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I really like this story. Vivid storytelling. I hope more ppl read n support this interesting book. Cant wait for the story to develop more.
After reading six chapters, I have to say that the whole world is intriguing. The townpeople are the worst. I just want to honestly say that the pacing is a bit slow. Overall, I like the story!
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Okay, so I haven't read it yet. But the poster is already making me interested in it. And it's synopsis is quite mysterious and can't guess what there will be. BUT not a clique` romance, it's different from my preferred romance stories, but I am up for new readings. I loved how the author has kept it mysterious and interesting.
This is a world-building novel. This story requires a reader to build up concentration and imagine the scenes in their head. If one is just here for a quick read, very unlikely you would find this enjoyable. As a world-building writer myself. I enjoyed it. I think the grammars are alright to breeze through, I didn't think it affected the reading experience. This is a sexual/erotic content kind of novel. I don't mind it at all. :)
Dear author, when will hero meet our Charis?😭 Why are torturing your readers like this? I'm so so in love with this story, every three chapters will bring readers to new things. The most outstanding factor of this story is it's strong world background and fully developed characters even if they are side ones.
Well written. Good story. It has a lot of potential. I've also read your other novel and I can see that you've really improved in your writing quality. Excellent work. Keep it up. Your readers now just need a stable updates. 😅
I really don't know what else to say. The world is so brilliantly fleshed out you find no stress picturing yourself as a bystander, a courtier or even one of the characters. Updates come as promised, which is more than I can say for some romance authors. And the development of the story goes at a delicate but really smooth pace. You get that cliffhanger right where you need it. Its a hook.
I read it and I like it so far. The way you demonstrate the characters and the background it has a unique flow int it. The only flaw I see maybe the few update, but it's on purpose to make the reader wanting more and more! It's a Great one!👌
I have read author's other work "La Serpiente" and it was a very interesting story. Stating this one it's just mind blowing and expertly written. The flow of scenes, vocabulary usage is very high and sentence structures are like written by a pro. Everything is very detailed let alone the major plotline which is just "WHOA!" In simple words.
Must read this book❤ I can only say it contains many messages hidden within this wonderful narration. It has the concept of true beauty as the title states the whole thing. All the characters are stuck into their own illusions regarding beauty. Just read it and it won't disappoint you in anyway. ❤😍
A whole new fantasy to read, quite different from the ones that only state fairies and slayers. It's set into a reign with kings and queens but the concept of goblin as a FL is very interesting thing. To make such an odd mythical creature lead is a great step.❤
Love how its a little bit erotic and then gore at the same time. XD It surely is interesting to read. Plot and characters are well written. Can't wait to read for more! Keep it up! :D (review trade)
I really liked the story so far. Development is good. What I liked the most is the thought process of the author because the story has clarity. It is a well written novel. Keep up the good work.
Hey! Your work is great! It's nice story, keep up with the good job, author! 😊 I make a story too so pls check it out and give it some reviews and stars later! 😊 Mine's : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705
Awesome story. Aysel. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
As the story develops and you get acquainted, so to speak, with the characters, the first impression confirms itself: the author knows how to manage the chapters. Also, he/she knows how conduct the flow of events, knows how to create good characters, and once you get used to this prose style, that is... *Très chic!* you'll feel immerse in this unique narrative. I believe bit everyone will appreciate the subtleness or how the story is detailed, but I really do. Interestingly, the first chapters didn't prepare you for what comes next, and I'm glad the author doesn't throw the whole plot in your face in the first two pages and keep beating it as a dirty carpet for the duration of the novel. It's on my library and I'm awaiting for more OMG moments. If you like fantasy with convoluted plotlines, well written characters, descritive scenes and subtle humor, this is the novel you want to read next.
I barely write reviews but this one is really good. A whole different story when compared to usual stories. This author has excellent English skills and everything is depicted well. When it comes to story...I am genuinely pleased. I hope FL gets more stronger and powerful.
Your writing Quality is good, made from your very own imagination. Every time I read, I can picture it out clearly. I gave you 5 stars, I hope you will still release updates from here onwards.
i like the way you describe the world the first chapter was a little short for me. however i enjoyed reading it but there a few things i need to point out i am not the best editor. Tips Some of the sentence was a bit short i felt like it could have been long also watch out where your are placing your commas. Other then that i think you did a good job well done
Hi. I liked It so far, and I think the author has terrific writing skills. The world described in the novel seems vivid, and impacts the events. It's good. I've got a bit confused, however, with choice of narrative style. It has screenplay elements here and there. It's not a problem, it just stands out. The other point is, sometimes the MC, mainly in the 3 First chapters, lacks emotion. But it gets better as the story goes on. Overall, an interesting book, an interesting narrative. Will keep following for sure.
I actually read Aristocratic heels and quite liked it although I am not into erotica. Hoping the sensual scenes will be a bit different in this one. But hey, another book in my library, that's a gain. I'm bad at constructive criticism, so all I can give you is my support and encouragement. Good luck, author!
