Naruto's Uchiha girlfriend is too Tsundere

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Eatoutpieces

It's going to be annoying, uploading 140+ chaps............ again............. so you Better drop an review.....

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Ave_Astrid

When the tree leaves dance, one shall find flames.The fire's shadow will illuminate the village, and once again, tree leaves shall bud anew.

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Nowelanw

So, spoilers ahead, you've been warned. I've read over 250 chapters, and I only lasted that long because of the main character's choice of GF. I'll start with the positives, there are only two: 1) The MC loving Yandere, a female version of Sasuke (and their relationship), 2) Itachi the Maniac got what he deserved. And now for the negatives, there are a ton of them. And the main negative is that the Author broke the main taboo of "Authors" by viewing the world of Naruto through the "Prism of Favorites." This work is permeated with clownish hypocrisy. He divides those characters whose hands are stained elbow-deep with blood into two categories: 1) those he likes (all Sins are forgivable), 2) those he doesn't like (they are evil itself, the unforgivable). Another notable "disgusting" moment is the "admiration" and "flattery" the MC feels for the Perverted A$$hole Sage. He respects a man who spies on other people's wives and daughters, and asks to become his student. He asks to become a student of a man who couldn't teach him anything even if he wanted to (what did he teach Naruto? The Rasengan and the Great Rasengan? What else? Nothing, he was a noob at Taijutsu and still is after training under Jiraiya). Naturally, at that moment, he was much stronger than Jiraiya, so this moment is completely unnecessary and annoying. Another unpleasant moment is the various suppressions of Satsuki. She awakened the 3rd volume of the Sharingan at a young age, which should have given her a huge boost in strength, but as a result, she only has the strength of a chunin. There are many more moments that are illogical and absurd. I don't recommend reading this if you're looking for a high-quality, action-packed, and most importantly, realistic work. If you're only interested in the relationship between the MC and his GF, this is for you.

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Godfrey_the_Human

a funny and cute story I was in the middle of a chap when it deleted sadge

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Yuki_Latsu

this mf nearly gave me heart atack, right now it's 5am, and I finally found out that he opened new account. have been waiting for update for last 2 days,while I was unable to enter his page. bow back to story, it does have few questionable moments, but overall story is good, translation is even better. Translator seems to have some lose bolts tho, so be ready and use PS here. he loves collecting them.

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vylavy

Don't drop the other stories, bro, they're all very good, But do you know why they were deleted?...........................................................................

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Holly_Earl

A hundred chapters later, the story is still as wonderful as ever. It's still the same canonical world, with small (and large) additions that develop and deepen the understanding of the story. Naruto is caring, and Satsuki is the gem of the story, still as sweet, terribly sweet.

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Araxion

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DaoistHJ3Ug1

I say this sincerely, this is one of the best Naruto novels I came across and it hurt my soul when I saw it was deleted, thanks for reposting it.

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Bender_Vip106

What can I say about this plot? First of all, it's interesting to read, the characters are interesting, and the story doesn't get boring. The only negative aspect is that there are some absurd moments, such as how the protagonist received the reward ahead of schedule. However, let's assume that by completing part or half of the task, he will have temporary access to the reward during the task's duration. It's surprising that the author found it challenging to incorporate such a plot element, as it at least covers up some obvious plot holes. Ps: I hope you're reading this, author, and that you'll make changes to the story, specifically to the plot holes I've described. In my opinion, the idea of a temporary reward for completing a task partially is fair, but the reward for completing it completely should be permanent. The temporary reward should remain active as long as the task is active, and I believe this system is fair.

𝐇𝐢, 𝐈 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐎𝐌𝐆 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐅𝐈𝐑𝐄. 𝐅𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐨, 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐦𝐲 𝐛𝐫𝐚𝐢𝐧 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐟𝐮𝐥𝐥-𝐨𝐧 𝐈𝐌𝐀𝐆𝐈𝐍𝐀𝐓𝐈𝐎𝐍 𝐌𝐎𝐃𝐄 𝐈'𝐦 𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐖𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐬, 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜𝐬, 𝐌𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐚 & 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫/𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐀𝐫𝐭. 𝐍𝐨𝐭 𝐠𝐨𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐞 𝐝𝐮𝐝𝐞 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐢𝐧𝐬𝐚𝐧𝐞 𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜 𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐛𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐝𝐨 𝐢𝐭. 𝐍𝐨 𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐭 𝐚𝐥𝐥, 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐢𝐭 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐞 𝐬𝐮𝐩𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐨𝐩𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲. 𝐈𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮'𝐫𝐞 𝐝𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐬𝐞𝐞 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐦𝐲 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤, 𝐡𝐢𝐭 𝐦𝐞 𝐮𝐩 𝐨𝐧 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝 (𝐛𝐞𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐭𝐭_𝐥𝐨𝐥) 𝐨𝐫 𝐈𝐧𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐚𝐦 (𝐞𝐯𝐞_𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞_). 𝐇𝐨𝐩𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐮 𝐬𝐨𝐨𝐧!

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arpan_saha

Nice, this story is awesome. Even my brother and friends read it, it's one of those "what if" moments we wanted to happen. Well two chapters per day isn't that fast but still good.

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Harshal_Barad

thanks bro for the story, I like the plot and character development and funny scenarios of naruto and satsuki. keep it up.

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Umbra_Wolf

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🤯🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟✍️🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 . G-; O.o ;-D S.-t Or¥

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xxsxxexx

bro this ff is hilarious keep it up don't drop it midway. Satsuki is half step being a damn yandere. wth with naruto he wanted to spare third hokage when the time comes. my instict tells me that this ff have a world hopping thingy.

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shadow238

Thanks for the story author 👍 i loved the story development

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A_seeker

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