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Hey, Roeselawik? May you please update this? It is a very good story so far, and I really want to read more of it. If you do decide to release the next chapter any time soon, I will eagerly read it.
Wow.... I love this book already. And your other books are just divine... Keep up the good work. And please keep em coming... Also, I noticed you stopped on Lightreader too.. I was seriously gonna kill myself if I couldn't finish your novels. SBS especially...
btw theres a guy posting the same thing on the site..... just wanted to say..................................................................
I think its great please update and post more chapters ill be surr to drop stones and likes and comments to get more chapters and see hownstory ends up
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
good story only question is if the anthor gonna add more? because I would love that and please let me know if you can. thx very much and hope you keep writing more wonderful storys
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update stability 1โ could have enjoyed it...but author didnโt continue ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ
Very good but pls more Chapters!!!!! Plsssssssssssssssssss More chaptersssssssss....................................................................m
Can you start posting on here again? I use webnovel more than scribblehub. Please???? โญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎ
This Novel is very detailed and I can picture the actions clearly. [img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=exp]
It's ok,no,no, Noyes to get a new one and it was a pleasure meeting you and your family are doing well and that you are not about that time and I will ๐ just got home from work and I will be there.
I wish it has more chapters to come.........................โฆโฆโฆ,โฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆ(:/) need more pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls its hard to sleep thinking of the next chaps
UPDATES PLEASE โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Good setting only the chapters are too short OVERALL it's good Good setting only the chapters are too short OVERALL it's good
Why does the novel stop we need more author pls continue the novel here .we neeeeeed mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Such a good poster image is wasted on this novel though it is good if you just release nine chapters and take a fucking five month release I will say it totally was a waste
Really good novel, I want more but it has not been updated for 5 months. Author I need more chapters please ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
A good novel at least for the few chapters it has................. It has potential to become the best r18 novel, and it seems the author has moved this novel at his patreon.
Needs more details and more info about the settings, more details of peopleโs appearance ๏ฟผ
Can we get more please :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
goo d so far but i need to read more to judge hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Five stars for the title. Seems like you need them to keep up with the random 1 star trolls. Good luck, I can already see you growing into a responsible man.
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Hey, Roeselawik? May you please update this? It is a very good story so far, and I really want to read more of it. If you do decide to release the next chapter any time soon, I will eagerly read it.
Wow.... I love this book already. And your other books are just divine... Keep up the good work. And please keep em coming... Also, I noticed you stopped on Lightreader too.. I was seriously gonna kill myself if I couldn't finish your novels. SBS especially...
btw theres a guy posting the same thing on the site..... just wanted to say..................................................................
I think its great please update and post more chapters ill be surr to drop stones and likes and comments to get more chapters and see hownstory ends up
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
good story only question is if the anthor gonna add more? because I would love that and please let me know if you can. thx very much and hope you keep writing more wonderful storys
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
ggjbghggghhhhgfdgggvvvfffvggghg. hhghhhhhhggvvvbbbbbbbb. vbbbbbbbbbbbbb. v. v.
update stability 1โ could have enjoyed it...but author didnโt continue ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ
Very good but pls more Chapters!!!!! Plsssssssssssssssssss More chaptersssssssss....................................................................m
Can you start posting on here again? I use webnovel more than scribblehub. Please???? โญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎโญโฉโฎ๏ผ๏ฟฃใธ๏ฟฃ๏ผโญโฉโฎ
This Novel is very detailed and I can picture the actions clearly. [img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=exp]
It's ok,no,no, Noyes to get a new one and it was a pleasure meeting you and your family are doing well and that you are not about that time and I will ๐ just got home from work and I will be there.
I wish it has more chapters to come.........................โฆโฆโฆ,โฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆ(:/) need more pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls its hard to sleep thinking of the next chaps
UPDATES PLEASE โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Good setting only the chapters are too short OVERALL it's good Good setting only the chapters are too short OVERALL it's good
Why does the novel stop we need more author pls continue the novel here .we neeeeeed mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Such a good poster image is wasted on this novel though it is good if you just release nine chapters and take a fucking five month release I will say it totally was a waste
Really good novel, I want more but it has not been updated for 5 months. Author I need more chapters please ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
A good novel at least for the few chapters it has................. It has potential to become the best r18 novel, and it seems the author has moved this novel at his patreon.
Needs more details and more info about the settings, more details of peopleโs appearance ๏ฟผ
Can we get more please :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
goo d so far but i need to read more to judge hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Five stars for the title. Seems like you need them to keep up with the random 1 star trolls. Good luck, I can already see you growing into a responsible man.
Why is your other novel is removed? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Uhhvggghhhgyygfrrrrfffggggggyyhhhyyttggggggggggggghggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhghhhhgghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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make more chapters please ................