Is It Wrong To Act Mysteriously In the Dungeon?(LOTM/Danmachi)

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LordInsanity

MC has a LOTM system. Former useless fat NEET reincarnated into Danmachi pre-canon. Wears his artifacts (Mask, cloak, shoes) for no fucking reason and enters Hostess of Fertility. Anyone who's read danmachi knows that Freya is Syr, and that she can see souls. So Hurrdurr what do we expect when she's shocked to find souls in all of his artifacts? And why the **** did he even wear them in the first place? Takes Lily as an appetence beyonder for no apparent reason Suddenly acts like BFFs with Ryuu? Constantly makes mistakes like almost slipping up by almost saying his real name while in disguise. For some reason, he engages in combat with overconfidence only to fail like a ******* since he literally has no practice or training of any sort.' What? Are you going to tell me some fatass neet has a fucking blackbelt and 69 years of contract assassin experience? BS. He enters dungeon with no skills other than the shit he gets from drinking potions. I mean seriously you're facing monsters, just use some valis to pay for a tutor from the guild or some shit. Makes a fucking scene for no reason after killing the evilus people. Are you going to say it's for acting? Did the author explain what the thief pathway of acting is? Is it stealing? I don't know? But wooow he says that he the black emperor killed them all, gg. Author doesn't explain MC's thought process, or anything. MC is apparently some sort of veteran in fighting since he could take a whole familia with Ryuu. What gives him the motivation to do that? Shouldn't he just start by acting and gaining strength and not showboating without any thought? The only practice he's done is stealing and killing mobs in the dungeon? Has he fought any person with intelligence? Is he just spamming his skills hoping to kill someone? He used that gun of his and only managed to injure someone, what a big surprise, am I right?

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saed_saeed

I really hate it when everyone put a system inside their MC and just conveniently get everything from the start then why should I even read it? If you have read lord of the mysteries then you should know that, it's not a friendly world to anyone without exception

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Moltem

I usually list the fanfic, I like in my mind by tiers, this one was in my top top top tier the one which has only like 2 novels there and this is the 3rd never expected it to be fanfic, I seriously hope u continue this and never drop it, please I beg of u master. you caught the aspect of lotm totally.

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spectermerlin

I begeth thee author, please return and bless us more with the chapters of this masterpiece. On a side note, this is a really good fanfic. It has LOTM elements mixed into it, the MC and his crazy beyonder cast is likeable (theyre a bit silly), and it somehow fits right into Danmachi.

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UnholyMorning

Bad FF. Author makes idiotic goofy MC. I feel that the author didn't pay much attention to the whole LOTM. I feel that the author is only too concerned with just making a lot of words by writing nonsense in this FF story. The point is that every behavior that MC has is just a weeb who doesn't understand anything (idiot) regarding LOTM. He only knows how much powerful 'stuff' LOTM is (but doesn't know the 'core' of the whole story). It's better for other readers to leave this FF, if you want to find an interesting story without wasting your time.

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dao_venom

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HereForGoodRead

Very good but the things with Lilly and the hostess if fertility was kinda stupid I mean he’s years before canon he can take thing slow

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darkkelbek

Well this is more like an idea to make a LotM fanfic without the need of a system in another world, you can make it like klein the mc of LOTM already defeated the outer gods and after many 100 or 1000 of years he decide to travel the univer and travel to others univers and worlds so in some of this world he got some student and teach him how to became a beyonder and open the spirit world so they can gather in the future more ingredients, and his reason for doing this is because there is some fate with this people and to get some beliver in some world to stabilize himself after using a lot to travel through univers, and in some cases he granted some people wishing, as part of his miracle invover abilities, and in some cases he bring some people if their is fate to other world and leave them in some world with enough potion and material to start a tarot club in their with the only mission to get more beliver and he will rewand them with wishing small or big depending of how well they are doing, with this there is no need for a system and in case of a world full a cultivation the way will be klein create a cultivation metho to become a cultivator the can use beyonder way instead of potion and follow half of the cultivation way and keeping the beyonders means.

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THE_Bird

it's an amazing book with great potential. keep on writing! the story is great with good pacing and understandable timelines and character reactions and the power system is intriguing.

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Gotye_nose

this is fantastic and a great read. .................................................... ......... ........................ ...................

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Spelloyal

It should be a crime to write something that good. I feel that in addition to representing well the concept of LOTM mystery, the fanfic in general is very interesting and pleasant to read. The only small problem is that maybe the mc shouldn't be strong enough to help Ryuu when he is still a beyonder sequence 9 and adventurer lvl 1

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HUNTER_X_23

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Aidenryu

Good Job And keep it up. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .

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Ressay_Samaras

Awsome writting , i hope u can update more of it , and thank u about the story 💓 i enjoy it , since i love lotm and danmachi , hope more charachters get into the story and more beyonders power , i like when the author write about the abilities and how to use them

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The1Anarchy

Wonderful. I used to read this work, but forgot about it after your "death". I went and saw the update. Went back to sleep for an indefinite amount of time? Or will the book continue? I apologize for this question. I just need to understand whether it makes sense for me to sit and wait for this fanfic?

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Faraday_

Please update this, I hope you read my comment. Just use what there is in your mind and write it. At least the story still the same, like the MC is still act mysteriously. Please dont drop it. Cause I need to search other novel and that too tiring.

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Luddic_Path

A hidden gem of a book M . Kw

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gachakiller

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Alif_Siap

it has a lot potential you can rewrite if you thing that is a mistake👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