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LOVE'S GOT A HOLD OF MY HEART
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MACY & SHANE
I was young back then when I set my eyes on him. I thought that it was just a simple infatuation. However, I never dream that night would leads us to something. We had sex. It was not my first time but it was the best. Shane was two years older than me but I started liking him. However, it was complicated because he's my best friend's brother. I suddenly left my home, my life, my best friend, my school and the person who captured my heart. After many years passed, I decided to start new life to a place I once loved.I have some secrets that I keep for years. But we met again and my feelings for him become more than it should be. Where should it lead on? What should I do if he found out my secret?
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Pretty story line that my needs editing, otherwise it's cute. I love Macy, she's a strong woman and am glad Xander is supportive. It took my breath away
this is a good story to read... if true love comes and its fate to be cross to your forever it will find a way to be one.... i love this and inspired with the family together traditions...family is love...congrats to read again your story author...๐๐
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The story was very sweet and to the point. I thought it was a pretty good read and I read the entire thing in one go. Great job author! I look forward to reading more of your work ๐