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A Celestial Beauty, with a voice sounding even sweeter than the moans she would one day let out, whispered softly in my ear before I sank into the darkness...
"Be strong, My Prince. You must survive this challenge for us. As a gift...... this ladys name is Long Xue."
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This is a story of Reincarnation.
A story of growth.
A story of love and lust.
A story of battle and slaughter.
After being thrown in a situation out of his control. A boy was cast into the dog-eat-dog world of cultivation, coming straight out of novels he has read. A world where infinite races, opportunity and endless beauties exist. A multitude of realms, factions, Old Monsters and Young Masters waiting to be slaughtered.
This tale follows Dante the Peerless, but this is the tale before he was known as 'The Peerless'. Before he had the largest harem in the history of the Nine Heavens. Before he had swept through the 108 Layers of the Nether God Abyssal Realm. And long before he provided proof of his dominance to the eighteen holy lands in the Verdant Immortal Heavens.
Watch as he evolves from a scared-traumatized boy into a realm conquering powerhouse man amongst men!
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| Action | Harem | Adventure | Ecchi | Romance | Comedy | Overpowered | | Thicc | Loli | Milf | Humiliation | Dual Cultivation | Demons | Handsome MC | Weak to Strong MC | Antihero | Cunning MC | Exploration| Cultivation | Powerhouse | Old Monster | Milf | R-18 | Mature | Adult |
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First I'll talk about the author's writing quality. I think the author did well, but can improve. There a lot of paragraphs that uses commas, whereas it should be place with a period. For the author I'll do an in-comment examples of what I'm talking about. Also, I did find a few run-on sentences, and for that I have a tip for the author. Which is for he/her to read out loud any big paragraphs, and if the author read without stopping or take a breath. The author should put a period or a comma depending on the type of sentence. Onward to story development, and world background, I felt like the author work on these two topic more than the other. At the beginning it's was all about describing the setting and what took place. But the author did bring in characters soon into the scene, but with...*Ahem, good description regarding the female lead appearance. Then later the introduction of the male lead, I assume Dante is the male lead for now, unless I' mistaken. In regard to him. I don't think I hate or like his character. He kind of like a loudmouth, but someone who can keep quiet when situation calls for it. In this case it does. As the story is still in progress, I think more chapters will better improve his image. So a last few words of encouragement for the author: You're doing great! Keep up the good work.
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I have a very mixed of emotions reading your story. After the synopsis, I expected a very well-written story... and after a few chaps, I felt disappointed. The plot is intriguing, the whole concept is original, your characters are interesting, but linguistic imperfections have changed my perception. I completely do not understand (from a literary point of view) why you are overusing capital letters. They add nothing to your text except to irritate the reader. Besides, the story is a bit hectic... Just think about it.
Good storyline hope the author keep it Consistent !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Added to my library, the novel itself is pretty catching, I like it and the author has a great imagination, I felt it. The only thing that I noticed was that there are a few parts where you directly tell me what's happening, how the character is feeling rather than actually showing it. But overall this is a good novel, keep up the great job.
Hi, Mandatory Author Review here.... Ahem, Well hello, Welcome to a naughty corner of my my mind... Just kidding.. Actually, hello, Im glad you stopped by to read my book, This is the first time that I've ever written something like this, so expect it to be a little rough on the edges. I have though, READ an absurd amount of novels similar. I loved this genre, I think its fun to get lost in these types of worlds, and I hope if you are reading this that you also get lost in the world I will create. MC; Dante, a confident, alpha male. Cunning, Naive, Joyful, and Evil all at the same time. An enigma. He will meet many beauties, go to many exotic places, and get hunted down by everyone... Its a beautiful world of cultivaton and fantasy, scaled up few sizes, but just big enough to write a novel around it. This is a story of tradgedy, a story of triumph, a story of pain, a story of love, and a story of the PEERLESS. dvces