My accidental isekai life as a Plunderer

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RoneGreninja

hello readers this is my first time writing a fanfiction so writing might not be good. so if you notice something is wrong with the writing please inform me. i hope by reading your comments my writing will get better, thank you.

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ParadoxMind

The Grammar and Order is seriously messed up. Like there is no distinction between saying something out loud, thinking, commentary, etc. I highly suggest for Author to read up how different types of sentences are correctly distingushed. example: Speaking out loud: "Hello" Thinking: 'That booty thicc' The rest is normal commentary or Just general desceriptions of stuff. (you can write the pov changes with These [General POV])

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Destroyer404

It is a good first few chapters. The only thing I'm complaining about is whether the characters are either thinking or talking. I couldn't move past the first 2 chapters because of it. The premise is good, but please fix it (I'll delete this comment and review after the author fixes it).

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OXCL

It's rare to see Arifureta fanfics, and so far there are 2 heroines, but please don't overdo it, so far it's very exciting, but the grammar is very messy, sometimes the quotation marks ("") disappear, and the conversation between two people blends together, like people A and B chatting, usually limited by quotation marks, and different paragraphs, but sometimes they come together, but I'm used to it because I read MTL novels and updates please more often ch19

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Red_eagle

I love the story so far..its just hard to recognise dialogues.do something about it

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Crow_Myth

Honestly, a very good read so far Keep up the good work

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Elemise

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