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MFv1 (discontinued draft)

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Author: DrDoritosMD

4.88 (20 ratings)

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This story has been fully rewritten as “Manifest Fantasy” available on RoyalRoad.

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DrDoritosMD

What kind of author wouldn’t give themselves a good score? I became tired of waiting for stories like Summoning Japan to release new chapters, and it seems like Gate Weigh Anchor isn’t going to get an English translation soon, so I decided to make my own story, about America.

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Daoist987846

Awesome so far! This author writes so eloquently and this is so far my fav story on webnovel! I love fantasy shows and this story has that with the twist of military action too! I look forward to reading more!

3yr
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WiceS
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Hello, I am from Russia, I am reading your story via google translator (I don’t know English) The story is very interesting ✓ Спасибо вам большое!!!!

3yr
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loliaravioli

This is really entertaining! Keep it UP! I actually came here after seeing a post about it in the Gate Subreddit, and gotta say im not disappointed. Im going to keep coming for updates.

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Adawhite

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Thaft
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Hi Writer! I hope that you can continue this novel hehehe because I myself like stories like this, it's basically a bit like Gate Jietai & Summoning Japan. Plus the difference that this happened in the US. Stay excited to update your novel! You know that making people curious is not good hehehehe.

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Arriix

Fantasy x modern stories has always been my favorite, this story is light and easy to understand while still packed with actions (and explosions)

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Tom_Xaider

More more more. I want more and more chapters!! I really want to see the future aliens after NATO takes down all the pesky primitives!! The war with the aliens would be extremely glorious.

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hmmmmmm91

Is is a great story showing that when you think you have power there’s always bigger fish in the sea an who doesn’t like guns , magic and politics it’s all great

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Tom_Xaider

The story is a good but i feel that it needs a little bit more details and interesting points in world building and character development. Keep up the good work man!!

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Selective_Genius11

A very well written story so far. I like how it is not an exact copy of Nihonkoku Shoukan and how different countries view America in a much different light than they viewed Japan in the original

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Adawhite

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PepeHasReturned

Is the book on hiatus? the author has released very few chapters for this book, despite being a decent to large range of words per chapter.

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AdaW
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

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AdaW
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).

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Triparadox

I personally liked this story so much since it's still arguably a rare experience to find modern weaponry vs middle-age swords and magic. It's turning downhill for me ever since they find a more sophisticated weapon from an unknown force. The feeling of no longer being overpowered country resulted from centuries expertise in science is just too much for me to continue reading.

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Triparadox

This is the second novel I've given a try on WebNovel, and it's actually very good. At first, I didn't expect this novel to incorporate both the story from GATE: SDF and Summoning Japan at the same time. The author has done a very good job in making sure they go in harmony, and that there is no conflicting logic or event. Since the story is playing at a country-wide scale, it's almost impossible to have a rich character development. A country, with everything set on policy and laws, won't be able to change as easy as individual. However, since there's no protagonist other than, arguably, the United States (the military branch to be exact), character development is non-existent. One interesting thing in the story is that the otherworld countries seem to be more powerful than those pictured in the inspirational story, Summoning Japan. It doesn't make the U.S. shine less though. One thing the author may want to consider improving is to re-read the chapters since occasionally, I found several parts where the dialog felt unnatural or cringey.

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