Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel

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AvatarLOK2

Dude, your writing is interesting keeps me occupied, and is also very different from all the other marvel fanfictions before this. I really enjoyed the character-building as you made him very human unlike many fanfic writers not to discourage any of their works.

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Darnelljoe

The grammar is near incomprehensible

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StarGazerr

man, you just threw everything in the trash with bnha arc...................................................................................

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Kiradeux

Things were fairly enjoyable until the author decided to go down the psychopath power collection route instead of progressive gacha gain. Feels like a huge waste of potential, but the MC just feels like discount All For One now. The decision effectively threw the entire context of the story and threw it in the trash - Meta Essence no longer required, Gacha is a write off since he easily steals whatever power he wants and is thus easily ignored in the plot, heck, they're not even in Marvel anymore! If you like the common power collection stories where the MC runs around stealing everyone's powers so fast that he could never train them all, then this story is better than average in the category.

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LaughingArkBuilder

Hey, "EvansKannon", it's been a while. I just wanted to tell you that I got a job as an English teacher. I know it may not seem much but it's an achievement since I had depression, a serious one. Considering the number of scars I had given myself... You might be wondering, "What does all that have to do with me?". Well, believe it or not, your story was one of the biggest reasons I got myself to change for the better. Like, whenever I was about to make some bad decisions, I always thought about my family, religion, and friends and all but there was also this one part of me that said, "What about the next chapter for the fanfic? What would be the ending? How would it all turn out to be?"... That and very few other reasons kept me alive... It made me become a teacher for a class full of brilliant children with equally brilliant futures. And I just wanted to tell you that you protected my future too. Thank you Sincerely, Your Fan

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Kurama_is_tsundere

This is a really good marvel fanfic with the MC having powers from different works of fiction. here's a list of things that the author did which i personally liked and made read this fanfic. 1. The MC is very well described and etched you can understand his motives and goals (though the goal is really simply to not be thanos snapped) 2. He is an anti hero type character (MC) but wont hesitate to do what is required for him to get stronger. 3. BIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEADBIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEADBIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEADBIG SPOILER AHEAD He got the character template of Batman so yeah i freaking love this fic 😆.

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IamKingOfFreedom

you throw everything in the trash....................................................................................................................................................................................

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EaCalibur

The story is good. I am writing this so that the ratings can improve. I don't like the ratings it has now(4.34),& I can't write any useful reviews anyway.

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Sekiyuutei_7

I'm already hooked my man , by the time you reach 40 chaps it would be in the top of power rankings.........................................

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Loverofthebeans

Amazing end to the BNHA arc. Just hope he will be back there to see his presum child. Can’t wait for more chaps, I hope that you continue to update this fic while still enjoying your self :)

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LazyComet

This fanfic is clear proof that even good creations can be ruined over time. There was a time when I eagerly awaited a new chapter every two weeks. It used to be one of the best, and in the Marvel segment, it was the absolute best. But for some reason, I don't know why, you have completely disfigured the fanfic beyond recognition. Uncontrolled harems, a shift in focus to some schizophrenic nonsense, and despite the fact that chapters are now released more frequently, the fanfic has devolved into typical porn with some background events. It feels like the author has changed, or they simply realized that they can make way more money off simps and coomers than with quality writing. If this used to be a solid 5+ out of 5, now it's just an unreadable parody that barely deserves a 2, only because of its past achievements.

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Jack_Slash

During the One Piece arc, the story gradually developed into trash. There's no plot, just the author's endless monologues, reflections and power listing. MC at this point is a stupidly flat character.

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Novicewriter_809

a very good story continues like this, you take your time, but I only ask that you don't leave the story, whether you make a chapter every fortnight just don't leave it

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Crimson_Skull

Pretty good and like most people don't mind the MHA arc. Grammer don't really have a problem with it. Update is good amount but not the best. Should have more interaction with characters that's the main problem for me in most fanfic. Overall hasn't made me bored or see it as a bad fanfic.

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Lucifer_000

Love it dude plz dont drop enjoy it and continue plz . .....,......,.......... .....,......,.......... .....,......,.......... .....,......,..........

