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Very good This translation is far better than all the others that I have seen so far Keep it up Good good good More words. Why do I need more words. More words
NOT A REVIEW SYNOPSIS IT SAYS WIND THUNDER EARTH FIRE NO WATER AND INSTEAD OF THUNDER PIT LIGHTNING IF YOU WANT
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the translation is very good unlike other authors pls keep up the good work ...............................................................................................
Imma read this instead of the other because this translation is like the sun while the other is at home on earth. Thank you for the quality translation! 😍
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The synopsis.... I cant stand it I just have to. The affinities are: Earth Wind Fire Lightning Water Yin Yang Space And then time. There is no "spiritual" affinity. please correct it because my brain can't handle it
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THanks For translating it, there are other translation buT unreadable [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The best-translated version of the novel by far. The only downside is that the others are already so far ahead albeit having a much lower quality in translation. The 5 stars are given based on the translation quality in comparison to others. Keep up the good work though :D.
pretty good book but author-san can you add the tags for the novel. thanks. story is going at a good pace but its still too early to tell. the grammar and spelling however is excellent
the translation is pretty decent... but the updates are really slow... the chapters are ridiculously short as well [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Best translation for this novel out there please keep on translating, this novel is really interesting. I don't see enough time related abilities like this in novels.
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I give it 5 because I enjoy this fanfiction, but the 2 other translations are so bad that it's really difficult to enjoy it. Thks for the good work and good translation ;)
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Naruto: Time control by Gunitlo same with this..... i think u need change novel to translate. ..................................................
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Okay i honestly havent read your story completely but i read two that have the same title and summary from different authors. i just wanted to warn yOu that someone is copying your story but there are some changes. i posted this in all of the reviews for each story because i dont Know the original creator. if you read this thank you.
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I love the secrets and the explanation of the difference between the skills of the different clans in this story,and the perspective of the other characters interacting with mc,so please keep it up I love this story please.
This is an English translation of a Chinese Naruto ff turned World Travel fic. (Not this review may spoil you but I didn't bother checking spoil option) Naruto world arc has more development in terms of mc character and ability while world arcs after that are pretty much mc traveling from world to world learning diff powers as he influence each one. It's a good one while somewhat okay after he's done with his first world. There are more than hundreds chapters raw and is currently at fairy tale arc, do be patient with the translator. Notable points: smart mc, not a bs pokemon harem (just some thots trying hard to get his attention), is a dad but was born using his powers (spoiler) Worlds so far: Naruto, Bleach, Fairy Tale, ??? (Do tell ones I missed or wrongfully added due to my poor memory)
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Great translation, you should add tags if you want this to get more traction. This is leagues over the other versions of this fic on the site.
I didn't read yet but I have one big complain from the synopsis. WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER?
Very good This translation is far better than all the others that I have seen so far Keep it up Good good good More words. Why do I need more words. More words
NOT A REVIEW SYNOPSIS IT SAYS WIND THUNDER EARTH FIRE NO WATER AND INSTEAD OF THUNDER PIT LIGHTNING IF YOU WANT
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the translation is very good unlike other authors pls keep up the good work ...............................................................................................
Imma read this instead of the other because this translation is like the sun while the other is at home on earth. Thank you for the quality translation! 😍
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The synopsis.... I cant stand it I just have to. The affinities are: Earth Wind Fire Lightning Water Yin Yang Space And then time. There is no "spiritual" affinity. please correct it because my brain can't handle it
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THanks For translating it, there are other translation buT unreadable [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The best-translated version of the novel by far. The only downside is that the others are already so far ahead albeit having a much lower quality in translation. The 5 stars are given based on the translation quality in comparison to others. Keep up the good work though :D.
pretty good book but author-san can you add the tags for the novel. thanks. story is going at a good pace but its still too early to tell. the grammar and spelling however is excellent
the translation is pretty decent... but the updates are really slow... the chapters are ridiculously short as well [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I Love this book I Waiting for next chapter __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
Best translation for this novel out there please keep on translating, this novel is really interesting. I don't see enough time related abilities like this in novels.
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I give it 5 because I enjoy this fanfiction, but the 2 other translations are so bad that it's really difficult to enjoy it. Thks for the good work and good translation ;)
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Naruto: Time control by Gunitlo same with this..... i think u need change novel to translate. ..................................................
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Okay i honestly havent read your story completely but i read two that have the same title and summary from different authors. i just wanted to warn yOu that someone is copying your story but there are some changes. i posted this in all of the reviews for each story because i dont Know the original creator. if you read this thank you.
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I love the secrets and the explanation of the difference between the skills of the different clans in this story,and the perspective of the other characters interacting with mc,so please keep it up I love this story please.
This is an English translation of a Chinese Naruto ff turned World Travel fic. (Not this review may spoil you but I didn't bother checking spoil option) Naruto world arc has more development in terms of mc character and ability while world arcs after that are pretty much mc traveling from world to world learning diff powers as he influence each one. It's a good one while somewhat okay after he's done with his first world. There are more than hundreds chapters raw and is currently at fairy tale arc, do be patient with the translator. Notable points: smart mc, not a bs pokemon harem (just some thots trying hard to get his attention), is a dad but was born using his powers (spoiler) Worlds so far: Naruto, Bleach, Fairy Tale, ??? (Do tell ones I missed or wrongfully added due to my poor memory)
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Great translation, you should add tags if you want this to get more traction. This is leagues over the other versions of this fic on the site.
I didn't read yet but I have one big complain from the synopsis. WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER? WHERE'S WATER?