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Synopsis
In a world he thought was only fiction, a second chance at life comes with a secret advantage. After being reborn as the son of a high-ranking general, Bradley Naird discovers a mysterious, game-like System screen that reveals his hidden potential.
No longer just an ordinary kid, he sees this power not as a cheat code, but as a roadmap to greatness on the basketball court. Now, living in a Los Angeles neighbourhood straight out of a sitcom, he must navigate the chaotic world of the Pritchetts and Dunphys from Modern Family while honing his unique abilities.
He leads his team in high-stakes games where every strategic thought and every point scored is a step towards becoming a legend. But in a world full of beloved characters and unexpected drama, can a kid with a supernatural secret outwit his opponents on the court and in life?
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The MC is OP but in a measured manner not over the top.
This is not a harem and never will be.
You can expect exploration of other sitcoms and American media in the future arcs.
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THIS IS NOT A TRANSLATION.
The story will be published with 5 chapters every week. Chapters will be a minimum of 2000 words.
Bonus chapter for every 600 Power Stones. Patreon link provided in author note
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Write a reviewPlease note everything below is my personal subjective opinions. .... .... .... .... Gloria's voice is melodious? She can speak English normally? Each and every character is one dimensional. A dry wall is more interesting than them. It's not a story but a disjointed stitched up diary entries from different characters who cannot write a live narrative. Dialogues are like a dish of hard wood instead of steak with stones substituting for potatoes. Overpowered tag is totally unnecessary. The system is nothing but a single status page. If this is a system then IRL pro Athletes also have "systems". Most of the chapters, paragraphs and god awful monologues are there just to fill up. You can skip a chapter and will not miss anything. The pairing is horrendously an "intellectual" jock (Oxymoron) who does not seek a career in stem with a future scientist who clearly has a type (that is other scientists) clearly not the MC. Romance is dryer than the death valley. Also Alex 12 MC is 11 yet they observe micro expressions like Counter Intelligence Interrogators and make sense of said expressions. They act like a zero added to their numerical age yet could cry or sulk like a child in tantrums. WQ 3 SD 1 CD 1 US 5 WB 2.5 (actually the ones that score 1 are of negative values) Sigh.... Why am I even writing this? Good luck and have fun. Do not listen to my rumbling.
Reveal Spoilergetting vibes that your not American that whole protection detail shit and no taking pictures its my freedom only place I can't take pictures is on a military instalation or of it they take my phone away I'm suing the shit outta them
Reveal SpoilerOne of the best things I have come across in a while. Love the writing and characters, can't wait for more chapters to be updated!!!!
So far it's been wonderful and cute how he and Alex got together. There was a build-up, it wasn't forced, and it was pretty cheesy. I liked the setting and the passage of time, and how it doesn't just focus on basketball or romance, and a middle ground. As soon as I have my power stones, I'll give them to you.
There are some issues with grammar and prose in the initial chapters but overall the story has some good potential and I look forward to continue reading it. Seems like an Alex and OC pairing, kinda cliche but maybe you can do something good with that dynamic.
Reveal SpoilerSo far so good but I guess you should take the system out of the equation it really hasn't played any part of your narative apart from hey he got one,but hey you may bring it around and surprise us with a nice detail about it but apart from that yes I do see a lot of potential in the story and enjoy your style of writing
Me gusta tu historia le veo vastante potencial sigue escribiendo por favor......................................................................................................................................................
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Muy buena historia pero una advertencia a todos los que quieran leerla, el mc tiene Daddy issus.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Author Rhagnar2018
Obligatory 5 Star from the author here. Its based completely on my belief that I'm writing a story with potential. Hope you guys like it. Please review, share, comment and drop some power stones.