/ General / my one and only soldier
Synopsis
It begins in a night out l, love fills the air and two people are brought together through their good looks and personality not through jobs however more love was created as the night went on and life styles where said and exchange between them, this then led to a date in heaven.
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Honest Review Interesting format, the letters make it quite unique honestly. Wow does it need help... The Good: The format is unique in my opinion which is very hard to find on Webnovel. One can relate to the characters. The Bad: The grammar and spelling... was this typed up on a smartphone? So many grammar mistakes, capitalization errors, spelling errors, and the overall structure makes it painful to read. The storytelling method the author uses is fairly unique, but I find it would only attract a very select group of readers. (I personally just saw this on the forums and thought to give it a read) The story is almost non-existent which isn't always a bad thing, but I feel like it is lacking something. The Neutral: Keep writing, read more English novels that have good grammar, and your own grammar will improve naturally. You have something good going here, just don't let it go to waste by not being able to convey your ideas well.