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Hello!! Honestly at first I thought I was not going to like the story for the non-human protagonist but in the end I fell very quickly in love with him and the plot. It does not matter if the author does not know much about the real stories of the characters, that is not why I read it but to read something new that has some relationship with Marvel. So far this is incredible, come to chapter 22 and I can not wait to read more. There are Marvel characters which were not my favorites but in this novel I like them, I loved that I painted Jane as someone really bad. I can only say Good Work! and never leave history by fas. (English is not my mother tongue so sorry if there are grammatical errors or is not understood somewhere)
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The new location for this novel is up and it is a great story. I enjoy the rather realistic storyline even considering that the mc gets a new power or ability every once in a while.
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Author keep practising! You will get better! I am no Wrighter. Unfortunately, i don't have the talent or patience. But i love to Read and i like to incourage you to continue to improve your wrighting! This will be a Very Honest review, fogive me. -First, when a Character/person Dies in Most cases they won't just instantly accept such a thing to happen, in moments like this is a good opportunity to flashback on his past memories, on whom/what he will miss and the regrets he have made. -Second, Characters/People have Feelings and actions and thoughts that you have to discribe to the readers or the flow of the story would seem forced and awkward or rushed. For example, *Opening his eyes all he could see is a blur. He squints his eyes blinking till his vision is clear. Opening them once more he eyes saw tge most exhausted lady hes ever seen. Skin so pale that it was it was board line worying and a shin of sweat and tears on her face for all who could see, however what really confused him was the loving blue eyes looking towards him.* As you can see the actions the character took and what he felt witnessing a woman whom is a complete stranger for the first time. I hope you find this helpful! π
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Just found it yesterday just finished reading what was available and......... it was fantastic.... don't care what others say, said or going to say the author has his own beautiful creation that I would hope to read more chapters of and await for the next page with vigeras enthusiasm for the authors generous gift from his own time.
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I like this story and MC power set my only complaint is how the X-Men are portrayed in this. No offense to the author I love that MC class nightcrawler his little brother and Logan Grampa but I think the way Jean and Beast were portrayed were widely different and MC's interaction with Xavier made it seem like he had a huge problem with mind reading when MC did the same thing to Storm. All in all good story and I'm going to keep reading just wanted to air my grievances.
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Mc too op, few characters in the marvel universe could fight him with any chance to land a hit, let and if they did it would probably have little to no effect anyway. Interactions between characters is pretty crappy, and at points excessively unrealistic.
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The problem with the story is that it to often feels like the MC is just monologuing and talking directly to the reader instead of telling a story. The story idea and background are excellent, its how its written that is the problem. I also don't like how fake and retarded the MC's mother acts. The characters also often simply talk way to much.
this is most highest score i could put for this novel.....interesting story till chapter 26.... highly advised not to read capters 26-27 because MC is very lame and very weak for whatever reason author decided to do it so ....
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I really enjoy the story so far, but i think you should slow down on how quickly your mc grows cause most people make a super op mc and forget all about the story and then drop it or restart losing a bunch of readers. While you don't have that problem yet, if the mc keeps growing at this rate then it might and i really like this story and don't want to see that happen.
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Within the first paragraph I spotted multiple grammar issues,the first chapter is riddle with them,due to this I couldn't get into the story at all.The conversation between character made 0 sense, to all prospective readers with any proficiency in English read the first chapter and you'll understand.
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I was a bit hesitant to start this story to be honest as most of the Mutant MC stories I have come across involve an MC who gains practically god like powers and instantly has amazing control over them or tries to hide everything and become a secret superhero. However I am very glad I did, this MC isnβt too much more powered then a certain popular Xman, no spoilers as to whom I am talking about though you will obviously have a good idea. The charecter, at least so far, uses their abilities and doesnβt try and hide who or what he is. I am very much enjoying this story and to any others who may be hesitant like I was I say give it a shot I was hooked after like the third chapter.
Hello!! Honestly at first I thought I was not going to like the story for the non-human protagonist but in the end I fell very quickly in love with him and the plot. It does not matter if the author does not know much about the real stories of the characters, that is not why I read it but to read something new that has some relationship with Marvel. So far this is incredible, come to chapter 22 and I can not wait to read more. There are Marvel characters which were not my favorites but in this novel I like them, I loved that I painted Jane as someone really bad. I can only say Good Work! and never leave history by fas. (English is not my mother tongue so sorry if there are grammatical errors or is not understood somewhere)
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The new location for this novel is up and it is a great story. I enjoy the rather realistic storyline even considering that the mc gets a new power or ability every once in a while.
