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5 star since the 3 mmorpg novel you mentioned is the 1st 3 novels i read that turned me into a novel reading addict… . . . . . .… . . . . . …
Overall I really did enjoy this story and all it has to offer. To see Manco go from the bottom, then gradually make his way to the top through clever thinking, tactics and well thought out decisions. All the while facing real world problems was not only relatable, but very interesting to say the least. My favorite portion was his brief meeting with Brenda, who for a minor character really helped out Manco in a pinch. An that is not even mentioning the other characters he meets and interacts with. I really look forward to whenever this story is updated. This is amazing!
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just gonna say this now. I've not started reading this yet. that being said the description hot me hook, line, and sinker. please let this be as good as it sounds!
a great novel with great start n great potential dont know why author stopped but it was really new n great hdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhh
great novel but it's prob been droped no new chaps in a year . .......great novel but it's prob been droped no new chaps in a year . .....great novel but it's prob been droped no new chaps in a year . ........
Really enjoy the character building a twists through out. Definitely can’t wait for more, hope the releases are steady! Every chapter that ends makes me excited for the next
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To be honest this novel is absolutely great. There are no major flaws and it could easily be at the top along with LoM, Supreme Magus and alike. Unfortunately the author has a real life. It's pretty save to say that it has been dropped. A fucking shame.
A decent story. Grammar is fine, the plot though used many times in other stories still got more appeal than those. And thank goodness it is not one of those stories where mc saves the damsel in distress and the girl keeps sucking him off like a parasite. I like how the character doesn't gets much involved with others even if it is a girl or anyone. What I need is adventure and this story delivers it. :) Hope this continues.. keep interaction with characters either neutral and indulge in it only a little. Focus more on adventure just the way it is now.
I am loving this already even tho I haven't even started.this is a filler so I can post it. So how was your guys day/night good I hope it is or was.
Plz put an update ASAP , been waiting for an year and there's still nothing....
I haven't read it but the synopsis is good i think laughter and enjoyment is an important feature you get from books that helps you enjoy them.
I really liked the idea behind it, despite being the classic revenge plot. Even so, I am looking forward to read more and see how the MC is going to develop, which mechanics will be used and how he is going to up that gun.
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Does anybody know why this has been dropped? It's a pity because I was really into this novel even though the genre is a bit of a cliche. I really wanted to see him getting his revenge
Although it's theme is clichê, the author makes us want to stick arround, and for me what makes it work is the background and caracter interaction - because they are realistic and i can relate and understand why something like that would happen; Got to love the author's sense of humor that sometimes blindslides us xD Also, i would really love to play a game like that one. Now, there is some faulty grammar, but i've seen much worse ( so that is not a problem for me); about caracter development, for me this is still the begining of the story so our mc still has much room to grow; dude just went some years into to the past, he will not change overnight just because his time changed too ( i don't get why there are some people with their panties on a twist over that). Overall a nice read if you like the genre.
This is a book. I need more than 140 characters. This is all filler. I'm running out of ideas. Somebody help me. Spam spam spam spam spam spam.
Was a really enjoyable read, unfortunately is probably dropped which is sad... The main character is relatable and understandable, maybe too into the game. However the later memory loss is confusing and seemingly out of nowhere, maybe because it can never be explained.
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I love how realistic this is, even if it is a fantasy world. I know of many revenge novels, but this one is not an one day span revenge. This seems like it will take a good year or two to finally take revenge.
Is he ever going to pick this back up cause it's a great story and I want to see how it ends
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Lol, uh, stability of updates is like that because the author is experiencing some crisis rn and hasn't been updating. The story is still in its early stages so not much plot development has happened besides the MC meeting new characters ingame. Disclaimer: I like the way MC acts, I dont think its unreasonable. There are definitely some that dont like the way the MC acts but theres one thing for sure, MC is a mature person that doesnt fall into foolishness very often. We see how he interacts with people he's familiar with or cares about, and we also see how acts around people he disdains or hates. I suppose the "world" being considered for this story is the VR world, not RL. Therefore, to me at least, the author seems to have put a lot of thought into how the game world works. There are details about each aspect of the game that the MC interacts with, featuring a fantasy-survival world that has an impressive amount of realism thrown in. :) thanks Bloo for making this story, I love it.
Really enjoying this book. It is really hard for me to put It down. I usually switch back and forth, but find it really hard to read anything else. Love that it is a mix of Male and female side characters. Makes for nice read.
Good start and storyline is okay showing status is good but should not do it to much as it can get annoying for the readers and try not to keep explaining something you already have.
This is an amazing nobel! I couldn't stop reading it! I need more chapters! Like why would you stop writing this book!?! Why havent I seen any updates! Totally not fair!
This is an excellent read for the rebirth mmorpg genre. The author keeps the story going and is developing the characters nicely. If you like MMORPG style books this i would recommend you give this a try.