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The author paints a pretty picture with her words. The reader can clearly visualize the beautiful world she's bringing to life on the page. There are a few grammatical errors that really need fixing to make the backgrounds and dialogue pop out more but it is easily an understandable work that deserves praise. The protagonist herself feels like an ugly duckling who will eventually become the belle of the ball, so to speak. The way people of the kingdom treat her like the plague irritates me so much that I'm ready to laugh in their faces when she does become the chosen one or the most beautiful one out there. I am interested to see how this comes about as I've only finished the first few chapters. Looking forward to more enjoyment reading this story! Cheers.
I have been following this story closely for the past few weeks and I am genuinely pleased. It was not your usual romance story, for it was also infused with fantasy which kept it interesting and mysterious! ML (or I hope he is) - He was not your perfect ML, but my advice to fellow readers to not give up and kept reading. I hope Author can promise a happy ending here 😆 Love scene (a.k.a sex) - I have read Author's other one shot, which was really good. So I don't have any comment on this one. It was described in a very beautiful way, without losing the essence of the whole storyline. Steamy and sexy at the same time. Overall, I am having a good time and declare myself as one of your readers. I am definitely waiting patiently for your next chapters. ♥️♥️♥️
Definitely something new to read which I absolutely love. The elaboration of characters and world background is done pretty well. You can just close your eyes and visit the kingdom yourself. ♥️ So far, a good job!😊 Keep it up dear author!👍 ♥️♥️♥️♥️
The story has a good start and an entertaining plot. The grammar is fine. I have kept it in my library to continue reading it, it has caught my attention 😀 (explicitid sneces😏) XD
Very nice book, this will definitely get exposure soon. I like it as it fits my needs personally🤣 magic, royalty, helplessness and mystery. Love it!!! Keep working hard Aysel!! Good luckkk
Though I haven't read the main story but base on the synopsis, Great work and it's really interesting. I will try and read it whenever I'm chance because I like anything that revolves with romance
Exp 😉😙😌😉😙😌😉😎🤔😉😃🤔😙🤔😋🤔😆🤣😘😆 😘☺️😀☺️☺️🤔😍🙂☺️😅🤣😄😆😋😙🤣😘😙🤣😉😎🤔😉😎😗😋🤔😙🤔😙🤔😙🤔😎😗😎😆😋😙🤣😄😙😃😂😅😉😎😗😃😂😚😆🤣😄😚☺️🤗🤗😚☺️😅🤣😙🤣😉😎🤔😍🙂
I really like this story. Vivid storytelling. I hope more ppl read n support this interesting book. Cant wait for the story to develop more.
After reading six chapters, I have to say that the whole world is intriguing. The townpeople are the worst. I just want to honestly say that the pacing is a bit slow. Overall, I like the story!
Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting. Too lazy o write anything but novel's interesting.
Okay, so I haven't read it yet. But the poster is already making me interested in it. And it's synopsis is quite mysterious and can't guess what there will be. BUT not a clique` romance, it's different from my preferred romance stories, but I am up for new readings. I loved how the author has kept it mysterious and interesting.
This is a world-building novel. This story requires a reader to build up concentration and imagine the scenes in their head. If one is just here for a quick read, very unlikely you would find this enjoyable. As a world-building writer myself. I enjoyed it. I think the grammars are alright to breeze through, I didn't think it affected the reading experience. This is a sexual/erotic content kind of novel. I don't mind it at all. :)
Dear author, when will hero meet our Charis?😭 Why are torturing your readers like this? I'm so so in love with this story, every three chapters will bring readers to new things. The most outstanding factor of this story is it's strong world background and fully developed characters even if they are side ones.
Well written. Good story. It has a lot of potential. I've also read your other novel and I can see that you've really improved in your writing quality. Excellent work. Keep it up. Your readers now just need a stable updates. 😅
I really don't know what else to say. The world is so brilliantly fleshed out you find no stress picturing yourself as a bystander, a courtier or even one of the characters. Updates come as promised, which is more than I can say for some romance authors. And the development of the story goes at a delicate but really smooth pace. You get that cliffhanger right where you need it. Its a hook.
I read it and I like it so far. The way you demonstrate the characters and the background it has a unique flow int it. The only flaw I see maybe the few update, but it's on purpose to make the reader wanting more and more! It's a Great one!👌
I have read author's other work "La Serpiente" and it was a very interesting story. Stating this one it's just mind blowing and expertly written. The flow of scenes, vocabulary usage is very high and sentence structures are like written by a pro. Everything is very detailed let alone the major plotline which is just "WHOA!" In simple words.
