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Write a reviewThe story is about the revenge of a 17 year old girl who had turned into a loving partner to the gangs boss named Hunter. Amalia found her knight in shining armor. The story should have restrictions to the reader because some chapters have taboo words not good for very young readers.
Constructive Criticism: (I tried my best as I've never done anything like this before) (It's just what I think) The plot of the story is very good. It's very immersive and gives me the feels. It sometimes makes me want to cry and that's a good thing. (I think) There are many errors in writing though. They use the wrong words and would sometimes miss out on a few words in a sentence that would make it flow better or just a few words at the end of the sentence that would make it a full complete sentence that has its thoughts fully written out. I'm not really sure about the world backround though. We don't know that country, state, city, town or whatever world they're in. Is it someplace real? Or is it an alternate world that is similar to Earth but not? We need names. I kinda read this all in like less than two days so I'm not sure of the update stability and so I just put a 5/5 for that.The character designs are pretty good too. That's all I have to say. You might want to get a proof reader just in case. It's not that bad, like I know what you mean and can fill in the blanks but it's not super good either. If this makes you mad then I'm sorry. This story has a lot of potential but the writing errors ruin it a bit for me. I'm still going to read it though. WQ:3/5. SU: 5/5. SD:5/5. CD: 5/5. WB: 1/5
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Reveal SpoilerI love this love and thank you for introducing this novel to us..................its full of action and very interesting...... M very excited for this novel and I want more and more chapter. π
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My new daughter... The twin of my other daughter... The mother of my granddaughter You have my unconditional support! Welcome to the family... My family. β€
I love how the story is developing, Everyone should give it a chance. you will be hooked the moment you start. The main leads are infectious and you can't get enough.
As i have read "The sins of Anna" (i read it in my other acc though, hehe) whom this novel collaborated with, i notice the strong ml and fl of this novel. Hmmm i really can tell this is a good novel to read that im hoping for more updates.. goodluck author...πππ
The story is about the revenge of a 17 year old girl who had turned into a loving partner to the gangs boss named Hunter. Amalia found her knight in shining armor. The story should have restrictions to the reader because some chapters have taboo words not good for very young readers.
Constructive Criticism: (I tried my best as I've never done anything like this before) (It's just what I think) The plot of the story is very good. It's very immersive and gives me the feels. It sometimes makes me want to cry and that's a good thing. (I think) There are many errors in writing though. They use the wrong words and would sometimes miss out on a few words in a sentence that would make it flow better or just a few words at the end of the sentence that would make it a full complete sentence that has its thoughts fully written out. I'm not really sure about the world backround though. We don't know that country, state, city, town or whatever world they're in. Is it someplace real? Or is it an alternate world that is similar to Earth but not? We need names. I kinda read this all in like less than two days so I'm not sure of the update stability and so I just put a 5/5 for that.The character designs are pretty good too. That's all I have to say. You might want to get a proof reader just in case. It's not that bad, like I know what you mean and can fill in the blanks but it's not super good either. If this makes you mad then I'm sorry. This story has a lot of potential but the writing errors ruin it a bit for me. I'm still going to read it though. WQ:3/5. SU: 5/5. SD:5/5. CD: 5/5. WB: 1/5
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Reveal SpoilerI love this love and thank you for introducing this novel to us..................its full of action and very interesting...... M very excited for this novel and I want more and more chapter. π
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My new daughter... The twin of my other daughter... The mother of my granddaughter You have my unconditional support! Welcome to the family... My family. β€
I love how the story is developing, Everyone should give it a chance. you will be hooked the moment you start. The main leads are infectious and you can't get enough.
As i have read "The sins of Anna" (i read it in my other acc though, hehe) whom this novel collaborated with, i notice the strong ml and fl of this novel. Hmmm i really can tell this is a good novel to read that im hoping for more updates.. goodluck author...πππ