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This is really a good story! I really enjoyed how the story goes, the way the Author describe everyting that included in this book such as characters, plot and many other things are really addictive. I tell u guys, don't sleep on an amazing story like this! Salute for the Author!
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Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! ใmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comใ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iโm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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So she's basically going to debut in the entertainment industry but why? I wonder how he's going to support her? Nothing bad must happen. I hope that this book can update faster. Thank you
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Jadi ini adalah novel kedua yang aku baca, yang bahasa inggris tapi ditulis sama penulis dari Indonesia. Biasanya ga kuat karena grammarnya.Tapi yang ini aku kasih skor 5! buat writingnya aja. Gimana sih ya, bangga aja kl ada orang Indonesia nulis disini pakai bahasa inggris. Emang ada yg harus diedit, aku doain bisa resmi dan dapet editor. World Background aku kasih 4/5 karena masih belum terlalu jelas buat aku. But over all score is 4.8 from me! (Udah lama banget aku ga review sepanjang ini) โฎ(โฏโฝโฐ)โญ
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This is an interesting novel as thereโs so many aspects of the FL. Sheโs strong and ruthless for survival cause of circumstances for her and her family. Cheerfully and headstrong for her entertainment and fun which no one can stop her. Caring and sensitive for her family as she does a lot for them to be happy and safe.
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Nice story. This is not your typical love story. Velina work hard to achieve her dreams & her respobsibilities while she had to put aside her childhood sweetheart... Highly recommended!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Aku akan selalu dukung karya ini ๐๐๐ So dont stop writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Yay!!!! new chapters ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ Me likey!!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Need for more ๐๐๐ The english is still understandable, so its okay, hahaha[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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If you read the raw, it made me laugh with the silly characters the author potrayed!!! Good luck in global! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Velina & Daniel are so cute together!!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ I hope the author will publish more, but i know she's busy! Take your time, i'll wait!
its more stable with new chapters coming in. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You must read this. The story' make you remember about first love ๐คญ๐คญ๐คญ than hurt. Author good job, i feel happy and hurt the same time. Sorry, my English not good to make review.
This is cool. I love the grammar. Even though english is not my first language, I can still understand the story. Fightinggggggg.............
yes I like it, I really enjoyed the beginning of the chapter. You are great and keep growing, very proud to be able to read a story as good as this. I'm waiting for the next
Hi ! for those of you who like the romance genre it is very suitable to read this story, I really enjoy reading the story which is very interesting, Love it ๐ฅ๐๐ฅบ
Yay!!! Thank you author sama!!!!!!! i like Velina's character, and would love to see more of her!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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when the author will give us stable update? pretty please ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Hey, author here!!! I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but yeah i had to move my new book here for a reason. i will update more chapters so please stay tunned!!! if you love a character of a strong female lead, then this book might for you!!! This is a romance-action story with strong characters and a bit of mistery every now and then. So if you decided to read some, please don't forget to leave some reviews for me too, so that i could be better and better ro make a good book for you guys!!! Oh, im so excited!!! ๐๐๐
This is really a good story! I really enjoyed how the story goes, the way the Author describe everyting that included in this book such as characters, plot and many other things are really addictive. I tell u guys, don't sleep on an amazing story like this! Salute for the Author!
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its getting better!!! ๐๐๐ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
finally, update daily yuhuuuuu [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! ใmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comใ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iโm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler So she's basically going to debut in the entertainment industry but why? I wonder how he's going to support her? Nothing bad must happen. I hope that this book can update faster. Thank you
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Jadi ini adalah novel kedua yang aku baca, yang bahasa inggris tapi ditulis sama penulis dari Indonesia. Biasanya ga kuat karena grammarnya.Tapi yang ini aku kasih skor 5! buat writingnya aja. Gimana sih ya, bangga aja kl ada orang Indonesia nulis disini pakai bahasa inggris. Emang ada yg harus diedit, aku doain bisa resmi dan dapet editor. World Background aku kasih 4/5 karena masih belum terlalu jelas buat aku. But over all score is 4.8 from me! (Udah lama banget aku ga review sepanjang ini) โฎ(โฏโฝโฐ)โญ
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This is an interesting novel as thereโs so many aspects of the FL. Sheโs strong and ruthless for survival cause of circumstances for her and her family. Cheerfully and headstrong for her entertainment and fun which no one can stop her. Caring and sensitive for her family as she does a lot for them to be happy and safe.
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Nice story. This is not your typical love story. Velina work hard to achieve her dreams & her respobsibilities while she had to put aside her childhood sweetheart... Highly recommended!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Aku akan selalu dukung karya ini ๐๐๐ So dont stop writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Yay!!!! new chapters ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ Me likey!!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Need for more ๐๐๐ The english is still understandable, so its okay, hahaha[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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If you read the raw, it made me laugh with the silly characters the author potrayed!!! Good luck in global! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Velina & Daniel are so cute together!!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ I hope the author will publish more, but i know she's busy! Take your time, i'll wait!
its more stable with new chapters coming in. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You must read this. The story' make you remember about first love ๐คญ๐คญ๐คญ than hurt. Author good job, i feel happy and hurt the same time. Sorry, my English not good to make review.
This is cool. I love the grammar. Even though english is not my first language, I can still understand the story. Fightinggggggg.............
yes I like it, I really enjoyed the beginning of the chapter. You are great and keep growing, very proud to be able to read a story as good as this. I'm waiting for the next
Hi ! for those of you who like the romance genre it is very suitable to read this story, I really enjoy reading the story which is very interesting, Love it ๐ฅ๐๐ฅบ
Yay!!! Thank you author sama!!!!!!! i like Velina's character, and would love to see more of her!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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when the author will give us stable update? pretty please ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Hey, author here!!! I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but yeah i had to move my new book here for a reason. i will update more chapters so please stay tunned!!! if you love a character of a strong female lead, then this book might for you!!! This is a romance-action story with strong characters and a bit of mistery every now and then. So if you decided to read some, please don't forget to leave some reviews for me too, so that i could be better and better ro make a good book for you guys!!! Oh, im so excited!!! ๐๐๐