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Great story nice mc sorta sorta overpowered. uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cant think of anthing else Fjdduudjdjddjddjj jdhdjejdndhshrjdjdjd hsjdnendndhjsrjdjrjdhdh. Sheens
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Author keep practising! You will get better! I am no Wrighter. Unfortunately, i don't have the talent or patience. But i love to Read and i like to incourage you to continue to improve your wrighting! This will be a Very Honest review, fogive me. -First, when a Character/person Dies in Most cases they won't just instantly accept such a thing to happen, in moments like this is a good opportunity to flashback on his past memories, on whom/what he will miss and the regrets he have made. -Second, Characters/People have Feelings and actions and thoughts that you have to discribe to the readers or the flow of the story would seem forced and awkward or rushed. For example, *Opening his eyes all he could see is a blur. He squints his eyes blinking till his vision is clear. Opening them once more he eyes saw tge most exhausted lady hes ever seen. Skin so pale that it was it was board line worying and a shin of sweat and tears on her face for all who could see, however what really confused him was the loving blue eyes looking towards him.* As you can see the actions the character took and what he felt witnessing a woman whom is a complete stranger for the first time. I hope you find this helpful! π
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Reveal Spoiler Just found it yesterday just finished reading what was available and......... it was fantastic.... don't care what others say, said or going to say the author has his own beautiful creation that I would hope to read more chapters of and await for the next page with vigeras enthusiasm for the authors generous gift from his own time.
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I like this story and MC power set my only complaint is how the X-Men are portrayed in this. No offense to the author I love that MC class nightcrawler his little brother and Logan Grampa but I think the way Jean and Beast were portrayed were widely different and MC's interaction with Xavier made it seem like he had a huge problem with mind reading when MC did the same thing to Storm. All in all good story and I'm going to keep reading just wanted to air my grievances.
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Bro, thanks for the chapter. Teks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniSematkan snippet teks yang disalin agar tidak kedaluwarsa dalam 1 jamGeser klip untuk menghapusnyaSematkan snippet teks yang disalin agar tidak kedaluwarsa dalam 1 jamSematkan snippet teks yang disalin agar tidak kedaluwarsa dalam 1 jamTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniSematkan snippet teks yang disalin agar tidak kedaluwarsa dalam 1 jamGeser klip untuk menghapusnyaGeser klip untuk menghapusnyaSematkan snippet teks yang disalin agar tidak kedaluwarsa dalam 1 jamTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniGeser klip untuk menghapusnyaGeser klip untuk menghapusnyaSematkan snippet teks yang disalin agar tidak kedaluwarsa dalam 1 jam
The problem with the story is that it to often feels like the MC is just monologuing and talking directly to the reader instead of telling a story. The story idea and background are excellent, its how its written that is the problem. I also don't like how fake and retarded the MC's mother acts. The characters also often simply talk way to much.
this is most highest score i could put for this novel.....interesting story till chapter 26.... highly advised not to read capters 26-27 because MC is very lame and very weak for whatever reason author decided to do it so ....
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I really enjoy the story so far, but i think you should slow down on how quickly your mc grows cause most people make a super op mc and forget all about the story and then drop it or restart losing a bunch of readers. While you don't have that problem yet, if the mc keeps growing at this rate then it might and i really like this story and don't want to see that happen.
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Within the first paragraph I spotted multiple grammar issues,the first chapter is riddle with them,due to this I couldn't get into the story at all.The conversation between character made 0 sense, to all prospective readers with any proficiency in English read the first chapter and you'll understand.
English is not my language, so if you understand this comment from Google translator, know that this is the best thing I've read, esntao write more and I accepted my stones
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I was a bit hesitant to start this story to be honest as most of the Mutant MC stories I have come across involve an MC who gains practically god like powers and instantly has amazing control over them or tries to hide everything and become a secret superhero. However I am very glad I did, this MC isnβt too much more powered then a certain popular Xman, no spoilers as to whom I am talking about though you will obviously have a good idea. The charecter, at least so far, uses their abilities and doesnβt try and hide who or what he is. I am very much enjoying this story and to any others who may be hesitant like I was I say give it a shot I was hooked after like the third chapter.