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A young boy named Riku is born from a mother that is from an ancient clan forgotten by time and a father of one of the last kekkei genkai users that wasn't exterminated by Kirigakure. This young boy hopes to restore both of his parents clans to their former glory in a harsh shinobi world.
Please give constructive criticism as this is my first book and I have bad grammar.
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You shouldnt have let the mc full of hatred and *****. You just make the mc hateful. But overall the story is doable........................................................................