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Synopsis
Lin Qiao was an Elegant and Handsome Young Man, that was reincarnated in to a cultivation world when he was at the peak of his life........
His soul was transferred to the body of an extremely cute 5 year-old boy.
But there is problem!... he's too handsome and gets bullied and he is also an orphan.............
Can he persevere and climb the ladder to Immortality? Will he survive the challenges that come his way? Can he grasp Opportunities to achieve immortality
And he also has a Overpowered system BTW
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Authors Note: This is my First time writing a novel and just wanted to do it for fun if you spot any mistakes or errors then please leave a comment, I will try my best to respond and fix said error. If you do not like the way the story is going or want to give some feed back, I will gladly take any help I can receive. BTW the story might have clichés and will get better as the story goes on.
Happy reading,
Potato_man
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Hello, author man here, It is not going to be the best novel out there but I hope you enjoy it and give me feed back. Please read the first chapter and give it a shot, I will try and upload as much as I can and I hope you can comment so i can interact with you guys thanks, potato_man