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The legend says "whoever manages to open the kilork gates, will be the over Great Lord." The gates are hidden in forbidden magical places and to find them is impossible, they are guarded by powerful guards, but one of the guardian broke the rule and chaos erupted between the durable entity of the other guardians. the time of the matches of the masters approached, Hey, who will be the next master? Will things go back up normal? And what is Mr. Brown's secret? it all revolves around the guards of the Kilork's gates, each with their own story, and the struggle to obtain the ultimate power behind these gates. Who will succeed and fulfill his desires?
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Write a reviewAuthor DaoistMMzDIR
Ok, the dialogue especially hit the mark[img=update], the first chapter was refreshing and let's not forget the tension was well established, I can see a potential in world building, there are a few grammar mistakes, but keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=update]