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Hello there,
Before you dive into reading this novel, I would like to mention that it is not a story written for entertainment purposes. I am writing this as a way to improve my English skills. I work at an IT firm, which means I will only be able to upload 2-3 chapters per week. Please keep in mind that I am not an experienced writer, so expect a mid to low-level novel. However, my colleagues are supporting me, so I hope you can give it a try.
Please note that there will be no harem in this novel. There will be a romantic aspect to it, but it will be slowly revealed. The main character is overpowered but likes to be in the spotlight.
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I would say the story has a very interesting premise and has a lot of potential but you only lack when it comes to the structure of sentences and conveying what exactly is going on, so I would suggest hiring a good editor and rewriting the story, not a full blown rewrite but adjusting the chapters but I won’t lie if you were to explain things more and were able to give us a better picture of the events going on, this could be a toptier fanfiction, like for example how he looks, skin tone, hair color, parents looks, add pov for certain characters, an explanation for why he’s doing things, an explanation for who exactly certain characters are rather than noting them in passing
I've been reading for a long time and for me, when the words between 'example' mean it's a thought, it's strange for me to read, especially conversations that don't seem to have much feeling
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Okay so I have just finished reading 4th chapter. And, well, I can say that at least the idea of the ff is intriguing. Grammar is decent. Sometimes I feel like there are too many repetetive words in neighboring sentences. Definitely need to check conditionals’ rules and, at least, just look through English punctuation. Speech is a bit “sturdy” and way too “official”. You should add more conversational words, more phrasal verbs, more synonyms so to avoid repetitions, and maybe consider adding some literary receptions( like comparison, metaphor, exaggeration, and etc). Overall, I would say nice ff but there is still room for improvement.