In DC, With Instant Death... I Just Want To Live A Normal Life

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MrNek

The author weakens the character by allowing others to resurrect people after killings committed by Yogiri. Yogiri's power represents not just killing with a mere wish, but the absolute inevitability and end of all existence. After death from Yogiri's abilities, there is no heaven, no hell, no afterlife as a ghost or a vengeful spirit. It's a metaphysical point in the narrative where NOTHING follows. By resurrecting after Yogiri’s killings, you erase the very idea of inevitable end that defines the power. It is precisely this inevitability that makes Takato's powers so interesting. They are interesting because no matter how strong or powerful you are, if Takato orders you to die, you will die.

LV 14

Paracausality

Author doesn’t understand what yogiris powers actually are, he has characters revive people he’s killed and reduced him to a “son of death”. Yogiris powers represent the inevitability of the end of all existence. There is no revival, no afterlife, no hell or heaven. Everything is erased and gone for good because it no longer exists. It transcends physical, metaphysical concepts, space time you name it. Not only are the powers severely nerfed the mc is a Mary stue that plays video games

LV 5

Master_Cheif

Itachi1010 mate I like your stories but I hate the fact you usually drop stories and start new ones please don't drop your other works just cuz you started this one now I'm begging yah

LV 3

Horny_Dawg

The fanfic is good, but there are two things that I PERSONALLY don't like. 1. MC was nerfed to the ground, he is not the personification of the end of all things, he is just 'the son of death' meh. He doesn't even have the seals that the Original MC had, he was reduced from a Multiversal level character, to universal. In other words, all the 'great powers' Lucifer, Michael, the Eternals, etc are stronger than him. 2. The fact that he is the son of death, since he has the power of death and the end of all things, I originally thought he would be romantically paired with Death from Endless, but no, from what I've seen so far, he will be left with the boring choice that is Diana. 3. The fact that he wants to live a normal life. Yeah, yeah, he killed many, killed the universe, blah, blah, but with this life experience, he must know that no matter the world, the force will always make you untouchable, and with his potential, he chooses to be a random Joe, and just uses his power for convenience. I'm not telling him to become a Mary Sue character, but to take a position according to his powers. Other than that, you can read without thinking too much.

LV 2

Alucard_7894

I didn't the read the story completely and 3 star is just to keep the balance. Anyway the reason I want to leave a review is because of the chapter 1 and 2, first of all, spoiler alert but it's not a really a spoiler since you will read it in one and two chapter. I just want to know what is the obsession with the starting a fanfic with MC's girlfriend cheating on him with his friends, I'm mean what's up, people seem to not know any other ways. Also MC didn't really care, oh by the way he is already in DC world when his gur cheat on him, is not one of those that MC stupidity kill his girlfriend and the men next to her and then get killed. All of this to just obviously start a relationship with wonder woman, so cliche. A MC with instant death in DC would be amazing but this, well this belong to garbage bag . Anyway I just don't like it, obviously this is only my opinion, if you want, give it a try, you might like it.

LV 14

Latife

The general problem of the main character types who want to live this kind of normal life but is ridiculously strong and remain completely passive, they make the story straight and as a result it becomes completely boring because you can easily predict how the series will progress from the title, well, when you include character processing, it goes completely downhill.

LV 5

Mercenary19191922

trash 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

LV 2

Endo_2014

if you can't write a character with instant death, then please don't write from the begining, why write it then proceed to nerf the sh*t out of him, doesn't make much sense to me

LV 14

Tablecat

It is told that the mc canvery is smart, but it doesn't seem like it at all, and he just acts like a rock

LV 13

HHHH

It's not good.Try to be creative with story writing.

LV 13

troublesome

if he wants a simple life then remove that dc/op/action kind of tag, add sliceoflife/romance/adulthood kind of tag,, and one of the worst FF this is, i don't want to read a FF where a guy is obsessed with online gaming,, i don't want to abuse author that's the best I can do,, if this FF appears again in my feed, I'll curse author 100 times

LV 3

Yolo_Solo_6418

Hm this was a well uh interesting read personally it was way too op for my liking yet somehow the author managed to butcher his powers anyhow When you/people write these super op OC’s who are so strong that there maybe like 5 people in the verse max who MIGHT be able to beat them you’ve ruined the story Imagine I told you to read Naruto then you read it and he has mastery of all 5 chakra natures wood style, chakra chains, super good at sealing, kurama is best friend. All this by the beginning of the story it’s not fun cause he just one taps everyone there’s literally no story So when you write these super op OC’s and think “wow he’s such a complex character and has a lot of nuance” no what you wrote was a character with a terribly disguised HUMILIATION/FAILURE KINK that’s what you wrote That’s like if a billionaire said he want to live as a middle lower class person. That’s just plain stupid

LV 4

dragonic

This novel is complete garbage. The author said he wants the MC to have a calm life, but he joins Wonder Woman's company, and then he turns out to be a wuss.

LV 4

LectorDelMundo

Está bien entretenida y agradable la lectura, 10/10 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 1

MaSeTeR

On chapter 12, after reading one sentence about China being the world's top producer of advanced machines, I realized that this was a translation of a Chinese fanfiction. It made sense why the protagonist's powers were so nerfed, and his sense of intuition was described as "rusty." Yeah, I believed it was nonsense.

LV 10

Cyber_4510

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LV 4

DragoRyen

it is good story, MC is overpowered, but keep in mind this story have alot of lore/theory or something like that. Still it is a good story

LV 12

Royalz_One

I honestly love the story I believe you are building something great I don't like the slow releases love the character development love the world's building I believe what you are doing gives him depth as a character frankly in terms of writing this is great just please don't drop it

LV 1

AntiHaremSect

Ce livre mérite une bien meilleure note. Je ne comprends pas comment elle peut recevoir une note plus basse que certaines fanfiction uniquement fait à l'ia.