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lucifurge

it has a nice plot and story setting and unique character and I like the mc this can improve more so I will give it a 5...........................

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SternKunst

The progression feels a bit rushed with not enough buildup to daw the reader in, the setting is nice and there’s clearly a good amount of thought that has gone into it. The world is deacribed quite well and is easy to follow. But I would argue it’s mared by the quick progression. Not giving the reader enough time to thoroughly enjoy the setting and scenery. Like your driving cross country and you come across a quaint little town that has some interesting looking buildings, and the driver speaks about them and the businesses, piquing your interest, but then doesn’t stop to let you enjoy what it was that you were just told about, and it goes off to the next destination. The read was nice, but the pace could be slowed down a bit.

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chase_6100

The book is great, I enjoy that the MC could have chosen to be a God, but refused and did things the hard way. I think the author has a good sense of humor and that shows up in his work. I couldn't help but laugh that he reviewed his own book. I will definitely be adding this to my library, please continue your work!

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Debbie_Rozz

I love the direction the story is taking, it a really wonderful book, I'll give it a five star cause the story has potential, and I give a thumbs up to the author for this amazing book, good job.

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Jims_Rid

I love the MC. He's ambitious but doesn't want to achieve things the easy way. There's not much to comment now with 5 chapters but I look forward to the development of the story as well as character developments

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Sandipan_Dutta_7440

The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck

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BlackRaven_

this is a unique content that is quite interesting the system is different from others that i have read soo far and has a lot of potential i like the mc he has a personality thats not like a hero of a normal novel who would just go wild for justice

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Nancy_Micheal_4985

great work author your book is outstanding you've done a great job this book is exciting and you've planned your plot very well it is very unique to most of the books that I've read I can't wait for the next chapter

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A_fed_up_reader

How can I break the rule of a shameless author giving 5 stars to his own book .Also I would like to tell you that the book carries a really interesting story line with a good plot . since I am a new author my action scenes might look bad but the kingdom building concept is good

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aartishankar_21

loved the way Author describes every scenes and character. the plot setting is amazing and interesting that i would recommend this book as feel good read one. waiting for more chaps, and all the best writer 👍😁.[img=recommend]

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Itsurbff_who_reads

This is a very interesting story, it has a good plot and story development, as well as world building. The mc is very honest which I like. Overall it’s a good novel I’d advise fixing some grammatical mistakes. 😊

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Ona_Gold

I like how you portray your MC. He's not just some mindless idiot who just wants power. He's actually very sensible and I love the progression of the story. Keep up the good work 👍

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Wuxie06

I like your story, writing, and Mc personality, cant help but imagine how the story will progress my favorite part in kingdom building novels are the huge battles between army or battle of wits of their generals wonder wonder how will you write them. overall i like the story