Webnovel Author: balls_1124 - Fanfic Collection

i swear, if I have another person telling me that they dropped the fic due to ntr really need to get their brains checked. Read the chapter closely and understand the damn context. or do you just think that a simple fucking is enough to solve everyone's problems? I swear, some peolle are more insecure than the character I wrote with self esteem issues.

oy retard, next time, read the chapter, yeah? Daft cunt

my brother in christ, it's a woman. I explicitly made blaidd a woman. do you not fucking read?

its alright I suppose. The grammar is pretty good, and the story flow nicely. Though, the characters feel a bit too one dimentional. Also, this might just be a personal thing, but there isnt enough descriptions for the environment. Sure its fanfic and relies on the reader to have prexisting knowledge of how things look, but a little bit more couldve helped. other than that, the fic is pretty solid.

good braindead fun. turn off brain and enjoy. grammar is iffy, but, as long as you can get past that, it should be smooth sailing. smoothen out your brain, sit back and enjoy.

btw, ill try to keep the harem to a minimum(or at least those traveling with dave), so it doesn't become a cluster fuck to remember

awww, that's so sweet that I might have a cavity.