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My Darkness system

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Author: Patrik_Crown

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Is it possible for a Demon to have a system? And what about a world that had its principles reversed?
Well, those are the questions for Raphael Gremory.
Previously one of the first and only four Archangels, then a Fallen Angel, and now a powerful Demon who suddenly wakes up in an unfamiliar world.
Because he joined his third brother, Lucifer, in the endeavor to rule the Universe, the gates of Heaven became forever closed for him.
Finding out what his two creations wanted to do, God then sent Michael and Gabriel to stop them.
In the battle of Light and Darkness, on the lands of Hell, the Archangels won, the balance was restored and Lucifer died in the hands of his brothers.
But what happened to Raphael?
Even he can't remember fully, because the only thing he can remember is dying along with Lucifer while his brothers, Michael and Gabriel, were just watching.
Or not?
Because how come that after he died, he woke up again?
Did he really die? Or is it just his corrupted memory?
And what is this voice? Why does it sound like the thing humans developed?
How is it called again? An A.I.?
Ah, so many questions...
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[ ! ] Warning: Narcissism, Manipulation, and other Toxic behaviors are present in the later development of this book as well as Sensitive Subjects like Blood, and Gore together with R-18 Chapters and many, MANY French kissing sessions. [ ! ]
[ Raphael is a demon related to seducing; he doesn't need a reason to kiss a random girl he finds himself attracted to. Just like you~ ]
[ ! ] Reader is advised [ ! ]
[ ! ] Any relations to the Real World are just a coincidence. This story is pure fiction. [ ! ]
[ ! ] The art on the cover is not mine, so if the Author wishes, I'll change it. Just let me know. [ ! ]
[ WSA 2024 ] = [ If you like this story, vote for me. ]
[ Thank you, and enjoy this sinful ride. ]

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Albinus_istamar

First of all, I love the MC, I like villains, or dark characters, the fact that we discover more about him through dialogue than through static descriptions is a good point in favor of the novel. The relationship with the system is at least different, normally the AI or the systems tend to be more in the background, in this case he is almost as relevant a character as the protagonist, it gives fluidity. Likewise, at some points the level of interactions between them is very high and you can lose the thread a bit, especially in long chapters. The plot with demons, gods, angels, vampires, and a transmigrated protagonist works quite well. I'll keep reading to see how it develops.

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itoade
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I LOVE VILLAIN PROTAGS! Your writing is incredibly good and the story flows just right. I do think some of the chapters could be split maybe as it can be a lot of information at once or that could just be a me issue lol. Can’t wait to read more!

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IKECARODEV

Let's GO! Villain protagonists for the win! The system is already a step up from your average system web novel. If you're in the mood for some dark, transmigration goodness, check this out.

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UelUel

Another interesting and very intriguing story from you, Pstrik_Crown... If there's a suggestion that I want to say though, Is that you can cut every chapter in half since there is a lot of content and make more chapters for you.

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Ranch64

This book is well written. Lately I have been obsessed with dark themes and vampires. Keep up the good work.

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ToufiqUlAlam

I loved your other works..and that is why I had to come and check this. It is the best of all of your work so far. Boy! The first chapter packed so much power! The story felt like I am inside an anime! It is like a magnet. i want to savor it..slowly..I read the prologue twice...and did not even felt bored...every time I re-read, the chapter felt fresh and new. I wish you will finish the story. I truly believe you can do that...finish the story! I am with you.

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