In Naruto As Zoro

LV 15

Bapabooey

It's only a few chapters in, but my lord it is bad. Story is all over the place, super fast paced, can't even tell who's talking and when they're talking because author doesn't make the phrases any different than just a regular sentence, grammar needs major work, no explanation on anything to do with the world, if somebody doesn't know Naruto, they wouldn't know it by reading this, that's for sure. It feels like it was written by a 10 year old.

LV 4

Andrew_Bonds

you just need to scrap this or edit the first few chapters. first fanfic I've read having zoro being the main template