.wow. So good. I am so excited to read more.wow. So good. I am so excited to read more.wow. So good. I am so excited to read more.
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Nice story. HP fanfic isn't often told in ex-soldier point of view. This is quite refreshing in many thousand hp fanfic. Good job author. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
this fic is good my only problem here is the military jargon that had no explanation of its meaning in chapter 2 this fic is good my only problem here is the military jargon that had no explanation of its meaning in chapter 2
great work author its fun specially when harry is trolling his way out with his speech, he's bull****ting skill is godlike great work author its fun specially when harry is trolling his way out with his speech, he's bull****ting skill is godlike
The previous 1start revies did a sh.itty job reading this novel... The thruth is that this HP fanfic is quite good... it you blank out some of the mature profanities(which are also good placement), this novel is good... I look forward how much the MC develop... ... this is really a refreshing one... Author state that there will be no romance.. which is good. (30yo soul in 11yo body) Dumbledor, I would place him in senile, manipulative, for the greater good character... and MC is not taking his s.hit.
Did the author think making his story with vulgarity every two words make it funny or more realistic ? If so,then you got it wrong,this story seems to be written be a teenager. The MC seems a little dumb,that was probably done on purpose (I hope),the vulgarities and way of thinking make it horrible to read,well,at least the fact that the mc is a soldier and dumb make it a little realistic maybe. I don't want to read more because you can't make a mc like this grow or evolve. Even if you success,it will be so forceful it will ruin the already trash story.
Great story ☺️. I hope it hasn't been dropped like so many others 😭. Please write more. 🌹💎