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If you are stopping in the very start itself then, you shouldn't have started to write the damn novel. And it doesn't take much to update a chapter occasionally...
this is a really good story the only problem is that its been a month since the last chapter was updated so if you want to read it your gonna be awile between chapters other then that its a good story
it's a great story really worth reading the only problem is that it's updates are extremely slow I think about once a month on average once a week would be great
is this being worked on somewhere else or better yet being turned into a book I can buy??I've been looking forward to some new chapters?? anybody know??
It's a really 👍 good story it's just takes forever to update I think it's something like once a month but other then that it's really worth reading 📚
The story is good and most of like other wechat novels this one is qiute unique as it dosen't have others members form other realms or dimensions Progress of story is kinda of lacking And no continous updates otherwise the novel is very good....
great chapter keep them coming well that's all i wanted its forcing me to use 150 characters so gooooooooooooooood job and hope to see more soon
5 star for this novel.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is just...bland. No one has any character to them, they are cardboard cutouts at best. The world is seemingly the same as ours so it isn't interesting. The plot and events are all very cliche and normal. I tried a few times to get through more chapters to see if there was something better behind this but it is just more of the same. There isn't anything terrible about this story. It is readable just boring.
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This novel is the classical xianxia Chinese with the young master stuff and the ilogical advanced society with powerful familys that can make whatever they want with "normal" People.
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Good start, good premise. The only problem is that your usage of the past tense is wrong, and i think you have this misconception that whenever something is in 3rd person perspective, everything will be written in past tense. That is not entirely correct. Anyway, i love the character development and the world building. Perhaps, spice up the story with some unexpected events. Good luck!
Is it raw or original on webnovel ?. review are not for novel just for writing ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
You every day Chinese novel where everyone has a iq of 10 nothing different or interesting same plot as every other novel, young masters at every corner face slapping revenge from older brother father etc. You know the tipical **** im disappointed that you couldn't change even a bit im more suprised you used modern day time but used the word slave in dialogs it's like you copy pasting the most iconic cultivation young masters line???😑 im disappointed this could be a lot more then this.
It's good so far.seem well thought out. I too hope he keeps at .I really like how the lead character seem just a normal person who got something exstrodnarry but not losing himself.
It's good. Please, Keep on releasing new chap, I fell like it will be worth waiting your update ..................................................
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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.......................................................................................................there are some mistakes but the story is nice, please update more.........................................................................................................
I really love this book........ Start is nice l....... Grammmer is also good....... This book is like RED ENVELOPE GROUP OF THREE REALMS, ........ . . I really love this......worth to read this.......
So far good bro! Modern Timeline, have system, cultivator, martial art, romance or maybe you wanna go harem? Remind me Returning from the immortal world, but far from it cause mc got no system and the ending kinda suck there I just hope you dont end up like all mainstream ff. And add more comedy or something like face slapping? Keep it up, give us more chap please lol
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Reveal Spoiler
Excellent grammar, interesting story with a lot of potential. Would be interested in the romance part, but I have no complaints so far................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like the story so far and I hop the story stays good and the author continues the story unlike some of the authors that give up halfway and end up losing ther fans because of it and I think this story can go a long way
5 star ,cause this novel make me laugh so hard,, keep it up author ,,nice work 😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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If you are stopping in the very start itself then, you shouldn't have started to write the damn novel. And it doesn't take much to update a chapter occasionally...
this is a really good story the only problem is that its been a month since the last chapter was updated so if you want to read it your gonna be awile between chapters other then that its a good story
it's a great story really worth reading the only problem is that it's updates are extremely slow I think about once a month on average once a week would be great
is this being worked on somewhere else or better yet being turned into a book I can buy??I've been looking forward to some new chapters?? anybody know??
It's a really 👍 good story it's just takes forever to update I think it's something like once a month but other then that it's really worth reading 📚
The story is good and most of like other wechat novels this one is qiute unique as it dosen't have others members form other realms or dimensions Progress of story is kinda of lacking And no continous updates otherwise the novel is very good....
great chapter keep them coming well that's all i wanted its forcing me to use 150 characters so gooooooooooooooood job and hope to see more soon
5 star for this novel.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is just...bland. No one has any character to them, they are cardboard cutouts at best. The world is seemingly the same as ours so it isn't interesting. The plot and events are all very cliche and normal. I tried a few times to get through more chapters to see if there was something better behind this but it is just more of the same. There isn't anything terrible about this story. It is readable just boring.
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
This novel is the classical xianxia Chinese with the young master stuff and the ilogical advanced society with powerful familys that can make whatever they want with "normal" People.
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Good start, good premise. The only problem is that your usage of the past tense is wrong, and i think you have this misconception that whenever something is in 3rd person perspective, everything will be written in past tense. That is not entirely correct. Anyway, i love the character development and the world building. Perhaps, spice up the story with some unexpected events. Good luck!
Is it raw or original on webnovel ?. review are not for novel just for writing ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
You every day Chinese novel where everyone has a iq of 10 nothing different or interesting same plot as every other novel, young masters at every corner face slapping revenge from older brother father etc. You know the tipical **** im disappointed that you couldn't change even a bit im more suprised you used modern day time but used the word slave in dialogs it's like you copy pasting the most iconic cultivation young masters line???😑 im disappointed this could be a lot more then this.
It's good so far.seem well thought out. I too hope he keeps at .I really like how the lead character seem just a normal person who got something exstrodnarry but not losing himself.
It's good. Please, Keep on releasing new chap, I fell like it will be worth waiting your update ..................................................
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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.......................................................................................................there are some mistakes but the story is nice, please update more.........................................................................................................
I really love this book........ Start is nice l....... Grammmer is also good....... This book is like RED ENVELOPE GROUP OF THREE REALMS, ........ . . I really love this......worth to read this.......
So far good bro! Modern Timeline, have system, cultivator, martial art, romance or maybe you wanna go harem? Remind me Returning from the immortal world, but far from it cause mc got no system and the ending kinda suck there I just hope you dont end up like all mainstream ff. And add more comedy or something like face slapping? Keep it up, give us more chap please lol
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Reveal Spoiler Excellent grammar, interesting story with a lot of potential. Would be interested in the romance part, but I have no complaints so far................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like the story so far and I hop the story stays good and the author continues the story unlike some of the authors that give up halfway and end up losing ther fans because of it and I think this story can go a long way
5 star ,cause this novel make me laugh so hard,, keep it up author ,,nice work 😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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