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I Will Rise Back: Obtaining The Overcome System
4.39 (22 ratings)
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Daniel, a resilient 26-year-old Filipino, had endured a lifetime of hardship and setbacks. Despite his relentless efforts to improve his circumstances, it seemed as though fate had conspired against him. Just as he was beginning to see a glimmer of hope on the horizon, a series of unjust events sent him spiraling into despair and the depths of depression.
Struggling to find meaning in his bleak existence, Daniel contemplated the unthinkable—ending his own life to escape the seemingly insurmountable challenges that plagued him. But just as he stood on the precipice of darkness, a mysterious voice echoed in his mind, accompanied by a radiant, glowing panel that materialized before him.
It was the Overcome System, a supernatural force offering Daniel a lifeline—a chance at redemption and retribution. The system presented him with a proposition: Take on a series of missions, and in return, he would be granted unimaginable lucrative rewards.
Intrigued and desperate for a way out of his desolate existence, Daniel accepted the system's offer. With newfound determination and a burning desire to prove his worth, he vowed to confront those who had wronged him, toppling every obstacle in his path as he ascended to the pinnacle of success.
Armed with the Overcome System as his unwavering ally, Daniel embarked on an extraordinary journey of self-discovery and self-transformation. He would confront adversaries both external and internal, facing his deepest fears, doubts, and insecurities head-on. As he completed each mission, the rewards bestowed upon him would fuel his ascent, providing him with the means to rebuild his life and reclaim the dignity and respect he so deserved.
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The story is so interesting and captivating making me eager to know what is going to happen next.
its a decent quality where I don't instantly notice errors and its not as bad as mtl but I haven't been analysing all of it so I might be wrong I haven't checked how many updates or fast it is as I just randomly picked this up but the story is better than most cliche novels where its kinda realistic or at least adds a realistic vibe but has the classic poor and poor family to rich and powerful with a system so some potential the characters don't feel that 2d compared to Chinese characters that mostly show-off or are envious you can see that some characters are indeed hurt and their actions so they could seem to be like real people with the background there hasnt been much development with 11 chapters but I wonder how system will work with a seeming modern world
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To be honest, Daniel's life is a mess! His stupid girlfriend is an idiot. I want to watch him rise to the point where he can destroy the useless company and murder his two-timing girlfriend without going to jail. The book has close to no flaws. It's an interesting read.
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Has a fresh take on the classic rich to poor face slapping genre, which I am liking so far. It's also interesting to see this genre from a new culture. While it's only a few chapters in, it shows promise and has good potential. I can't wait to see where the author takes the story from here. I'll update my review once more chapters are released, but for now, I'm hopeful and enjoying what I have read so far. I hope the author keeps up the good work!
Ang ganda ng kwento. Nakakatuwa basahin, at naiyak ako sa simula. Kung totoo lang sya gusto ko makilala si Daniel sa personal. Try nyo din po basahin.
The story features a captivating world-building process and explores unique themes not commonly found in novels. One aspect I appreciate is the author's ability to approach real-life issues in a thought-provoking and imaginative manner without coming across as didactic. The issues seamlessly intertwine with the plot, making for a seamless and engaging read.
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The world building in chapter 1 is very good and officeife in chapter 2 is something I can relate. Keep up the good work. I recommended this to anyone as I will keep reading this.
Honestly, this isn't my cup of tea, so take my review with a grain of salt. I think your first few chapters are too depressing to catch reader's attention. It's a nice way to open up a story, but if you get welcomed with all that downs, I think most wouldn't try to read the rest. I suggest making the first chapter something cheery, like a peek to the future of him and his system then jumping to the depressing flashback. At least, the readers will have some hope to hold on to and keep forging forward. I mean, even if it's introduced at the fifth chapter, I think not many light readers would reach there. Other than that, it was a completely great story. The setting, the realism, perfect. 👍
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Nice! The opening is attractive and the style is interesting. I liked the accuracy of the details. I think it only lacks a good cover.
Mabagal takbo ng kwento pero trip ko naman kase nasusubayabyan yung slow growth ng MC. kita yung build up ng bawat meron siya. Kita mo na pinaghirapan talaga n'ya.
The story is both boring and interesting at the same time. I cant explain it. but that's how I feel about the story so far. the mc is too stupidly kind and stupid. but author does give reasons behind mcs actions and is somehow explained and justified despite being stupid. I hope mc can have a little bit of ruthlessness and take some form of deserve vengeance. Too early to judge but hoping.
The story is interesting. You will like it if you enjoy a more realistic approach to a fantasy novel. The movement of the story is a little slow for my taste but overall is a decent read. I wish the story moves a little faster.
Sir DL congrats po ulit. nagreview na po ako. basahin and share ko po sa mga friends na mahilig magbasa.
The story so far is interesting, I just think that the pacing of the story is slow. not a bad thing, but might get boring if it remains as slow as this. I find the characters likable. I want to see where this goes.
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Hey, what's up everyone? It's your friendly neighborhood author here. First off, I just wanted to give a big shoutout to all of you amazing people who decided to give my web novel a shot. Seriously, you're all awesome. I hope you're enjoying the ride so far. Writing a novel is a new adventure for me, so please bear with me if there are any awkward moments along the way. But hey, life is all about taking risks, right? I promise I'll get the hang of it eventually! And guess what? I just created a Discord server for our novel. It's the perfect place for us to talk about anything and everything. We'll have discussions about the novel, share illustrations, drop location pins, chat about our daily lives, and of course, post some dank and based memes. The server is open to all, so come join the fun at discord.gg/gavUjDTw! I'm always open to feedback, comments, critiques, and suggestions. So, don't hesitate to share your thoughts on the novel. I promise I won't cry... too much. ;) Thank you again for taking the time to read my work. You guys rock! So, I hope you stick around, keep reading, and keep spreading the word. Who knows, maybe one day we'll have a Netflix adaptation of our little story! Cheers, DL_Mondays