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where ancient times were forgotten, a child will have the opportunity to bring that strength to the present, thanks to his Master Sinbad
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There is a solid basis of an idea here but it's just not executed very well, i recommend a proof reader/editor to help iron out grammatical errods and story ideas before posting. Some of the characters seem to react or say things odd for there character (but thats ok because it's a fanfic) but make sure they arent to over the top. Finally have a plan as to where you want the story to go.
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Good idea but the mc is talentless to the point of spending months training without much to show for it ...............................................................