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My Space-Time System

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Author: xImpulse

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Blake, a pro gamer and the winner of the Zetron gaming competition for the MMORPG Lord of Legends meets his doom together with few other participants or so he thought.

Together with others, Blake gets summoned over to a world of fantasy and magic filled with danger and mysteries.

However, to go back, they have to fulfill the job of wiping away a foreign civilization that threatens the existence of both the infinite realm and earth

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    Darius_Chromwell

    Late teenage mc with the emotions of a small child and the attention span of a goldfish The novel Is called space and time system but has nothing to do with space and time.

    3yr
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    Kenringdomstorys

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    4yr
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    xImpulse

    Shameless author review... Although it's my first book, I will say I am enjoying it, with all the twist and turns in my head, all you need to do is sit back and relax, as we go on an amazing journey together[img=recommend]

    4yr
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    Dodge_Buddy_2194

    It is very hard to write about time and space, so not many authors are brave enough to do it. I give you props for trying Pros: The premis is good and the story is moving along. Cons: The characters are flat and have no enotions. They are about to fly on a large eagle and his 2 companions close their eyes to sleep? Where is the awe, excitement, fear? this already was a red flag about how the book was written. They get to the city and he already knows what the statue’s name is? There needs to be a bit of mystery and character interaction were he find out who it is. You need stop giving the main character everything because it’s unbelievable. This book is probably good for begining readers but for readers like me who have hundreds of hours reading, this book is too simple with no twists and turns, no excitement.

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    Tengu_of_Old

    Had to get very an honest review her and I have to say, this work has a lot of potential. Interesting storyline, a nice and MC and a lot more. Though I feel it could be better, for an original story it is already amazing.

    4yr
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    Demelios

    Ok overall. The author does not put himself in the seat of the reader so it's lead to a lot BUT a Lot of incomprehensions and make you feel that the Mc have lost a bit of his brain.

    3yr
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    Nmgames
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    So I read all the free chapters which was like 40 something. From what I could read, there is so much to work on, just in the beginning chapters. Author should go back and fix it and if the rest of the novel is like this then it's not worth reading in my opinion. Lots of inconsistencies and information being put out with no explanation like Magic. It hurt to read it and this is as far as I go. GL

    3yr
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    aDreamer

    I wanted to like it. and it's not like it's bad or anything, it's just far from what it could be. The mc got a pretty op pathon day one but never uses it. I think it was used only once or twice by chap 70 even though there's so much that it could be used for. instead, the mc is so reliant on the system for anything and everything, even stuff that his own power could be used for. This is supposed to be some top notch gamer but in his new world, all he does is basically use the wiki and a walkthrough. The mc needs to think for himself rather than have an all-knowing system spell every little thing out for him. --- Possibly spoiler below--- back to his starting path, it's so op if he even thinks about it for a second. He can find literally anything he wants but instead uses the system for everything he could be doing himself. locate enemies nearby? his path could do it but uses the system instead. find an enemies weak point? that's something that his power could do. find a good place to cultivate? find some good treasure? find the beast core? find the best spot to hit the hammer while smithing? literally anything to do with locating something, he should be able to do with his path, yet he has the system to do all of that and more anyways. what's the point of giving him op powers if he literally never uses it? and look, maybe he finally decides to later on. who knows? he hasn't used it by chap 70 so anything else is just too late. too bad because it could have been much better

    3yr
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    Jujumaster

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    2yr
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    Gecko26
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    In my opinion it has solid world and character development shown throughout the whole 388 chapters, I have read this far. Even "Nobody"-Backgroundcharakters sometimes get their moments and their background is explained which at first seemed overdoing it but after so many chapters I get to enjoy every last bit of world background, charakter development and every background story, no matter if about our beloved mc, the world, some sidecharakter or one of the friends of the protagonist. There are some mistaked and evey now and then the measurements don't make that much of a sense, because in the beginning it was switching between them every now and then, but for the last few chapters I did not find anything like that so, even that got solved :)

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    GREAT
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    This is a story with a very nice plot, it has a huge amount of untapped potential. Author I hope you utilise it well, overall it's a nice work.

    3yr
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    s_eid
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    Are you planning to finish the novel....

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    IAmACow

    interesting

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    Aaron_McLeod_1690

    Thirty(ish) chapters in. There are a few errors in the translating (missing words, or words that sound similiar but mean something completely different), but the background of the world is well developed. Not a lot of character development going on for the main though. He seems static currently, while the supporting characters are growing.

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