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Well what to say..... Its a good story only real complaint is the constant mix up of her him he and she. Most of the time when talking about a female character it will be like. He was bashfuly looking at the ground. And the he should have been a She. You will see this thru out the chapters. My advice to the author is to get someone to prof read or edit the chapter. Cuz honestly those are dumb mistakes
Whoever read this stop if you dont want a forceful mc. I mean he forcefully kiss a girl and make bet with some stupid sect master. And the worst thing is xia qinyue fucking got raped? Fuck this ****
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
To many writing mistakes which makes it way to confusing to read. 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
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Well this novel are very good ............ So I m funs of you author ............... I hope theirs alot more chapters ........ Thanks for this novel
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So good So good So good So good So good So good I really like the story but he can be more op like super op but it's So good ........,.................................. ............................,....................I aslo have a story click my name and tell me what you think I will be gone for a while tho
THIS PERSON DOES NOT NO THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE. THEY KEEP MIXING UP HE AND SHE. This is pissing me off. I still want to read it, but I can feel my brain cells dying
Está buena pero es muy lenta las actualizaciones ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhjjjjhhhhhhhhh más rápido por favorrrrrrrrr4rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr te felicito por la novela
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The author can't even give his MC an identity so stole a popular one. I feel like reading a gay novel, he can't even use proper pronoun. 'What's wrong with you!' It's not that hard (Use She or her if it's a girl) and (Use he or his for boys).
Good idea but too difficult to read.Get an editor author. ,........,.....,...,...,..,.,.,...,....,..,.......,..........,...............,........,.....,...,...,.., .,
I'm loving the story so far. I find it amusing and the fact that he has an infinite system is just funny :P. Can you make it so he can go to other novels ? Staying in one with an infinite system seems like it would get a bit boring. Good work though, keep uploading.
Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW! Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW! Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW!
It's a good story. but please read your chapter before posting so you edit the small mistakes. Thank you for this amazing fanfic. hope you will continue till the end.
An OP system with pathetic protagonist. 1 - He can buy anything from the system (knowledge - Experience - skills - blood bloodlines - items (potions, weapons, cultivation books and etc) so why spend 2 years training if you could buy battle experiences? 2 - Why is he going after all the heroines of the yunche? Following the plot with the yunche is ridiculous, This novel is like those fanfic of naruto. Nothing new. Examples> A - catch all the ice fairies; B - Give veins of the yunche to another person (in this case I thought it was going to be the little girl who seems to have some connection with the evil god - reincarnation -), dude there is a lot of new and innovative stuff, the authors keep repeating themselves. 3 - Even MC having supreme techniques are still can overcome realms. To make matters worse vein of the universe and good for nothing. 4 - MC forgets to fly and use teleportation 5 - He said that he was going to change plot, but only real change was to conquer the tiazinha. it is common sense that once he catches the woman before the yun che she would never be the yunche. 6 - Yunche is not as stupid as portrayed in Fanfict, especially in relation to the princess, because it was not love at first sight. 7 - The heroines fall in love very easily (admiration is one thing and love is another). In the two years that he spent training he could be winning them. For this novel to get median has to improve a lot. The initial idea is one of the best I have ever seen, but failed ugly to put on paper.
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