Mirror A Time Machine

Its a very dedicated novel . I like it. I am gonna use it in my channel . And also I like the concept very much . Don't forget to watch your story on YouTube .

I am giving you 5 star . Because it is your first novel . But there are some fields you need to improve. Like sentence arranging and giving the chapters name . But I like the concept though

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OMG . Thats your first novel ! Unbelievable . I want to see more Novels from you . If your first novel is that much good than your upcoming novels will be more amazing . Off . I can't wait

Thats good idea and concepts . But you do need to improve your grammar . If this was your first novel ? Than okay . But you should focus on your grammar in your upcoming novels.

I like the novel very much . Please release more of your novels . And please add your social media accounts . So I can contact with you. If you don't mind please fix the endings

Nice adaption . I saw other reviews pointing out your problems . I am not gonna do it . But I can only say one thing . You are doing a great job . I am looking forward to your next novel

Thats a very nice story and concept . But there still some places where you need to improve. Like grammer , naming the chapters and endings .

Everything is average . But I heard that this is your first one . Than it is okay . Thats why I gave you 5 stars . But please the ending is not good at all . Please remember to focus on your endings in your upcoming novels.

Please release your next Novel . I bet that your second story will be much better than this one . O sorry . I meant Novel . Whatever . But please fix your endings . It sucks

OMG. That is a masterclass. Please please add your social media accounts. I wants to talk with you . Please . And the mirror idea and the switch is so smart idea . Dang it