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There are three great dojutsus considered to be the most powerful in the entire elemental nation.
Soon, everyone will welcome the coming of the 4th greatest dojutsu, and I, as it's weilder shall let them know of its power.
about the photo in the cover.......credits to the owner........ i just copied it online. if you want to take it down pls just pm me thank you...
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hello guys... I'll shamelessly give myself a 5 star... i just wanted to say that i use first person perspective here in this story for it to be immersive. however, i think that i will switch to third person perspective soon, i don't know but i will try it, it may be better, i think..... and i will try to lengthen each chapter because i fell that it is too lacking and feels rushed... so, yeah that's all.. ohh i still want to add that this is my first work and i am not that good in English. so please bear with it. thank you... don't forget to like😉😘
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Not amazing, but certainly not bad. It didn’t really grip me, this is likely due to the writer being new and thus less able to engage the reader. However, the grammar was fine and the pacing thus far is pretty decent. I also enjoy the premise, and thank god for no system or wishes. Will be interesting to see if the author can keep up his writing and make this story into something special.