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this story follows the main character Alkaif a normal high school kid who wants live an ordinary life but everything changes when he gets into a situation where he had to let his inner demon takeover for surviving
the demon ended up saving him but slowly that demon is taking over and sending Alkaif in despair little by little will this lead to a tragic end or will it stop
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This is good but you should work on your grammar and vocabulary improve on your story telling the premise is good but try and explain more on what's happening people might get lost what story is trying to do but overall it's really fresh story and I think it has a great potential if you work on your skills as a writer you should be able to create a great story just don't rush it
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I think you should explain more about the main character and elaborate what kind of person he is and his personality and try to focus on other characters as well and make the chapter a bit longer