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Ignarock ~Deus Ex Machina~
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The visions filled the young boy dreams, he saw numerous possibility on how he could ended up in the future.
Whether it was to be a King of Justice and the embodiment of Demonic Presence, either way he would rule the world or became a tyrant.
Yet, there was something peculiar about his visions. There was a steel giant who seems to be the epitome of God yet also filled the role of Demon.
And he was the one who shall be behind the cockpit of this steel giant.
This is the tale of Adonia, the young boy who is fated to be the King of Ignarock, the steel giant who shall smite all forms of existence who he deemed to be unworthy!
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I can't really post a complete review, but from what I read. This novel has potential. Although the beginning doesn't let the reader rest, as it is really dense, the story telling is going smoothly, and let's say that the story is passable from now. With the title of the novel, it could be interesting. Just make sure to not make the chapters hard to read. There's also some mistakes and typos, but I'll say it's just because you barely started and you haven't made a serious edit yet. You'll improve with time. Have fun writing~
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5 star because -- why not. Seriously though, I kinda agree with AhraManyu review. Your first chapter is dense and packed with description. Oh, before reading further, I need to say this review is subjective. So, uh, feel free to take it or leave it. I often read a paragraph and like 'huh, what did I read again,' which make me need to reread the paragraph all over again to understand the meaning. You'll want to rewrite that chapter later because after all, that'll become your reader first impression about your story. If the first chapter is that heavy, most of them will think that how you handle the following chapters. Try to reduce redundant words and give readers a glimpse of how your stories will go. Put yourself into the reader perspective and then think what hook can you put into the first chapter, which makes even you want to read the following chapters. But hey, that is only my subjective suggestion. Feel free to leave it if you think it doesn't agree with it.