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I haven't read it yet, but I love how you started your info page, no BS just facts.🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤
5 star since the 3 mmorpg novel you mentioned is the 1st 3 novels i read that turned me into a novel reading addict… . . . . . .… . . . . . …
Overall I really did enjoy this story and all it has to offer. To see Manco go from the bottom, then gradually make his way to the top through clever thinking, tactics and well thought out decisions. All the while facing real world problems was not only relatable, but very interesting to say the least. My favorite portion was his brief meeting with Brenda, who for a minor character really helped out Manco in a pinch. An that is not even mentioning the other characters he meets and interacts with. I really look forward to whenever this story is updated. This is amazing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
just gonna say this now. I've not started reading this yet. that being said the description hot me hook, line, and sinker. please let this be as good as it sounds!
a great novel with great start n great potential dont know why author stopped but it was really new n great hdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhh
great novel but it's prob been droped no new chaps in a year . .......great novel but it's prob been droped no new chaps in a year . .....great novel but it's prob been droped no new chaps in a year . ........
Really enjoy the character building a twists through out. Definitely can’t wait for more, hope the releases are steady! Every chapter that ends makes me excited for the next
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To be honest this novel is absolutely great. There are no major flaws and it could easily be at the top along with LoM, Supreme Magus and alike. Unfortunately the author has a real life. It's pretty save to say that it has been dropped. A fucking shame.
A decent story. Grammar is fine, the plot though used many times in other stories still got more appeal than those. And thank goodness it is not one of those stories where mc saves the damsel in distress and the girl keeps sucking him off like a parasite. I like how the character doesn't gets much involved with others even if it is a girl or anyone. What I need is adventure and this story delivers it. :) Hope this continues.. keep interaction with characters either neutral and indulge in it only a little. Focus more on adventure just the way it is now.
I am loving this already even tho I haven't even started.this is a filler so I can post it. So how was your guys day/night good I hope it is or was.
Plz put an update ASAP , been waiting for an year and there's still nothing....
I haven't read it but the synopsis is good i think laughter and enjoyment is an important feature you get from books that helps you enjoy them.
I really liked the idea behind it, despite being the classic revenge plot. Even so, I am looking forward to read more and see how the MC is going to develop, which mechanics will be used and how he is going to up that gun.
Reveal Spoiler Does anybody know why this has been dropped? It's a pity because I was really into this novel even though the genre is a bit of a cliche. I really wanted to see him getting his revenge
Although it's theme is clichê, the author makes us want to stick arround, and for me what makes it work is the background and caracter interaction - because they are realistic and i can relate and understand why something like that would happen; Got to love the author's sense of humor that sometimes blindslides us xD Also, i would really love to play a game like that one. Now, there is some faulty grammar, but i've seen much worse ( so that is not a problem for me); about caracter development, for me this is still the begining of the story so our mc still has much room to grow; dude just went some years into to the past, he will not change overnight just because his time changed too ( i don't get why there are some people with their panties on a twist over that). Overall a nice read if you like the genre.
This is a book. I need more than 140 characters. This is all filler. I'm running out of ideas. Somebody help me. Spam spam spam spam spam spam.
Was a really enjoyable read, unfortunately is probably dropped which is sad... The main character is relatable and understandable, maybe too into the game. However the later memory loss is confusing and seemingly out of nowhere, maybe because it can never be explained.
Reveal Spoiler I love how realistic this is, even if it is a fantasy world. I know of many revenge novels, but this one is not an one day span revenge. This seems like it will take a good year or two to finally take revenge.
Is he ever going to pick this back up cause it's a great story and I want to see how it ends
More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More.More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. MoreMore. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More.More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More
Lol, uh, stability of updates is like that because the author is experiencing some crisis rn and hasn't been updating. The story is still in its early stages so not much plot development has happened besides the MC meeting new characters ingame. Disclaimer: I like the way MC acts, I dont think its unreasonable. There are definitely some that dont like the way the MC acts but theres one thing for sure, MC is a mature person that doesnt fall into foolishness very often. We see how he interacts with people he's familiar with or cares about, and we also see how acts around people he disdains or hates. I suppose the "world" being considered for this story is the VR world, not RL. Therefore, to me at least, the author seems to have put a lot of thought into how the game world works. There are details about each aspect of the game that the MC interacts with, featuring a fantasy-survival world that has an impressive amount of realism thrown in. :) thanks Bloo for making this story, I love it.
Really enjoying this book. It is really hard for me to put It down. I usually switch back and forth, but find it really hard to read anything else. Love that it is a mix of Male and female side characters. Makes for nice read.
Good start and storyline is okay showing status is good but should not do it to much as it can get annoying for the readers and try not to keep explaining something you already have.
This is an amazing nobel! I couldn't stop reading it! I need more chapters! Like why would you stop writing this book!?! Why havent I seen any updates! Totally not fair!
This is an excellent read for the rebirth mmorpg genre. The author keeps the story going and is developing the characters nicely. If you like MMORPG style books this i would recommend you give this a try.
Reveal Spoiler I haven't read it yet, but I love how you started your info page, no BS just facts.🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤
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