Must read this book❤ I can only say it contains many messages hidden within this wonderful narration. It has the concept of true beauty as the title states the whole thing. All the characters are stuck into their own illusions regarding beauty. Just read it and it won't disappoint you in anyway. ❤😍
A whole new fantasy to read, quite different from the ones that only state fairies and slayers. It's set into a reign with kings and queens but the concept of goblin as a FL is very interesting thing. To make such an odd mythical creature lead is a great step.❤
Love how its a little bit erotic and then gore at the same time. XD It surely is interesting to read. Plot and characters are well written. Can't wait to read for more! Keep it up! :D (review trade)
I really liked the story so far. Development is good. What I liked the most is the thought process of the author because the story has clarity. It is a well written novel. Keep up the good work.
Hey! Your work is great! It's nice story, keep up with the good job, author! 😊 I make a story too so pls check it out and give it some reviews and stars later! 😊 Mine's : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705
Awesome story. Aysel. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
As the story develops and you get acquainted, so to speak, with the characters, the first impression confirms itself: the author knows how to manage the chapters. Also, he/she knows how conduct the flow of events, knows how to create good characters, and once you get used to this prose style, that is... *Très chic!* you'll feel immerse in this unique narrative. I believe bit everyone will appreciate the subtleness or how the story is detailed, but I really do. Interestingly, the first chapters didn't prepare you for what comes next, and I'm glad the author doesn't throw the whole plot in your face in the first two pages and keep beating it as a dirty carpet for the duration of the novel. It's on my library and I'm awaiting for more OMG moments. If you like fantasy with convoluted plotlines, well written characters, descritive scenes and subtle humor, this is the novel you want to read next.
I barely write reviews but this one is really good. A whole different story when compared to usual stories. This author has excellent English skills and everything is depicted well. When it comes to story...I am genuinely pleased. I hope FL gets more stronger and powerful.
Your writing Quality is good, made from your very own imagination. Every time I read, I can picture it out clearly. I gave you 5 stars, I hope you will still release updates from here onwards.
i like the way you describe the world the first chapter was a little short for me. however i enjoyed reading it but there a few things i need to point out i am not the best editor. Tips Some of the sentence was a bit short i felt like it could have been long also watch out where your are placing your commas. Other then that i think you did a good job well done
Hi. I liked It so far, and I think the author has terrific writing skills. The world described in the novel seems vivid, and impacts the events. It's good. I've got a bit confused, however, with choice of narrative style. It has screenplay elements here and there. It's not a problem, it just stands out. The other point is, sometimes the MC, mainly in the 3 First chapters, lacks emotion. But it gets better as the story goes on. Overall, an interesting book, an interesting narrative. Will keep following for sure.
I actually read Aristocratic heels and quite liked it although I am not into erotica. Hoping the sensual scenes will be a bit different in this one. But hey, another book in my library, that's a gain. I'm bad at constructive criticism, so all I can give you is my support and encouragement. Good luck, author!
i love it! i want more! ^_^ i love it! i want more! ^_^ i love it! i want more! ^_^ i love it! i want more! ^_^ i love it! i want more! ^_^ i love it! i want more! ^_^ i love it! i want more! ^_^
Reveal Spoiler The author paints a pretty picture with her words. The reader can clearly visualize the beautiful world she's bringing to life on the page. There are a few grammatical errors that really need fixing to make the backgrounds and dialogue pop out more but it is easily an understandable work that deserves praise. The protagonist herself feels like an ugly duckling who will eventually become the belle of the ball, so to speak. The way people of the kingdom treat her like the plague irritates me so much that I'm ready to laugh in their faces when she does become the chosen one or the most beautiful one out there. I am interested to see how this comes about as I've only finished the first few chapters. Looking forward to more enjoyment reading this story! Cheers.
I have been following this story closely for the past few weeks and I am genuinely pleased. It was not your usual romance story, for it was also infused with fantasy which kept it interesting and mysterious! ML (or I hope he is) - He was not your perfect ML, but my advice to fellow readers to not give up and kept reading. I hope Author can promise a happy ending here 😆 Love scene (a.k.a sex) - I have read Author's other one shot, which was really good. So I don't have any comment on this one. It was described in a very beautiful way, without losing the essence of the whole storyline. Steamy and sexy at the same time. Overall, I am having a good time and declare myself as one of your readers. I am definitely waiting patiently for your next chapters. ♥️♥️♥️
Definitely something new to read which I absolutely love. The elaboration of characters and world background is done pretty well. You can just close your eyes and visit the kingdom yourself. ♥️ So far, a good job!😊 Keep it up dear author!👍 ♥️♥️♥️♥️
The story has a good start and an entertaining plot. The grammar is fine. I have kept it in my library to continue reading it, it has caught my attention 😀 (explicitid sneces😏) XD
Very nice book, this will definitely get exposure soon. I like it as it fits my needs personally🤣 magic, royalty, helplessness and mystery. Love it!!! Keep working hard Aysel!! Good luckkk
Though I haven't read the main story but base on the synopsis, Great work and it's really interesting. I will try and read it whenever I'm chance because I like anything that revolves with romance