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James_Russel_2990

The story hasn't really moved that much, there are a lot of spelling mistakes, some sentences also does not make sense, some words are also missing. I know that the MC is around 16 and very young, but your writing quality is really bad, it makes me cringe to the bone, you could've written your MC or scenes better like for example, instead of writing "ppfffttt, HAH HAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA", you could have just written that your character laughed or something, some dialogues are also very cringy to the point that it is no longer realistic, neither does it invoke much emotion. Furthermore, the story hasn't progressed that much, most chapters are just a bunch of informations that will be forgotten or not really useful later on in the story, and also you could have written the character development arc better instead of unnecessarily making it longer, which drags the story. Another thing to point is the gacha, maybe make it more interesting, like giving the MC some quests or something, cause if we have to wait a very long time just to see another set of pulls then it would get very boring, also, you don't have to write what the MC thinks about everything he gets, maybe just summarize everything like listing the thing he got, then afterwards give some description to those, just a little description, after that you can state what the MC thinks about all of those, summarize it, no need to make it very long, cause it just makes it boring and cringy. Make sure to also use appropriate words, for example instead of saying "it remembers me" you should put "it reminds me" or other words depending on the context, you really need to improve on that part. If you want your MC to be a realistic 16 years old, then take Spider-Man as an example but revise his personality. A 16 years old child experiencing the death of his parents, a child that age having incredible powers, a child that age experiencing the darkness of the world, do you know what's more unrealistic? the fact that you made the MC seem like a naive, edgy teenager, the experiences and powers of the MC are already unrealistic, the fact that he experienced great loss and darkness more than others his age makes your current MC unrealistic, he should be mature, it's not about how old he is, but about how much he experienced. Some people mature early due to the things they experienced, not because of their age, especially with your MC that can assimilate templates and gain that character's traits, like being level headed, calculative and prepared from batman. The MHA arc was good in my opinion due to the growth, but it made other powers and assimilation useless, and later on, when the MC decides to assimilate a character it's as though you just shrug it off and say "a character was assimilated" but then what did he get? did he develop it? what about chakra? what about Nen?, what about the other powers he got in MHA? he has so many powers already that it's hard to follow and some powers just pops out of nowhere, like "oh i got this from MHA world", it really needs fixing, you know, instead of hoarding everything early on, you can slowly assimilate more characters and actually develop the direction they will be going, or maybe you can fuse all the powers he currently have and make a 'series', I forgot that one novel that did this but it really made things easier to understand and grasp what the MC is truly capable and incapable of doing rather than just comparing MC with thor or hulk, or you can just fuse it all and create a single or a countable number of skill, their description should also make sense and given justice based on the powers being fused. By the way, don't make certain scenes too unnecessarily long, like the actions of Eidolon, such as fighting crimes, saving some random people, it's fine if it contributes to the plot or the things that would be happening many chapters later, but if it's just for "Eidolon is becoming active, fighting crimes not just in NY but also in other places, fishing to catch a big fish but later is actually just a small villain" then no, it just makes it boring, even if you give us recaps to remember what's happening, it still doesn't make it more interesting, also, as for the revenge you could've done it sooner rather than later, slowly introducing more characters and power levels, the revenge part was really disappointing even with the lesson given, if it was just that then it would be better to do it earlier rather than dragging it too much, in the grand scheme of things Kingpin really isn't that big, in a society where strength reigns supreme, what can a common person who only has connections do?. Really, a lot of scenes are being dragged too much just to justify the story as "slow paced", that is not how slow paced works, what you're doing is just putting a bunch of dialogues and personal yapping about a bunch of things that make the readers reflect a little but later forgets, too much unnecessary dialogues and explanations that just repeats over and over again, though it might be spoken in different ways, again, you could've just summarized it, don't put too much emphasis on a minor character or even just a background character that will just die early on in the story, what about other major characters like Thor, Stark, Captain America? they don't get much 'screen time', and when they do get one, it's just a bunch of dialogues that does not contribute to growth, Stark didn't even start anything, it's just him talking with himself and others about Eidolon's character and powers, how Eidolon saved him and such, "Stark learns from his mistake" it was clearly stated after the defeat of the Chitauris or something, when Tony launched the thing that will detonate into the portal, that he learned something from it though he put up a prideful front, the fact that he said he would die or be in tatters if Eidolon didn't save him already states that Stark learned something. Now, what of Thor? if you're going to make Thor be like a partner or someone of equal footing with the MC, a buddy or something, then shouldn't the development or training of Thor be also stated? don't tell me you're just going to make Thor pop out of nowhere and say that him and the MC will fight, then boom they're still on equal footing with the MC even slightly being weaker and will only win because of sneak attacks. Every character that participated in that attack should have at least gained something. And what really annoys me the most is the unnecessarily long dialogues between characters, like yeah we already know that, no need to repeat it, you're a hero but also kills and does what is necessary? yeah no need for extra drama and just get to the point, lost and a bit confused? yeah no need to be a therapist and go through lengthy talks, just get straight to the point, give a quote, feedback, or an encouragement. As what they say SHOW DON'T TELL, you don't have to tell us every single detail of what's happening or what they're talking about, it kinda ruins the immersion, and also with regards to POVs, you need to improve on that, you don't have to say that this is a third person POV, the MC POV or any other character right at the top or the beginning of their POV, cause it feels more like a script rather than a story. Overall, the concept of Meta Essence is good such as the gacha, summoning, assimilating, getting powers and items are good, but you really need to improve it cause something is missing, maybe the fact that other than those uses it doesn't have much use, and most of those options are being neglected or shrugged off as though they're clothes you can choose and wear. I don 't know, maybe It's not being utilized to the fullest, and also maybe because you can only get points by waiting. The story hasn't progressed much, and again most of the scenes and dialogues are cringy and unnecessarily long

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Daoist9083tM

Ótima história, muito bem desenvolvida com personagens reais que possuem "alma", melhor fanfic que eu já vi. TopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTopTop